ARHI SS: Dusky Wings ~COMPLETED~

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kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Such a sweet stalker who turned to be a lover who helped to fulfill the dreams of his love. Kushi is one such blessed soul who got a guardian angel.
I liked the base you selected from the Uni to ballet studio.

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MithilaTorr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

that was immensely poetical fabulous mind-blowing stupendous story. You should consider writing seriously. The flow was just right, the story at right pace, scenes all woven together..did I say I love you! 😆👏👏

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603840

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: MithilaTorr
that was immensely poetical fabulous mind-blowing stupendous story. You should consider writing seriously. The flow was just right, the story at right pace, scenes all woven together..did I say I love you! 😆👏👏

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thank you!😳

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

wonderful story it was... really enjoyed reading it...finished the ss in one go...beautiful :)

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Very nice story. Enjoyed it.

Edited by msmarple - 11 years ago

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Srilatha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

There are no words to say . Such a beautiful SS . I really enjoyed reading it .

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amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

dear zara ... after paper planes i read this and i'm overjoyed at having read such a beautiful story...lovely i have no other words to say...thanx for such a joyous SS...wishing u to continue writing and would definitely want to read more of ur SS 😳

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

^^^Thank you for recommending this beautiful journey of Dusky Wings to me Amu! <3

I never imagined the terrifying concept of being stalked and someone knowing your every single move would be so heartwarmingly appealing Zara. This SS grabbed my me from the first chapter, loved the very unique way it is written in the form of Khushi's memories.

While you had my heart breaking for Khushi and the things she endured in her life, you had me impressed by her courage and determination to turn her life around and make her bua ji's dream come true. And to have Arnav look out for her discreetly from the moment that he follows her, to the phone calls, to him sending her roses in a basket for making her cry, to him making life easy and removing every hurdle from Khushi's way! He was basically just what the doctor prescribed for Khushi.

Their connection is just exquisite all the way through, the way you made their first kiss happen was passionate and beautiful. Then you took me by surprise in the end, while I had myself convinced that Arnav maybe suffering from some chronic disease and hence he is keeping his distance. I was so pleasantly surprised to witness what transpired next. Their confrontation in the end was handled remarkably well and the ending was even better with Arnav finally giving in and being with the object of his affections! Thank you for this special and unique journey Z!

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603840

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshix144
^^^Thank you for recommending this beautiful journey of Dusky Wings to me Amu! <3

I never imagined the terrifying concept of being stalked and someone knowing your every single move would be so heartwarmingly appealing Zara. This SS grabbed my me from the first chapter, loved the very unique way it is written in the form of Khushi's memories. Thanks so much for liking the new style of writing for me. 😳

While you had my heart breaking for Khushi and the things she endured in her life, you had me impressed by her courage and determination to turn her life around and make her bua ji's dream come true. And to have Arnav look out for her discreetly from the moment that he follows her, to the phone calls, to him sending her roses in a basket for making her cry, to him making life easy and removing every hurdle from Khushi's way! He was basically just what the doctor prescribed for Khushi. Arnav and khushi's relationship is very unique in this story.Glad you feel they complement each other😃

Their connection is just exquisite all the way through, the way you made their first kiss happen was passionate and beautiful. Then you took me by surprise in the end, while I had myself convinced that Arnav maybe suffering from some chronic disease and hence he is keeping his distance. I was so pleasantly surprised to witness what transpired next. Their confrontation in the end was handled remarkably well and the ending was even better with Arnav finally giving in and being with the object of his affections! Thank you for this special and unique journey Z! Thank you so much for loving this story. I hope my other love storys are to your liking too.😳

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#780

^^ Aww thank you so much Z, you can definitely add me to your fan list! I have bookmarked your index and will now play catch up with your other wonderful work! :=)