ARHI SS: Dusky Wings ~COMPLETED~ - Page 79

Originally posted by: Arshix144

^^^Thank you for recommending this beautiful journey of Dusky Wings to me Amu! <3

I never imagined the terrifying concept of being stalked and someone knowing your every single move would be so heartwarmingly appealing Zara. This SS grabbed my me from the first chapter, loved the very unique way it is written in the form of Khushi's memories.

While you had my heart breaking for Khushi and the things she endured in her life, you had me impressed by her courage and determination to turn her life around and make her bua ji's dream come true. And to have Arnav look out for her discreetly from the moment that he follows her, to the phone calls, to him sending her roses in a basket for making her cry, to him making life easy and removing every hurdle from Khushi's way! He was basically just what the doctor prescribed for Khushi.

Their connection is just exquisite all the way through, the way you made their first kiss happen was passionate and beautiful. Then you took me by surprise in the end, while I had myself convinced that Arnav maybe suffering from some chronic disease and hence he is keeping his distance. I was so pleasantly surprised to witness what transpired next. Their confrontation in the end was handled remarkably well and the ending was even better with Arnav finally giving in and being with the object of his affections! Thank you for this special and unique journey Z!

Originally posted by: amus5

i knew it Mini , you'll definitely love it as must as i loved reading this.Infact i have become a fan of Zara's writings (though i must say in FF " hierarchy" i'm stuck at one point and unable to move on to read it further as it feels quite terrifying - but still i'm conditioning my mind to be strong to cross over that situation) such is the power of her writing ... and Mini i knew how beautifully u put words to ur thoughts and i always find it a pleasure to read them infact i can say that this is one of my motives to recommend stories to u just to read ur take on them 😉

reading through ur comment i simply walked down the memory lane to rejoice on this SS

thanx to u Zara for this lovely story 😃

any chnce of making a sequel😳😳

Zara Seriously you have got me hooked to your stories

pheww finally i am done with this story, sorry for being late i didn't get enough time to read :p i am not much acive now adays for reading or writing.

back to story.

zara...women you didn't lost your charm of attracting readers to your work.
i just loved it. It was fabulous.
secret admirer Arnav was amazing.
I don't know why but i could see few of things i saw in this Khushi reminds me of you. 😛
especially that not taking credit thing 😆
dresses were perfect, hair style were beautiful,
i liked your writing style.
this was so cute that Arnav look after her in all ways, solved her problems, if its job, if its rent, if it dress, protecting her from dangerous people, everything... was fabulous i really loved this Arnav. He is so damn caring.
khushi she is very sweet simple here. her talking to buaji...lol i thought at first buaji is in this story...Hay rey Nk how will she speak it in French 😆
keep writing because we adore you :)

Love
sandy sis

Originally posted by: .Sandy.

pheww finally i am done with this story, sorry for being late i didn't get enough time to read :p i am not much acive now adays for reading or writing.

back to story.

zara...women you didn't lost your charm of attracting readers to your work.
i just loved it. It was fabulous.
secret admirer Arnav was amazing.
I don't know why but i could see few of things i saw in this Khushi reminds me of you. 😛
especially that not taking credit thing 😆
dresses were perfect, hair style were beautiful,
i liked your writing style.
this was so cute that Arnav look after her in all ways, solved her problems, if its job, if its rent, if it dress, protecting her from dangerous people, everything... was fabulous i really loved this Arnav. He is so damn caring.
khushi she is very sweet simple here. her talking to buaji...lol i thought at first buaji is in this story...Hay rey Nk how will she speak it in French 😆
keep writing because we adore you :)

Love
sandy sis

I have 1 word for this story and you OUTSTANDING it was the most beautifully written story ever loved it and a great ending a promise for life am captured seriously It may sound wierd but I wish I had someone like arnav lol and well portrayed story

What a beautiful story and completely different as usual...absolutely LOVED IT!!! :)

awesome...

ANOTHER SUPERB WRITING FROM YOU...CANT STOP TAKING A LOOK AT ALL...