ARHI SS: Dusky Wings ~COMPLETED~ - Page 76

Originally posted by: s-576

beautiful...magnifique... thanks very much!😳

absolutely poetic in a romantic sense...even though I am not that much of a fan of Ballet dancing...but still...I loved it... very glad

and your French was quite spot on...do you speak the language as well or did you use the dictionary or interpreter software?? some I knew from my own knowledge but some i did use google translator😳😆

French is the language of love...ahhh so poetic...and Paris, ahh absolutely meant for romance only...however seeing our Fashion designer ASR in the role of a critic did set me back, but hey, its a story, and it can go whichever way... 😆 Arnav as a scary critic i took from ratatouille where theres that scary critic😆

And for a moment there, I thought Khushi had lost her marbles...I mean seriously, talking to a pretend alive Buaji...hai rey Nandkishore, ee kya zamaana aa gaya hai... lol Khushi has her own ways to get through😊

I mean I know people do talk to themselves when they are alone, you know as in speaking out loud... but knowing at the end that Khushi was pretty much in her usual Sanka Devi Avatar...got me rolling...so at the end of it...it is an SS...so the whole story was told in a condensed format...but still... it was touching...I want friends like Khushi's right now, as in Olivia & Rosita...right now *pouting* Yep it's only an ss as I wanted this love story in it's purest form. not extended with all the typical wedding and babies etc, cuz you guys can imagine it yourselves😆😉

this was indeed a light hearted romance, with its shades of depth ingrained into the SS...I loved reading it...thanks for writing it pleasure😳

And once again, I am glad that I am reading it after it was completed, and not while it was being written...hell woman...the whole waiting and checking for an update would have certainly rendered me insane...lol lol i can understand

however I wouldn't recommend you to publish this one...know why?

because, when reading as in a published version, people would have asked questions like...And then what happened?"...or, "No, No, No...you CAN'T end this story hear, I wan't more details"..."what happened to Arnav's critic career after that..did he retire as well since Khushi wasn't there anymore"...and bla bla bla... lol very true

lol...see the thing is...people would really love this story, and hence they would not let you stop writing...lol...have you read Stephen Kings "Misery"...now you wouldn't want to be in that Author's shoe would you...😆 no i haven't read his books. but i'll take your words for it😉

so dear, I loved this story just as much as the other one...but don't publish this SS, even if you do get the offer...otherwise one crazed fan might...buahahaha... 😈

lol... take care

Hey I have read your, Vines with Thorns, Price of Freedom, Dusky Wings...is there any other completed ones??? its all on my index

And you listen missy...don't you dare give me one of those fabulous FFs which has not yet been completed...I don't like waiting in torture for an update...got it?...all set? goood...now tell me

do you have any other completed FFs or SSs????