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Chapter 15

Beautiful update.👏👏👏 How do you do this Rachel? I don't know how to explain it. Your story has a touch of innocence in it and it's not because there are flashbacks of Arnav and Khushi's childhood or the orphanage kids. Arnav, Khushi, Dadi, RK are good people and you just know how bring out the essence of these characters perfectly. You never go overboard, you never make them flawless and you keep it real. I can feel the warmth of these characters and it feels good.

Chapter 16

So the person who spotted them was mami and she's here to create trouble. I had a feeling it would either be Naina or Manorama. I feel the Pandit's are more stuck-up compared to Raizada's. Naina seems to be torn. She is happy that Khushi has positively influenced Arnav but she firmly believes they wouldn't cross they wouldn't boundaries set by society. It's like she is trying hard to convince herself it wouldn't happen, but her subconscious mind feels otherwise.

Chapter 17

Cupid Dadi shoots her arrows again and it hits the target.😃 I just adore Dadi's bond with Arnav and Khushi. Dadi is just too cool...vintage car... lol. 👍🏼

I am feeling so distressed for Khushi. Poor girl, how much she had been holding inside her for the fifteen years?😭 She had no one talk to, no one to share her feelings, no one celebrate her birthdays with the way a girl of age would want to. She had Dadi who became her friend, but she couldn't share everything with her. Although Buaji loves her, I think she was overcome by her responsibilities and struggles; she couldn't give Khushi the emotional support she needed at that age.

The flashback was so cute. How did Kukku taste the air? 😲😆 Aww...Annyav lied again to make his Kukku happy. 😃 When I read the childhood scenes, I wish I had someone like Annyav in my childhood. 😳

Arnav brought earrings for her. But she wouldn't except it now, would she? He'll have to keep it to himself to give it to her at a later time.

Arnav is mesmerized to see Khushi a saree and you've beautifully narrated the awareness. He has been noticing her for a while now but for the time first he consciously notices her as a woman he feels drawn too.

I feel Arnav started bridging the gap at the restaurant right at the moment Khushi felt hesitant to enter and he held her firmly and walked to their table. If stepping out in the rain was stepping into her world, taking her to restaurant and making her comfortable was welcoming her into his world. The understanding he showed that she would be comfortable at the private section, the way he taught her how to use the fork and fed her...it was heartwarming to read.

The kiss or rather the three kisses were out of this world. Beautifully written. 👏👏👏 She's going to give him the goodbye kiss...🥺

Lovely song. ⭐️

Enjoy your break.😃