a new arhi ss making things right08/09

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Hello guys

Im back with the new SS

The story starts when dadi accusing khusis charcter and anjali insisting to bring shyam back

The beginning and the story contains lot of monologues.

And the parts will also have the whole story

Lets us start with some prologue

The first monologue of our great Hero

ASR; Arnav Singh Raizada

Im the person with a strong and hard heart everything will go according to my plan..nothing can change

I lost my father and I hate him to the core due to the implusive mistake h e had done he cheated his wife he had destroyed my mother s life and he also destroyed mine and my di

I owed on that daywhen my I lost my mother .

I cannot forget that day when I saw the body.down on earth with bullet shot , the shehanai music, the happiness in my face as I m mercilessy teasing my sister ,her blushing face, the marriage preparations, my dadi's proud face. Just gone when I listened the sound of piercing the forhead of my mother whom I used to caress whe n I used to sleepI used to kiss good night, there stood the person with a strong face the idoil the name which including my name . he is avinash malik

I cannot listen anythingwhite cloth covered my mothers body.

Lot of people buzzling,lot of noises,lot of disturbances but nothing can getting out my hears

Words

I love that woman I cannot live without her, I cannot love u, I cannot be with u, I m sorry.

That day.he vowed himself he will never see the face of tha t ma n he will hate him through out his life and he will be never existed for him..

That day he mentally transformed himself from arnav malik to arnav singh raizada.

And he did not attend the funeral .to his father as he is died on same day.he did n's eem to be disturbed

His chacha throw him out of the mansion.

And the olderly lady his nani got him to the house

The helplessness in the eyes of old woman the shrubbery mami.given the ornaments and th e helplessness sof awoman his dithesear e exist for them

He worked hard he brought the wealth,he had become the master

He had transformed into a ruthless,arrogant,and stone hearted person//.

But he belived in one person

His di

What is happened.he wanted to give his happiness to his di, even he tend to destroy the most innocent girls life which had stood , against his trantums ,his hatredness, who had stood beside him

Brought the old arnav back which he successfully buried inside,

And he had destroyed the happiness of that innocent butterfly for his sister.

But today she choosen his husband ,infront of him

She accused him that he choosen her more than his sister

No he even.taken all the accusations insideto give her the happiness

And dadi.who never turned her face..when they left.who refused to see the truth

Now his sister believes her dadi more than himself..

Anmd wanted that scumbag into his life who had crushed his loving sister along with the love life of him.

He is a monster but still she wants her

Yes di.

I will give,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,him to u.

But one thing di.this time I will make sure u will get what ever ur decisionI nwill make sure u will wonur unbworthy husband but ur going t o loose ur chote

This time I will readyu for this new destiny..

U want to give love to that pathetic husband of urs

And I will give all my love to my love life ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I will make sure I redeem all the mistakes , and I will make sur e I will all theb happiness to my khushi.

Now it is time for some action

Let us goASR..right now u will be Arnav for only one person ur wife and /////////////ASR for the whole world including ur di.

That dadi

Everyone shocked to the core seeing the furious person in front of their eyes
yes the ruthless ASR is back

Ur accusing dadi for my marriage with khusiwithout rituals ..and u made such a ruckus for this

And I had found the solution for this .

He came down by looking the due shaped eyes which are filled with tears in her eyeshe cannot stand taking a deep breath he said

Im going to marry khushi with all the rituals, and customs,

He had just ignored the shocked expressions of his family members including his di..sad expressions.

He turned and this is going to happen in next 7 days

Yes after 7 days his contract is going to complete and he is going to remarry his love to give her the happiness she deserves.

Dadi started to speech

He turned I didn't finish it dadi

And after that I had taken the decision that im going to bring shyam manohar jha into this housebut..

After finishing the marriageit is exactly after 10 days when I finish my honey moon with my duely wed wife

With that not giving a glance..of any one of the faces,.

He turned to this blue tooth.

And said aman fix a appointment with delhis best wedding planner right now within a hour

And turned back to his family.

PayalakashI want u both to accompain..to buaji's house a sur going to ask khushi's hand for meas ur the elder son in law of that house.

Ok..mami hello hai bye bye.arnav beta.

Shhm mami I know u basically don't like khushi but all the elders in this family are busy to settle in someother life..he gave a look at anjali and nani

And why I choose akash and payal because I and khushi helped them to unite it is time to take the turn

And turn back to NK who forgot.to put chips back to the mouth..

And said NK don't u help ur best friend in her wedding.

NK came into senses how course nanav anything u order man anything for u and for lovely khushiji.

With that he took the hand of khushi who is still I n the shockand walked away from the door.following behind by akash and payal

Where nk suddenly shouted baadi baadi.nanav and khushi ji ke..

Where ASR turned back and corrected .shaadi NK it is shaadi.turned to meet the eyes of his wife.oops would be wife and gave her a famous wink which only she can receive.

A

Ll the house leaving a two fumi nng personsand two joyfull person and one totally confused..person..

Two fuming persons dadi and mami

Two happy people nani and NK

And one confused person.anjali.

Guys this is first part

Wait for second

This will show u a new fac e of ASR I want ASR to be like this

He should emotionjs but in his own way

This is bit mature

Romantic scenes betweenarnav and khushi

Roles:Arnav will be so funny and romantic mood only with khushi

And strong ASR for all.and even for Shyam manohar Jha.and also Anjali Jha..

And for DAdi

Khushi as sanka devi for all

Payal will be her sister and akash will be ASR brother.

And NK as usual.

Each one will be their own monologues and it will gives all the inputs that required;
lot of happy moments, serious moments and also tough moments.



Part 2

Khushi stood there slient

Things are not going according to the style

She is sitting at buajis terrace.instead of routine sanka devi counting stars or describing the latest salmaan khan movie to the parents ie stars

She is just thinking she is not in a mood of jelabis also because it is not a confusion even her jelabis are not helping

She is thinking

The morning events

The ruthless ASR is back

She seen the double faces lot oftimes even the jelabis are donel

The first meeting when she accidently fallen in to the arms the chocolate brown eyes the look..

She simply hated that look.

And the mannat chabi someother thing..may be pain, hatred ness,

When she crashed intohis car.his ego and pride..

Hisoffice mocking eyes

And at guest house his eyes are pain and concern for her

Lot of things had changed and along with this she alson noticed some few things.

And most important fact the love and concern for his sister that she is the first and last person in this earth.

How can he talk to her like that ///

She loved arnav in aSR which hideinside himunder the anger..

That loved arnav which brought channas for her

Which hugged her on birthday of his mother

Pain-a boy who lost mother at his earlier state

Pain again worried for sister..and can anything to do for her happiness the trust for that person

She is in love with all the personaa of him.\

He will be always angry khadoos lard governer who will alwaystry tonwwin overand make others to come to his feeet

And a loyablee family member

Who teases her mercilessly for her upcoming suhaag raat

But one thing is missing.

There is someother thing.

What

Suddenly she got something

Next morning..

Shanti bhavan is silent..

Yes.bcause Anjali is in her room////////////

She also noticed the chnge behavior.

He is not behaved like her chote..not looking a t anyone except nanihe is behavinglike..she is not existed for him

Meantime ASR in his cabin..\

He called buaji , and amma,and alsoakash and payal at someother place bcause he knows his sanka devi and her tremendous plans no where he can't take risk.she is selfless girl.that time she is in shock to respond but after that she will respond and she will not ready ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And he don't want any family drama nowhe need to solve the problem, not creating one

Indeed she will be a problem but sheis his life and cannot let her go..

After giving the details except marriage contract

He tooka positive reply from themand understanding the gravity of the situation..and his opinion and regarding shutting mouth of dadi and others.

He finally made his famous convienent(emotional deal) got the fruitful ..result

They agreed to his deal

Now it is turned to back..to find running, rushinghis wife to his room..

Trying to control, anger,sadness,whatever

Saying

Arnavji muje apse baat karni hay.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrates on new ss
lovely one dear
thanx for the pm
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nice story line update soon
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good story line.i really want arnav to react like this when anjali choose shyaam back in Rm.
do continue
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Hay guys this is a little bit monologue

So pink will be khushi

And blue will b e arnav

Khushi:shockedto see him the business attire and the shocking face…………………….why should h e good in everything from dressing style to handsome……………………just shut up khushi came here totalk not drool over him……………………………

Arnav:ohboy what a girl…………………………so sexy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,and hot in that color and th e hestiantt why she always make difficult for me……………………..what should I do she barg into me like that and man how ca n I control it………………………………..indeed the decision of SR came into mind……………he cannot sleep…..how cann.literaaly missing the sanka devi her tortuous sleep constant blickering …..afteer emotional drama such huge dialog not his type.just cannot shut her up in his style like taking her lips.and…………………………arnav control this is not the tiem………….she is in angry and she looks more pretty and hot……..just shut up arnav I want asr now…………………

ASR :not possible u only told na for khushi only arnav tube light…………

Not noticing the phone buzzed in.

He picked it up..and said ok I will come Inn just on e hour…….

Controlling himself and said what khusi……………………………

Khushii.jee kya…………………….woh hum,.khushi speak something………………………………………..say somehtig what why my toungue tied………all her practice session thrown into garbage…………………she looked helpless suddenly tears are coming onn to it……………………………………..

That it

Asr can see anything but that pearls coming from that eyes …

Swtiched on to arnav mode came to her and hugged her………………..a

And said in his husky voice khusi……………………………………………..

Khsuhi what happened ur crying I know it is a rush and it is little bit fast but remember……………….i cannot tolerate daadis accusing words regarding charcter and insults thrown on u

Im repenting everytim e I thrown on u

I repent single dam mistake I done with u and made my self clear that I will give u double amount of happiness which dreamed off………………

But I cannot stand against marriage and belif as u belive it with bottom of ur heart and ur not a girl.ur pure gem..annd ur morals and principals are strong and how u changed the ultra moder n lavavanya to change her views…………………………..

And seeing her shocked face………………………………….

He want to tease he said by the way……..ASR…………………………ever looses his deal…but this is his life deal how can he let that go…………….

He said by hugging her and inhale the sweet smell of hers……………………

But sanka devi is sanka devi.right she did n't notice in hurry that this is all th e confession part……………………………….she is not in mood if it is so this is not sannka devi right she nooded and said

Arnav ji mein daadi k e baato ka yaa hamere shaadi ke baaremen baat karnee k e liye balki……aap ne di se yesi baat kyon kiya

Haa who uiss lafunge innsaan ko manatee hay aur unke side lerahee di nadaan hay bhole hay.lekin aap toh ASR ho naa aap samaj saketh hay.aur unse pyaar se baat karsakthe hay naa…………………………..unke dil dukanee par kyon tulahuwe hay mein apke iss roop se wakaif uu par who nahiil………………..

Now it stur n arnnav to shocke what this girl made up.of what good sins he donne to get her,just one sec she couldnot think of her…………………

He utmost confessed her………………………………………….and she is thinking of his sister s happinenss and came to fight with me that why I m rude with his sister……..

Yes his sister happiness is utmost that doesn't means he only think of that infact his groofy behavior and over protecti ves had evenly destroyed her but see………………………..she is…..

He quickly hugged herrr and said

Khushi di is not behaving like a matured and adult di who always car ee for my and family happiness she is stubborn ….she is behaving like a love struck teenager not looking anything other than that scum bag.and he is using it ias a weapon now this is a limit.i need to change.i cannot just agree each and every dam demand if she is behaving like a kid I need to be strong fathere who is not bending.for her demands…………..and for that I nneed tob ehave I n that way………………………………………………………………..

And let me do that………………….

I mind ……oh asr this is khushi and she is equally stubborn and strong mind just like u……………………..now do something………………………………like distraction……………………wow good idea……………..

Oh khsui this is arnavji he has answer to every question remember he will always do what is the best.but still u need to convince him if h is asr then ur kkgsr………………………..as the thoughts suddenly flown out of thee window as she found herself cornered a the office door and the smirk written arnavji towering her and the chocolate orbs meeting her honey orbs the two hand either side like trapped …………..and a hot kiss onn her right cheek.followed by another to the left.she is in the world…………………..

Is th e thinning he wanted when she entered into his room………………

Boy the soft cheeks the pettle waist oh his hands the lovely eyes……………………………..and he is totally out of control but need to b control it is for teasing an d distracting.i kno w my effect the blush o n her face…………………….and shocked eyes to humble………and to lost………………………………..

Boy control.control mann

The last thinning hes aw his khushi running from the room which blushed face………..

And arnav with a smil e on his face……………………….

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Hey congo 4 new SS well done nice update update sooon n plz pm me also!!
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On th e other hand

Khushi is wondering the new side of asr

Lovely duvely arnvji and temporarly forgetting ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,the villan shyam a mamnd crying heroine anjaliji.

I n mean time asr got the information regarding shyam and he has full eye on him.

And he also talk to doctor regarding his sister condition and he also worried for herr

But this is no t the time he enquired hari prakash regarding the health condition and payal informed that she is taking care of Anjali as the medicine she is taking regularly.

He quickly open the drawer and the papers

Im sorry maa I m doing for di' happ iness and she is not listening………….

I need to do some thing fast…………….

And he called and said I want a detail report on him what he is doing an d everything and also connect me to the head of the hram wher e my indadi is stayg the visitors listand everything…

He called aman and said is everything is ready

And in the evening few men dressed in formals enter the gm…………..and gthey starting decorating the gm and buaji is riunning around along with sashi isnlooking where is garima is running…………………………..

Where as sanka devi asked what Is going she replied that all the raizada are coming for her shagun………………………

She is shocked did anjaliji is coming.

They didn't n replyu

Next morning asr is getting readyt even all people are roaming around where Anjali is coming down and asked nk

He replied tody is gagan for khushiji

Gagan nahii shagun …………………………………..the asr replied everyone turned to find the lion is coming hisown from stairs……………………………in his business suit and blue tooth

Where akasha nd payal are gettingready.

Then manorama came down and see nani isngetting ready…………

Then all are going without taking me…………………….sasumaa…..my only nephew wedding I cant come this is notn good she started cryin g where mamaji came and said stop crying and get ready uir makeupwa takes time…………….

The n everyone smiled wheremanorama ran into hisroom

Anjali looked shocked and gave qa look to dadi……………….

And she came down……..chote………………………………..apko yesa kyon laga .ke mein apoke khushi……………………………………………oo meis shamil nahii honge hamere .chote ke shaadi aur hum yesi nahii reh rahsakte.hum apne didi hone ka pharz se bahar nahii jaa sakthe

With that she said chote

Where asr in his voice not now di

Chote hum jaante hay ke aap humse naraaz hay lekin hum kabhi tumko apne bhai nahii balke beta manta hay..

Isliya kyaa hum apke khushoo mein shamil nahii ho sakte hay

Arnav try to be softbut seeing dadis face he turned to stun and said……………………………ok u can come di..

And the n dadi popped in and asked how come dulha come for his own shagun

What I can't come ridiculous

Yes chote aap shagun mein nahii aasakte…………

With that ………………………………………

The face fell.

And the family moved to gupta hoiuse

Where kushi is dressed in red and marron dress the same in the serial………and madumati and garima welcomed them

And they all seated.

Hello hi bye bye we came for sh\agun for phati saadi I mean khushi

She got feared for the roar of asr………….

Khushi smiled and cam e with tea tray………………

And manorama gave her jewellery

And Anjali came and she also gave her the jewellery

Khushi face fell……but smile at di.

Anjali became soft but she keepmon looking at khusi

Everyone had sweets………………………..just then…………………….

Shetook blessings

I think the shagun is finished so I can come right

All turn their heads to see

Asr at the door

Yes nanav u can come bagun is over

Not bagun shagun,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,asr cam e in with the eye lock session with khushi where khushiis read remembering the previous office scene,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Time for nextstep ……..arnav smirked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Arnav asked going near to khushi

So whereare we………………………

Where khusi still inshock where the ASR dragged her to the room ofcourse in a sweet way

Next.

Arnav ji……she is blushing too hard…

She don't know how to react sometimes.nervous and sometimes ……blushing hersanka is increasing………………………

On the other hand naanav and romantic this is not going……………………………

Saying nk wsith another chip s packet………………………..

And anrav whispered khushi breathe…………….

Hay devimayya tell him to stop whispering lot of butterflies ,…………..even jilebis will not help in this matter the acidity.and I will die of something………I don't want to die

Arnav stop bothering devimayya for simple things………………….and don't make it habbit because everytime I will talk to u like and I will…..

His hand coming to her waist and make her to look into his eyes

There is something different in his eyes something..she never seen.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The chocolate brown eyes filled with……………………..passion……………desire everything she lost not noticing that all the elders in the hall are discussing .

And nani gave the m message that there are going to meet at rokha rasamw hich is going to held on shantivan…………………………..

Anjali surprised the events because none of gupta family are in good mood……………..

she felt thery are indeed good people………………………………….

Then why they will tell lies

Shyam is good person…………………………and they are not wealthy also…………

And khushi she knows better.
she knows there is something between her chote and khsui….

The fight…………………

The anger.

The eyelock.they forget the world.

Sheindeed want khushi as her bhabi……..

But what everything is wrong.

Why her shyam ji will tell lies.

She is confused.

Nani felt anjalis behavior and they quickly bid off ………………………

After sometime aman gve the call…………………….Asr Replied I will be there

With that he stromed off giving a kiss to khushi on her cheek.

Making her forget.everything…………………

After sometime payal came into her room

Jiji hum e samaj mein nahii araha….

Pagal………………………..jo kuch honraha hay na teek ho ra hay…………….

Sab log tere khusi or tere balidaan ko nbhool gay a hay

Ab sab kuch accha hi hoga………………..

Haa Anjali ji parishaan hay lekin arnavji sab kuch teek karenge.

Tu ab bus doosoro ke liye nahii balki apni leye sochlo……………………………….

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At the night ASR is looking a tfilees

So that means Shyam met dadi in orphanage and she indeed came to help him

Maa why she always takes the wrong sid e and support wrong people

Ok if she is decided then so i

Suddenly his phone ring it is his sanka devi

He smiled…….he know what is bothering her………………..

Arnavi ji her voic

He didn't reply

Arnav ji

Arnav ji kuch bol kyon nahi rah hay

Hay devimayya huwa kya hay ubee

Kahi unki sugar levels kam hogaya kya

Kahi unoonne davayaa lena bhool gayee kya

Aaj kal dib hi parishaan hay koi toh nahii hay uss laad governor ke khayal rake keliye mei toh nahii jaa saktha ………….dadi ji hay waha pe

Hey devimayya kya karun by that time she ismovig round…………………………………..

Where as Arnav enjoying her chiding……………………he smiled how much she cares for him…………………………..

He said khushi I na husky voice

Arav ji……….

Khushi..please ……………………..,mere kaam mat badavo……………..ab itne jaldi…………………………gupta house ke flooring change karnekeeliye koi raaji ahii honge

Gupta hous e keee flooring kyon arnavji………………………..

Jis tarah se tum parade kar rah e ho nna khushi……………………………………

Isliye …………………………..

Arnavji…………….

Hee smiled and said im fine……………………………………………..

Agar itn e miss karrah e ho muje toh yaha pe ajavoo………………………………….kyonki meine n e jo subha imcompletee ly choda huwa kaam katam karungaa……..

Yaa abhi bbolo toh mein ajavoo//////////////////

He said ina very husky manner………….

Khushi suddenly remember the morning kiss incident…………………………

Arnav ji good night bolnekeliye phonee kiya tha

She said good night and he wished good ight………….

He keept the phone and said h smiled and he remembered her blushed smile.annd said pagal………………….

At that time anjali looked at him…………………………………

He is different with others except khushi………………………………………………

On the othe r hand

What u ca't arrange it what do u mean by that I did't have money

Im dam need of moneey/

Sir ASR had increased the security at the gupta house and also…………….at Rm.it is very difficult to get inside…even all are at one place…………………………………

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