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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
congrats for the 4th thread.
you story deserves more threads. even if it reaches 100 and more, we will be happy.
thanks for the update. such a cute scene between manvi and virat.
waiting to know virat's surprise.
plz next update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranganga

congrats for the 4th thread.
you story deserves more threads. even if it reaches 100 and more, we will be happy.
thanks for the update. such a cute scene between manvi and virat.
waiting to know virat's surprise.
plz next update soon


thank u so much dear...
Its mean a lot for me...
I m updating today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-151
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Maanvi stood up from chair nd go inside wasroom for change..she feel little dizzy bt she ignore..she come in room after change holding her head in her hand..she feel like fall anytime..she looked around for virat bt he was still not returned from kitchen..she slowly walked towards bed..just then virat entered in room nd saw her walking towards bed..he get worried to see her condition..he imigeatly put glass of milk on table nd rush towards her..
She still feeling little weak..se reached at bed nd abt to sit on bed bt she loose her balance nd abt to fall on other side bt before she fall..he reached near her nd caught her in his arms..
V-maanvi..he worriedly call her..she imigeatly opened her eyes her eyes nd looked at him..
V-make her sit on bed nd also sit in front of her..cupped her face with one hand-maanvi..tum thik ho?..yu achanak se ye..tum lat jao main Dr ko call karta hu..he said worriedly nd abt to move from there bt she stop him nd hold his hand..
M-virat..main thik hu..
V-lekin abhi tum..
M-kuch nahi hua..abhi abhi hospital se aai hu weakness to hogi naa?
V-haa..pr main koi chance nahi lena chahta..ek baar Dr ko bula lete hai..
M-relax virat..maine kaha na main thik hu..bas meri medicines dedo..phir dekhna main subah tak bilkul thik ho jaungi..
V-pakka?
M-nodded in yes..
V-achchha thik hai tum let jao..main medicine lata hu..
He stood up from bed nd make her rest on bed..
He bring her medicine nd milk..nd gve to her..
After all this..he went for change nd with in minit he come out after change nd joint her on bed..
He switch off the lights nd turned towards her..as he covered her with blanket she pulled her self close to him nd hugged him..she place her head on his chest nd wrap her hands around his waist..
He wrapped his arms around her back nd pulled her close to him nd rest his chin on her head..
M-virat..
V-humm..
M-ek baat karni thi..agr tum bura nahi mano to..
V-get worried..bt still hugging her close-kya?
M-woh..ab sab thik ho gaya hai to kya sab pahele jaise mahi ho sakta?..mtlab sab kuch..jaise pahele tha..hum..humara parivaar..aur tum bhi..mere pahele vale virat..mere partner..plz..
V-now he get why she get abt to fait again..she starts taking stress..she worried for his changing behavior..nd yes she was right..he admitted that he changed a lot..no matter how he hide from her bt she can read his all nd every actions..no one can understand him batter then her..
His chain of thought broke by her..
M-bolona virat..?..plz naraz mat hona..
V-looked down nd move his hand towards her hair-smile-nahi..main naraz nahi hu..thik hai..ab sab pahele jaise hoga..lekin..
M-lekin kya?..she said with looking at him..
V-placing her hairs behind her ear..smile-ab mujhe bhi to meri purani maanvi vapish chahiye..bahot ho gaya rona dhona..tension vantion..ab only smile nd happiness..promis?
M-smile widly-promis..
Nd hugged him..he also hugged her tightly nd kissed on her hair..
V-ab chalo bahot bate ho gai..ab so jao..
Maanvi just nodded happily nd hide her face in his chest..he cover them properly nd fall in sleep in coming few minutes..
Next morning..
Maanvi sat on small table in front of mirror nd wearing her hearings nd sindoor also..when virat shouted from door..
V-maanvi..kya kar rahi ho..kitna time..looking out from room..
M-virat bas ho gaya..
Virat saw everything was prepared nd get ready as he thought..he stepped back nd turned towards maanvi..
He smiled to see her feeling her mang..like he saw on first day of there marriage..
He walked near her..
She get ready nd look herself in mirror..
M-ho gaya..she take breath nd just stood up from table nd abt to turned when she get surprise..he come in front of her nd picked her up in his arm carefully..
M-surprisely-virat..nd hold his neck..-kya kar rahe ho?..ab main itni bhi weak nahi hu..ki chal k breakfast k liye nahi ja sakti..
V-smile-ha to..kya tumhe uthane k liye tumhara weak hona jaruri hai..meri wife ho aur ab to mere hone vale baby ki mamma so..mera to hak banta hai..he said with raising his eyebrows..
M-blush lightly-kya baat hai?..abhi thodi Der pahele to niche breakfast pr jane k liye chilla rahe the..aur abhi bada romence yaad aa raha hai..ab bhook nahi lag rahi?..she said with wrapping her hands around his neck properly..
V-smirked nd pull her close near his face..he also bent little-tumne hi to kaha tha purana virat chahiye?..to ab Mrs.virat aapko isi se kam chalana padega..he said with rubbing his nose with her..
She smiled nd blush..
M-sudhoge nahi tum..
V-naah..bilkul bhi nahi..
M-ab chale?
V-kaha?
M-pussing him back-jiske liye itna chilla rahe the..
V-suddenly remember abt that-are haa..chalo..
Nd he starts walking out from room bt still holding her in his arms..
M-worriedly-virat..she try to tell him bt he cut her..
V-maanvi bas do min..
M-lekin virat..
V-walking towards strains..-maanvi 2 min k liye chup kar jao..
M-haa pr..
V-are baba kya hai?
He stopped walking nd stood near the steps..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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V-looked at her irritately-are kya hai baba?..2 min k liye chup nahi rahe sakti?..kon kahega tum kal hi hospital se aai ho?
He said when he stopped at first step of stairs..in hall everyone here his voice nd looked at that direction..bt they didn't knew abt them..
M-making cute angry face-virat..
V-kya virat?..ab surprise hai tumhare liye..to tum meri baat maan kar chup nahi rahe sakti?
M-haa lekin uske liye mujhe ase le jana jaruri hai?
V-then he looked at them nd realise that he still holding her in his arms-woh..sorry..mujhe dhyan hi raha..
M-haa..to main kab se yahi batane ki koshis kar rahi hu..
V-sorry..
M-uff..ab sorry bolna bandh karo aur mujhe niche utaro..varna mere surprise ka to pata nahi..family members pakka surprise ho jayenge..
V-oh..haa..nd he carefully abt to make her stood up on her feet..her back facing towards hall..he still holding her waist nd placed her feet on floor when they heard voice from hall..
Vn-are nahi nahi..rahene de rahene se..Hume koi surprise feel nahi hoga..viren said teasingly..
Hearing this maanvi imigeatly get surprised nd shocked..she imigeatly looked at virat who smiling nd blushing with rubbing his back of neck..
M-scare..hit him on sholder-kya idiot ki tarah has rahe ho?..gulped-jiju k saath family bhi hai?
V-control on himself nd nodded in yes..
M-mtlab puri family ne Hume ase..
V-to kya hua?..husband hu yaar tumhara..
Bt she still worried what they think abt her..in room or out of house virat used to pick her in his arms..bt like now..its first time..she feel embareccing..
V-saw her getting nervous-ab chalo..surprise dekhna hai na..
M-kya?
V-haa surprise..niche dekho..he said with smile..
M-pagal ho..ab niche kya dekhungi..sab kya soch rahe honge..still her back facing towards hall..
V-achchha to thik hai..main sab ko vapish bhej deta hu..
M-confuse-kisko?
V-khud dekhlo naa..he said with indicated with his eyes..
She slowly turned nd looked down..
As she looked down..a big smile come across her lips..she get really surprise nd happy to see all of them in vadhera mention..she imigeatly turned nd looked at virat..
V-smile-yaad hai tumne London me kaha tha..tumhe rihshikesh ki bahot yaad aa rahi hai?..aur milne ka bhi bahot man hai?..vaha Maine promis to kiya tha lekin aaj 1 nd half month ho gaye..le hi nahi ja paya..to socha inhe hi yaha le aau..
She smile more widly..
M-she again looked down..nd again looked at all..all vadhera family members stood with choudhary family nd also virat brings her all panturs from rihshikesh..
She imigeatly moved from there nd hurriedly go downstairs..which makes virat nd others little worried to see her speed..
V-nd all-maanvi aram se..
Nd he also come behind her..
;he rush towards her family nd hugged them one by one..
Virat also reached there nd shook his head on her action..
After meet them she meet to her punters..
She looks too happy which makes them happy..specially maanvi..after all this..
J-achchha aap sab baithiye main yahi breakfast le ati hu..
Nd she went to kitchen nd all starts taking there seats..
Maanvi who stood with punters walked towards virat who stood at couch..
M-thank u..sachchi main inhe bahot miss kar rahi thi..
V-smile-i knew..isiliye to inhe yaha bulaya..lekin age se ye Jo kartab kiya abhi woh try mat karna..
M-confuse-kartab?
V-haa..jis speed se tum upar se niche aai ho..he said in little serious tone..
M-bit her tongh-ups..sorry..woh excitement me ho gaya..mein age se dhyan rakhungi..smile..
V-smile back-ok..
Just then badi biji call her..
Bb-are ab humare saath baithe gi ya abhi bhi virat k saath..she teas her..
Both virmaan looks down nd feel embareccing..
M-walked towards them nd sit in between badi biji nd biji..-kyu nahi..ab to aap hi k saath baithungi..
Nd hugged her..
Bb-waise manna padega virat k saath rahe k tu sudhar gai hai..again teas her..
M-open her mouth in O-haww..kyu?
Bb-are main aai tune koi shaitani nahi ki..
M-are to ab kar lungi..
Bb-bhool jaa..ab teri umar nahi rahi..shaitani karne vala ane vala hai..
Hearing this all smile..also virat..bt maanvi feel shy nd looked at virat who smiling..
Bd-waise achchha hogi woh virat pe jaye..
M-imigeatly-kyu?
Bb-bichara virat kitne shaitan sambhalega?..again teas her..
M-like kid gve complaining look to beeji-beeji..
B-hay meta beta..hug her..kya bb aap bhi..badi ho gai hai..ab to iski tang mat khichiye..
Vm-haa badi biji..humari maanvi to bahot samzdar hai..balki yahi mere bigde virat ko sambhalti hai..smile..
M-smile
V-like kid-mom..ye kya baat hui?
All laughed..
V-walked towards bb nd sit on her other side nd hug her-badi beeji aap achchha hua aa gai..varna meri to koi kadar hi nahi hai..
Nd with this all laughed..
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hope u all like thi two parts..
Try to put some light moments..
Lots off fun nd romence come with this..
Precap nahi direct update..
Soon..
Sorry for spelling mistakes...
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other stories also updated soon..
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for pm plz contact with manisha not me..plz..i m still not able to pm..
Thank u...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks to all readers who make me reached at this number of my update in this story..
Thank u..
I cannot make big post for saying thank u bt still..
Thank u so much for each nd every comments nd likes...
Hope u also like upcoming parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome and beautiful update.like the beautiful moment of virman with family.virman are so cute.khass show mein ve aysa ho.i wish u'r in cv's place.thanks for 2 update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
woww double updates ...😃
These two updates were just soo beautiful was smiling throughout the update ...
Those cute cute and smaal virman moments were just soo adorable...
Then the way viren teased them was fun ...
Virman finally soo happy love it
Thanx alott for the double update ...
Update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
nice update
loved the family moments a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Eeekkks double update..
D update was superbbb vry cute moments
Luved it update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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