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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
i soo lovee you for putting SAJAN here...
this is like the first FF wid dem along wid taarey...
i soo happy =D
hehe =D
and comin to d update...it was jus amazingg..!!
loved it to the core =D

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Naughty Rey back? *blush* Hehe! Loved both the updates... Glad that you updated both the chapters. Samrat n Gunjan are too good! And Taani as an interior designer is something I have imagined a few times! Do update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Thanks a lot for updating two chapters together,,,,
I am really very happy...
Loved Taani's bonding with her friends...
Rey is feeling guilty now...
OMG!!! Naughty Rey in action..
Can't wait to read...
Taani as an interior designer...Very nice...
Plz.. Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

superb story...

all d parts were amazing...

loved the frndshp of sajan wt taani...

mre excited for precap...

update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
plzz continue asap and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Amazing ff, I read all the chapters in one shot. I love them all...
And u doing a superb job plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
sorry guyss i was not commenting n posting here
sooorrryyy

i'll update it now

hope u like the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

CHAPTER 7

Sajan-tu jo soch rahi hai na wo karne ki sochio bhi mat hamein sab pata hai…….

Taani- oh ho tumhe pata hai baki sabko thodi……

Sajan – plz mat kar…

Taani- ok fine tum dono shant ho jao …vaise mujhe to tumne mana kar diya magar iska badla main lungi haan tum dono se……

Aise hi puri raat tak ye baatein karte rehte hain n rey taani ko dekhta rehta hai…….swaron taani ko khush dekh kar khush rehte hain n gang sajan ki luv story sun rahe hote hain…….

Raat k 1 baje sab apne room main jaate hain…….rey terrace pe rukta hai n

FLASHBACK BEGINS

REY- TAANI KYA TUM APNI LIFE MAIN KUCH NAHI KARNA CHAHTI?

Taani- karna chahti hun na…aapse shaadi….

Rey- lekin main tumhaare career….(interrupted)

Taani- uske liye aap ho na ….main shaadi karke hamesha k liye aapke saath rehna chahti hun….

Rey- to himself- taani ko ho kya gaya hai….shaadi???

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rey- I m srry taani main kabhi samajh hi ni paaya ki shaadi ke kya maaine(meaning) hai tumhaare liye…I m sryy….bt main tumhe mujhpe dependant nahi bana chahta ….main chahta hun ki tum independent raho……I LOVE U TAANI….main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karna chahta tha par……someone keeps his / her hand on his shoulder…..it was Sharon-rey don't worry sab theek ho jayega …taani apna carrer choose kar legi….aur tumhaare paas wapas aa jayegi…wo itni strong nahi hai ki tumse dur reh sake….sab theek ho jayega…ab tum so jao…..n they go to sleep…….

NEXT MORNING

SAB puja k liye tayaar ho jao shouts bui…all girls n boys go……

TAANI'S ROOM

TAANI- aapko traditional pehenna hoga…….

Girls- fine

They all get ready n go down only taani is left ……in boy's room rey was left n he suddenly remembered something n was going to meet Sharon…..here taani had opened her laptop to college website n then went in the washroom

Rey entered n saw no one was there ….he was about to go when there was a sound…."beep!beep!"…..he turned n saw the laptop open…..he went near n read the message…..

"Flower-ye dekho hamaari GS NDC khatam hote hi bhaag gayii….hahahahaha!!!!!!!"

Rey got angry n now surfed the site n saw many such comments on taani n was shell shocked ……said- o my god ye sab kya hai?? Hum sab ne taani ko kitna galat samjha n wo kabhi humse bol hi nahi payee……till then she comes out wearing a nyc colourful anarkali suit drying her hair….suddenly looks at rey n gets shocked …….says-rey …aap yahan? Aap yhan kya kar rahe hain…….

Rey didn't say anything ….pulled her holding her wrist n took the laptop n dragged her downstairs..…taani was so shocked …she just had not expected this sudden action of rey……..wole gang was there in hall wid sajan…nupur….also………..

Rey now pulled taani infront of the gang…he was damn angry

Swayam- ye tu kya kar raha hai rey ….itna gussa?? ………sajan . nupur were confused wid the gang

Rey- ye taani se pucho ki usne aisa kyun kiya…he looked at taani n was still holding her wrist tight….

Taani gets angry n says kya kiya hai maine haan……??...apna haath chudake….

Rey shows the laptop to her n she looks shocked towards him….

Rey- ye kiya hai tumne

Gang who was still confused asks…..KYAA KIYAA?????????

REY SHOWS THE LAPTOP TO EVERY ONE……

SWAYAM 'S EYES WERE WET……n Sharon shouts….what the hell!! Ye log aiusa kaise kar sakte hain……taani aur mujhe compare kiya…..disgusting

Taani- kyun ?? kyun galat hai ye haan….rey ne bhi to ye hi kiya tha na……

While all were busy samrat gave a look to nupur n both understood why rey was angry the most…..

Back to the gang

Taani- now crying….kya batati main aapko …app logon ne to mujhe kabhi apne dost samjha hi nahi….kabi mujhse baat hi ni ki to aap logon kya faraq padta hai kya faraq haan….she runs away crying……all were feeling guilty n decide to apologise to her……(EXCEPT REY…SAJAN….NUPUR)they go to taani's room where she was lying on her bed n crying badly…….sharon comes n puts her hand on taani's head n says …I m sryy taani …I m really sryy…..taani looks up n just hugs Sharon……n sys mujhe maaf kar dijiye mujhe aap sabko batana chahiya tha …one by one everyone apologises to her n they have a group hug……..

Meanwhile in the hall

Maine aisa kyun kiya taani ke saath …jab use meri zarurat thi toh….(interrupted)

Samrat- toh tumne use chod diya right….main tumhe iske liye kabhi maaf nahi karta agar tum taani se sacha pyaar nai karte hote toh….haan maine kal tumhaari aur Sharon ki baat sun li thi…anyways so whatz the plan …

Rey(confused- huhh???

Nupur- kya ?? apni Juliet ko manana nahi hai kya?? Winks at him…..

Rey was dumbstruck coz all 3 were looking at him smiling naughtily…..

Then rey got up n thought manana toh hai n he too smiles naughtily….

All four in unison- mission Juliet!!

Chapter ends here

PRECAP- party…… n mission Juliet

~(so guys I hope u all like it)~

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

CHAPTER 8

Rey: plan toh banana padega !!(smirk)

Till then everyone is called for the puja'.n taani now seems happy because her frnds understood her bt somewhere she was still sad as rey had not been wid her

Puja gets over n now the preparations for the party starts

Bui- are raamu use yahaan nahi wahan rakhna hai koi kuch sahi se kyun nahi kar raha hai!!!ufff!!!

Gang- aunty ji aap saara kaam hum pe chor dijiye hum kar denge'

Bui'are lekin''

Gang ' no if no but hum kareinge thik hai aap aaraam kariye'.

They all start'.

I'll be alright, I'll be alright
I'll be alright

Tu hai toh tedi medi rahe
Ulti pulti baatein
Sedhi lagthi hai

(Vicky bumps in rey n rey hits vicky's head n glares at him'.vicky gets scared n moves away)


Tu hai toh joote moote vaade
Dushman ke irrade
Sache lagthe hai(Vicky helps aashi n is close''neha comes n takes aashi away from Vicky)


Jo dil mein taare vaare de jagah
Woh tu hi hai, tu hi hai(swayam to Sharon'llhh)


Jo rothe rothe de hassa
Tu hi hai wahin (swayam to taani)

Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)
Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai

(yeh, yeh ,yeh)(every one working n helping each other)

MUSIC-(BOYS DOING KAAM ULTA PULA N THEY ALL FALL '.GIRLS LAUGHING AT THEM)

Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)

Saari duniya ek taraf hai
Ek taraf hai hum
Har khushi toh, dur bhage
Mil rahe hai gum(rey helps taani as she was about to fall)(llhh)


But when u smile for me
World seems all right
Yeh meri zindagi
Pal mein hi khil jaaye
Jaane kyun(rey smiles seeing taani happy wid the gang)

Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)
Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
(yeh, yeh ,yeh)
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)

Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
(yeh, yeh ,yeh)
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)(EVERYONE FINISHES THE WORK'.COMES TO THE HALL N ADMIRE THE DECORATIONS'.)

-------------------------------------1 HOUR LATER---------------------------------------

They all had gone to get ready for the party''..

Taani was more than happy coz she had a surprise for them''.

Boys were already downstairs

One by one the girls came n taani gunjan n nupur came together

Rey saw taani n was just mesmerized by her

She was wearing a golden lehenga wid pink border ''the lehenga was perfectly her fit n her body was shimmering due to it''

Everyone was wondering why she was so dressed'..

She came down smiling n said

Mujhe pata hai ki aap log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho to main sab clear kar deti hun''.

To sajan--- maine kaha than a ki main apna badla zarur lungi so here it is '.

Everyone was still confused n looked at each other'..

Taani- are itna hairaan hone ki zarurat nahi hai aaj maine tum dono ko surprise diya hai aur wo ye hai ki aaj koi party nahi hai

All- kya??

Taani- kyunki aaj sajan ki engagement hai'..

All were really happy n cheered for sajan'..

Rey was all the while staring at taani n thought kuch to karna padega''..

Now rey comes forward n seeks for everyones attentions n says toh hojaaye!!!

All- ho jaaye!!!!!!!(all happy)

Chapter ends here

PRECAP- many more dances to come so wait''.


Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 9

Girls were busy talking n then they hear music '..they turn'..n taani is shocked to see rey''.

(SONG ON TAAREY)

Banno ki mehndi kya kehna (gunjan shown)
Banno ka joda kya kehna (her dress)
Banno lage hai phoolon ka gehna
Banno ki aankhen kajraari (her eyes)
Banno lage sab se pyaari (her smile n bui uski nazar utarti hain)
Banno pe jaaoon main waari waari


--MALE--
Ho ho, oh oh, ho oh oh oh oh, oh oh oh (rey starts)(TAANI TURNS)
(Banno ki saheli resham ki dori (rey looks at taani n she looks here n there)
Chhup chhupke sharmaaye dekhe chori chori) - 2 (taani gunjan k peeche chup jaati hei n peeks to see rey wid a blush n smile)
Yeh maane ya na maane main to ispe mar gaya (now he comes to taani n her smile vanishes n she takes a step back)
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah - 2


--FEMALE--
(Babul ki galiyaan na chhadke jaana ( now taani sings '.goes near gunjan n says to rey)
Paagal deewana isko samjhaana) - 2
Dekho ji dekho yeh to mere peechhe pad gaya (taani goes to rey n slightly pushes him)
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah - 2

(REY BLOCKS TAANI'S WAY WHERE EVER SHE GOES n then she pushes him n runs away shying)(rey smirks)


--MALE--
Lab kahe na kahe, bolti hai nazar (rey near samrat n says to taani'.n samrat is looking at gunjan)
Pyaar nahin chhupta yaar chhupaane se
--CHORUS--
Pyaar nahin chhupta yaar chhupaane se


--FEMALE--
Haan, roop ghoonghat mein ho to suhaana lage
Baat nahin banti yaar bataane se (taunts rey)
--MALE--
Yeh dil ki baatein dil hi jaane ya jaane khuda
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah (holds taani n makes her dance)

MUSIC-TAANI N REY COLLIDE N R LOST IN EACH OTHER N GANG TEASES THEM)

--FEMALE--
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah
Sajna
Maangne se kabhi haath milta nahin
Jodiyaan bante hai pehle se sab ki (GOES TO GUNJAN N SWARON)
--CHORUS--
Jodiyaan bante hai pehle se sab ki


--MALE--
Ho, leke baaraat ghar tere aaoonga main (WID SAMRAT)
Meri nahin yeh to marzi hai rab ki


--FEMALE--
Arre jaa re jaa yeh jhoothi moothi baatein na bana
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah - 2 (taani comes to rey n with her finger first pushes his forehead then nose n then totally pushes him away)


--MALE'{ALL HAVE JOINED NOW THEY ALL R DANCING N REY CAYCHES HOLD OF TAANI}
Banno ki saheli resham ki dori
Chhup chhupke sharmaaye dekhe chori chori


--FEMALE--
Babul ki galiyaan na chhadke jaana
Paagal deewana isko samjhaana


--MALE--
Yeh maane ya na maane main to ispe mar gaya
Yeh ladki
Yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah


--FEMALE--
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah


--MALE--
Eh, yeh ladki haai allah, haai haai re allah


--FEMALE--
Yeh ladka haai allah, haai haai re allah

MUSIC- EVERY ONE DANCING N TAAREY EYELOCK


~(guys taarey solid waala romance in chapter 11or12)~

Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago

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