TAAREY FF : AFTER BREAK-UP [on hold]

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So guys I m here with a taarey story AFTER BREAK-UP''as every one has been writing their own ideas I m also here with my idea '..hope you all like it'..n do tell me if I shud continue or not'.so here is the first part'..ENJOY'..:D

TAAREY : AFTER BREAK-UP'WEAK'NAA''

TAANI ' guys quickly , jaldi kaam karo , mere paas tym nahi hai ,, aaj NDC finals hai aur tum logon ne kaam hi pura nahi kiya'.

Guy 1 : sorry taani bas ho hi gaya '.yaa'yes done'.

Taani says gud , now tum jao aur team ko bata do that everything is ready , go fast'

Guy 1 : ok'

Guy 1 to guy 2 ' pata ni ye taani ko ho kya gaya hai ,,, 1 month ho gaya hai taani ne smile nahi kiya n now to wo team se zyaada baat bhi nahi karti saare kaam jo teanm se related hote wo hume kehti hai aur agar d3 team k paas jaati hai to fatafat baat khatam karke chali jaati hai '..weird '.pata ni aisa kya ho gaya.. n e ways chal hum team k paas chalet hain''(they go )

GREEN ROOM

All enter

ShaReYam enter at last'''swayam stops rey and asks him if he is alright?...reys says he is fyn'.

~(so guys I m not describing any performance here '.u can imagine any of the group dance'.)~

RESULT---- st. Louis wins'.

EVERYONE AT THE CANTEEN

Everyone is happy '.dey r shouting n cheering n enjoying bt ShaReYam fake happiness'..

Taani comes n stands outside the canteen '..sees everyone enjoying'a lone tear falls from her eyes 'she wipes it '.n says to herself that tu jaa na andar and bhai se baat karle ' NDC to finish ho gaya hai bhai mana nahi karenge aur tera kaam bhi ho jayega to ab zyaada mat soch 'andar jaa '.andar sirf tera bhai aur college students hain ( jo kabhi frnds the)*sad*

Taani enters n every one (gang) stops shouting 'der smile dissaperas seeing her'.

Taani- bhai' mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai'.(they go to a side)swayam- haan kaho'taani ' who bhai'.main soch ri thi ki ab NDC khatam ho gaya hai aur mera kaam bi khatam ho chukka hai to main ye puchna chati thi ki kya main kuch dino k liye Jodhpur jaun '..bas kuch dino k liye hi '.pls bhai'looking hopefully in his eyes''

After thinking a lot he says thik hai bt mere paas ek idea hai'n goes towards the gang (taani confused n gang discussing ki ab taani ne kya kar diya 'hoping for some problem to come )

Swayam ' guys hum log NDC jeet chuke hain..(b4 he cud continue '.vicky- to ye batana tha kya taani ko'vaise taani hume pta hai thnx'makes face'.swayam glares at him'n continues)

So its tym to relax n have fun (tensed n confused taani to herself 'bai kya kehna chate hain?)

Vicky to nil ' ise kya ho gaya hum ek ghante se party party chilla rahe ise sunaayi nahi diya kya '.lagta ab hosh aaya hai 'n nil says 'kya pata Sharon k sapno mein khoya ho '. N the guys do chemistry step n laugh silently'.

Sharon-tum kya kehna chate ho swayam(impatiently) (trying to read his face)

Swayam- yeh hi ki we all R GOING TO JODHPUR!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gang ' JODHPUR?????????? (screamed'shocked'.)

Taani ' kya ? JODHPUR ? Sab log?(tensed n shocked says to herself) hey krishnaji main in sabse , rey se, dur jaane k liye , apne aap ko tym dene k liye , relax hone k liye , jodhpur jaa ri thi b tab kya karun'.ab kya hoga???(tensed n worried )

Chapter ends here

PRECAP ' kya hoga ??? (socho)''<3<3<3..the road trip'.:D <3<3<3

I hope u liked 'I know ki rey ka koi scene nahi tha so srry bt nxt chapter main hoga if I continue so teel me if u liked it'..:D


INDEX


Chapter : 1

Chapter : 2

Chapter : 3

Chapter : 4

Chapter : 5 & 6

Chapter : 7, 8 & 9

Chapter : 10

ThankYou Note ❤️

Chapter : 11

my new os


TaaRey OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guyss do tell me howz it n shud i continue??
Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, it's really very interesting..
Plz. Dear, You should definitely continue this..
I really wanna know what happens next..
And, why is the gang so rude with Taani??
Is still something wrong between them??
Plz. do continue this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...yes you should continue
but i have one adivce...kindly change the name of your ff coz there are already 1-2 TaaRey ff's with the same name so it might confuse the readers
anywayz looking forward to the road trip
do continue soon nd add me to the pm list 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey I hav read this on taarey cafe group nd I truly luvd this ff...plz do continue it here...
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Very Nice...Just Loved It ! =) Please Continue Soon,...nd PM me,..:)
Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Nice update soon plz pm me
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---------------CHAPTER 2 ---------------

Taani in her room packing her things as they are going jodhpur tomorrow says to herself that pata nahi ab kya hoga . main to rey se aur sab se dur jaana chahti thi fir aapne mere saath aisa kyun kiya krishna ji '.us din jo kuch bhi hua wo kya kam tha ki aap meri life main aur problems laa rahe ho''

FLASHBACK ' BREAK-UP*tears*

Hey Krishna ji main kya karun aaj tauji pakadte pakadte reh gaye , agar unhe sab kuch pata chal jaata toh '.rey aur main hamesha k liye dur ho jaate'.mujhe rey se baat karni hogi'she messages him to meet in fire exit in half n hr ''.

Rey receives her message thinks phir se taani tauji k bare main baat karna chahti hogi aur mujhe abhi Sharon se baat karni hi hogi '..he calls shorn n says her to meet him in 5 mins'

IN AN EMPTY CLASSROOM

~(same as promo happens'rey asks her what he shud do n takes her promise tht she will nt tell n e thing to swayam'..sry I m nt writing full scene'..aaj ka episode hai na dekh lena'.n e ways no bakwas'.)~

Then its tym to meet taani '..she already in F.E. waiting for rey''he comes'..

Taani- rey thank god rey aap aagaye ,, mujhe aapse tauji k bare main baat karni hai'woh'(b4 she cud say n e thing rey interrupts n says ) taani mujhe pehle tumse kuch kehna hai'pls pehle mujhe kehne do'.taani says ok kahiye aapko kya kehna hai?

rey- taani pls kuch bhi karne se pehle meri baat k bare main sochna ok '..tum bahut badal gayi ho taani'tum wo taani nahi ho jo sabki care karti thi , jo pehle sabk fir apne bare main sochti thi'.tum bahut badal gayii ho '.. tum mujhpar dependent rehti ho '.n tumhara koi future carrer plan nahi hai '.aise kaise chalega taani tumhi batao main kya karun''isliye maine decide kiya hai ki main tumse'..(with breaking words )'main tumse'BREAK-UP chahta hun''

taani was shell shocked to hear dis from her prince charming''.many questions arising together in her mind'..wht to do'.she starts to say something bt her voice doent come out '.only streams of tears'..

n aag main ghee ka kaam ,,jale par namak ka kaam ,,karta hai rey ki aakhri line- TAANI I LOVE U LEKIN MAIN DANCE ,FRNDS AUR TUM MEIN SE KISI KO CHOOSE NAHI KAR SAKTA , DANCE MERA PASSION HAI , FRNDS MERI FAMILY HAIN AUR TUM''MERI ZINDAGI HO BT MAIN INMAIN SE EK BHI CHEES KE BINA SURVIVE NAHI KAR PAUNGA BT TUMHAARE LIYE YE BHI KARUNGA TAANI 'I LOVE U..<3

~(SHOCK GUYS THE LINE "MERI ZINDAGI HO BT MAIN INMAIN SE EK BHI CHEES KE BINA SURVIVE NAHI KAR PAUNGA BT TUMHAARE LIYE YE BHI KARUNGA TAANI 'I LOVE U..<3" REY SAYS IN HIS MIND SO TAANI CANNOT HEAR WHAT SHE MEANS TO HIM'..)~

REYS GOES OFF FROM DER''..taani breaks down''

FLASHBACK ENDS

Taani crying says I don't mean any thing in ur life rey 'kuch bhi nahi''suddenly swayam comes (PIECE OF NOTE-swayam knows about der breakup so wo taani k peeche lag raha wid the whole gang *gang also knows about the break-up* taani requested him nt to misunderstand rey n dnt break ur frndship wid him coz mistake is herz also'.)

Swayam asks her if her packing is done '.she replies in a nod'they smile at each other n go to sleep'..

GANG *everyone at their own houses packing *

Vicky- yaar kal maza aane wala hai bt ye taani kyun 'uff'!!

Nil- jodhpur main chutti haa'.nt a bad idea '

Amar- yaar main kya kapde rakhun '..wahan to garmi hogi na'.

Bharat- yaar ye swayam eda(mad) hai kya '..jodhpur'wo bhi chutti par ''mazaa to aayega lekin'.taani se pro'prob' pareshaani hogi'.ye angrezi bhasha tere liye bani ich nahi hai 'chod'

Rey- thank god swayam ne jodhpur jaane ka plan kiya nahi to agar taani akele jaati to main pure tym pareshaan rehta'.*smiles*

---------------HERE WID GIRLS AT SHARON'S HOUSE PACKING--------------

Simmi- yaar I m haapy ki hum kahin jaa rahe hain bt taani'..

Sharon- com'n guys wahan uska ghar hai aur wo akele hi jaana charahi thi'ye idea swayam ka hai 'so ismain taani ki galti nahi hai'so stop'

Rinni- girls tumhari packing ho gayii'

All ' yes'

Ashi'bas last tym packing baaki types hai'

SHARON TO HERSELF- kal swayam k ghar '..(nervous'.u know na she has started feeling something for him soo )

--------------------------------------------NEXT MORNING----------------------------------------

There is a bus booked for all ''.all come now '.gang is ther standing by the bus waiting for girls rey n taayam'.

Girls come n they start talking to the boys'.boys see ther luggage n say 'aisa lagra hai pura wadrobe hi utha laaye hai ye log'.

N e ways

Rey comes now n greets them''. Now only taayam r left'..swayam comes with his luggage n there is a LLHH between swaron'..

Taani comes at last wearing a anarkali plain suit of somewhat light yellow color n its pretty though it does'nt have much embroidery n all'its plain'.she comes adjusting her dupatta'n rey keeps staring at her n then when she looks up she;s also cougt in that eyelock'.for some tym when aashi's voice disturbs her ye aapna kya pehna hai ''jodhpur main toh garmi types hoti haina'??(confused)

Taani slightly smiles at this n enters the bus having a last look at rey coz he was standing just beside the door'..

Aashi was still confused'.swayam saw this look n smilesd '.went near her n told the girls that taani puri tayaari k saath aayi hai'.jab ghar par sab tumlogon ko aise kapdon main dekhenge to behosh hi hojayenge 'at taani uska reason nahi banna chahti'..so u see '.n laughs..all guys also burst out laughing at the girls''..

Girls get annoyed n enter the bus '.boys after them''they all get seated n starts shouting'..ye!ye!...

Taani smiles seeing them n starts reading a book''.rey is staring at her as the wind is playing with her hair''she smiles reading the book'.n rey sighs in relief''

--------------------all enjoy the trip--------------------

But suddenly the bus comes to a halt'..everyone gets a jerk'n taani who was lost in the world of her story comes back to reality''..

CHAPTER ENDS HERE

PRECAP-are ye bus ko kya hua

'..ouch!!!!!...rey- lagta hai bahut zyaada lagi hai'..

Taani- nahi rey main theek hun''.

They reach the SHANTI NIWAAS taayams home'''at entrance SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!...<3

~(I KNOW KI TAAREY SCENES KAM THE BUT STORY SENSIBLY PROCEED KARNI THI SOO'')~

Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me first amazing update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update, dear..
The flashback was emotional..
TaaRey are really hurt...
Loved their little eye locks...
The precap is interesting...
Update soon...

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