TAAREY FF : AFTER BREAK-UP [on hold] - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
amazing ! 👏
update soon and do pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
amazing updates just read all the chapters and loved them all precap is awesome and mind blowing, can't wait for the updates please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Super se bhi bahut upper *Claps*
Read all the remaining chapters from 4-9
U gave so long n quick updates..
Thank u so much...i love this ff totally :)) Update soon plz ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

guyss thankyou for ur support for my first ff ...thanks for all the likes n comments

but i m sad as not many like my updates i guess

if u all dont like my ff then i'll end it...

thnx for everything

love u all


n i m soo sry i dont reply to ur comments bt i promise from now on i'll reply...😊

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Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

CHAPTER 11

Offcource Sharon ye uska career ban sakta aur hum sabko pata hai ki wo ismain bahut achi hai

Sharon- offcource rey toh hamein taani se baat karni chahiye haine

Rey- woh hum baad main kareinge abhi use zyaada important kaam hai mere paas……..excitedly turning towards Sharon….ab main use sab sach bata dunga n woh mere saath aa jaye gi……..sharon smiled n nodded a yes

………………………………………….

Taani was wearing

She was taking a flower plate when bui asked for something to nupur n according to rey's plan she felt down on her knees n cried that she is hurt so taani said she will bring…….nupur winked at rey who was witnessing all….

……………………………………………

Taani was going towards store room ….she saw it was open she went in …….then she heard the door getting closed n turned shocked

She could not see anyone scared she asked kaun hai?

Rey was coming close to her she was going back still asking : kaun hai??

Then she hit the wall behind n rey who was coming close to her came more close n finally she could see that it was rey….

Taani : aap …..??...yahann…..she saw the close proximity b/w them n tried to go away…..

Rey holds her arm n pins her to the wall : aaj nahi taani ……aaj tum nahi jaaogi …….i m sorry taani….i m sorry

Taani : sorry….huh?? …..kisliye sorry…..isliye ki aap mere saat aur kuch bura nai kar paaye ….ya ….isliye ki is break-up ke baad main tuti nai….???

Rey : tut toh mai gaya hun taani……..tum meri baat suno……

Taani : mujhe kuch nai sunna

Rey : tumhe sunna padega taani fir jot um kahogi wo hi hoga

I m sorry taani mere paas koi or option nai tha …. I m sorry

Mujhe tumse break up karna pada

Aaj tak humaari saari fights mere plan ka part tha

Taani : plan??

Rey : haan plan taani …..tumhe independent banana ka…..tumhe tumse milvaane ka…..

Aur ab jab mera plan successful ho gaya hai toh……toh mai tumse ye kehna chahta hun taani ki …..ki….I LOVE U……haan taani……I still LOVE U……ye breakup ye fights sab kuch fake tha…..plss mujhe maaf kardo plsss

Taani was hell shocked ………..she was not in a state to move……rey took her silence in a wrong way n was about to leave when taani said : aap mujhe fir chod ke jaa rahe ho rey……plss mat jayiye

Rey stopped then turned towards her ….she was smiling through her tears …..rey ran n hugged her…..

Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain


Aaj To Mera Tan Badan


Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein


Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain


Aaj To Mera Tan Badan


Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein


Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa


Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere Aaja Re


~(rey first wiped her tears then cupped her face n kissed on her forehead…..then left trails of wet kisses on her shoulder…….he then came to her next shoulder n did the same…….his hands were wandering on her bare back giving shivers to her)~

Yuhi Baras Baras Kaali Ghata Barse


Hum Yaar Bheeg Jaaye Is Chaahat Ki Baarish Mein


Meri Khuyli Khuli Lato Ko Suljaaye


Tu Apni Ungliyon Se Main To Hoon Isi Khwaayish Mein


Sardi Ki Raaton Mein Hum Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Mein


Hum Dono Tanha Ho Na Koi Bhi Rahe Is Ghar Mein


Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain


Aaj To Mera Tan Badan


Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein


Aaja Re Aa Re

~( she could not take it more so she went away from

him…….rey caught her hand n slowly came close to her ,

removed her hair n started kissing n sucking on her bare

back…….her soft moans were making him crazy……..

he pulled her towards him by her waist…….she arced

her back when she felt his hot breath on her back )~



Zara Zara Behekta Hain Mehekta Hain


Aaj To Mera Tan Badan


Main Pyaasi Hoon Mujhe Bhar Le Apni Baahon Mein


Hai Meri Kasam Tujhko Sanam Door Kahin Na Jaa


Yeh Doori Kehti Hain Paas Mere Aaja Re


Aaja Re Aaja Re Aaja Re

~( she now hugged him n they stood like this for a long time)~

Taani broke the hug : rey I love u

Rey was about to speak but taani kept a finger on

his lips n said aapne mujhe promise kiya tha ki jo main

chahungi wo hi hoga

Rey : haan

Taani : toh phir rey mai chahti hun ki aap……..

Precap : no precap

Mai chahti hun ki aap log next update ka inte zaar kare

~( I know ki may be aapki expectations puri nahi ki

maine sorry )~ hope ki accha ho bas...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Res . !!.
Yay me 1st...nd that too without Pm 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Karan_TaaRey

Res . !!.

Yay me 1st...nd that too without Pm 😉


i just pm'ed u...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Yeah!!! An update...
Was waiting for it...
Loved the update..
Rey and Nupur's plan was successful..
TaaRey in a storeroom alone..
At last Rey told her the truth..
And then...
Me blushing...
It was really an amazing update...
Loved it a lot..
But ab taani kya bolegi..
Hmm.. I am kind of scared..
Lets see.
And you should not even think of discontinuing this story..
Do update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Mindblowing update.luvd it.yaar 2m thora hint to de diya hota.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awesome update :D
Interesting
What did Tani ask for!!!!
Update soon!!!

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