TAAREY FF : AFTER BREAK-UP [on hold] - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it dear! Nice start...Nice eyelocks between Taarey!
Awesome..Update soon!
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Chapter 3

But suddenly the bus comes to a halt…..everyone gets a jerk…n taani who was lost in the world of her story comes back to reality……..

Swayam goes to the driver n asks what happened…….driver says he will check ……he checks n tells the gang that there is some major problem in the bus so it will get repaired by tomorrow morning only……

Taani says ab kya Karen…..nil says hum kal subah tak yahin ruk jaate hai bus main…….. vaise bhi ye jagah bahut sun saan hai hum kahan jaayeinge …all agree…..bt then taani says no we will nt wait nahi toh ghar waale pareshaan ho jayienge n yahan toh phone main signal bhi nahi aa raha hai…(checking her phone) hum inform nahi kar paayeinge……..swayam agrees to this n after some tym the gang also agrees…..they get out wid their luggage…..

AFTER 15 MINUTES……..

They all r walking on the road surrounded by a dense jungle……

Vicky- yaar main toh bahut thak gaya ………neha- babu is right….neha also feeling tired…….simmi- me too yaar

Rey- guys shut up….lift maango…… ok

They all try to stop a bus bt it doesn't stop…..AFTER 10 MINUTES……vicky- bahut ho gaya dude koi ruk I ni raha hai……

SUDDENLY…….it starts raining ……….everyone rushes somewhere to find shelter n prevent themselves from gatting bsoaked in the rain……..everyone is scattered …………..taani also runs n rey follows her……..now she stops after sometym of entering in the jungle n realizes she is lost bt n panics ……..she is full wet……she feels someones hand on her shoulder…….she freaks out….screams n turns n finds rey……she is lost in his eyes……..then they realize that they r getting wet so rey takes taani to a nearby cottage….(now don't think too much……just read).

They both enter the cottage …..its small n has a lantern kept with a little oil in it……rey takes his shirt off to dry n arranges a fire place so that they remain warm…….he first of all lights up the lantern n as ssoon an he does he sees a beauty shimmering in the dim light near the window……he gets lost in taani who was busy drying her hair ……rey unknowingly moves towards her n holds her shoulder………. she turns n asks what does he want…………he comes out of his trance n tells her to change or she'll get sick….taani nods sincerely n goes to change……….

AFTER SOME TYM

Taani comes out wearing a white saari with strap less blouse….rey keeps staring at her ……she also looks at him awkwardly becoz of his gaze on her……..he comes to her …..she becomes conscious n tries to escape but he blocks her way mover towards her n she goes back(n u know then what happens)….she hits the wall n then rey comes more closer to her…….she moves toher right but rey blocks her wid his hand…….then she moves to her right bt again rey blocks her……now he comes more closer to her n picks her up in his arms n takes her to the bed of hay…..both r lost in each other……..

Rey keeps her down……comes close to her….she closes her eyes…..he moves her hair back n kisses her forehead then eyes n then comes to her lips bt she turns due to shyness………rey holds her arm n kisses on her neck……then he was abot ro open the dori of her blouse bt she realizes something n within a fraction of second she pushes him away from herself….n gets up….

She says- rey….ye sahi nahi hai ….ab hamare beech koi rishta nahi hai toh……rey gets frustrated n shouts….toh kya taani (holds her arms tight n pins her to the wall)…….anger visible on his face wid love n LOTS OF PAIN……….

Taani- she shrugs n gets free from his hold n says to yeh MR.REYAANSH SINGHANIA ki hamara brk-up ho chukka hai ab hamare beech koi relation nahi sivaaye iske ki aap mere bahi k bff hain main unki behen or professionally main GS aur aap AGS…..(a long pause n her words ecoing in reys ears……..she turns her back to him n says….now anger gone n pain was there in her voice)aap bhul rahe hain ki…….(words braking n eyes wet)…..ki maine aapse nahi….aapne mujhse break-up kiya……ki main nahi ….aap mujhse PYAAR NAHI KARTE…… toh phir jab itne tym baad main normal hona chahti hunt oh….shouts again…toh kyun aap mere liye ye sabkuch mushkil bana rahe ho rey kyun……????????

Rey gets hurt n angry listening that she thinks he doesn't love her …..he holds her n makes her face him n asks TOH TUMHE LAGTA HAI KI MAIN TUMSE PYAAR NAHI KARTA HUN …HAAN??(SHOUTS ANGRILY)SHE REPLIES haan yehi lagta hai mujhe aur ye sach hai ….rey asks her if she loves him or not??

She turns away closes her eyes n says (shouts) haan nahi karti main aapse pyaar ….ab nahi karti ….samjhe aap…?

Reys says accha …..comes closer….leans forward….n says….toh ye batao ki agar main abhi tumhe kis karun to kyat um mujhe roko gi??...taani gets shocked who was looking down suddenly looks up into his eyes n then it was really difficult to get free from it…..rey pins her to the waal again n leans in….as soon as he was about to kis her the gang comes to the cottage n shouts there name…(gang was unaware of der presence) taani ko hosh aata hai n she pushes him n shouts bhai n goes out…..reys hits his fist to the wall in frustration……..<3

PRECAP- SAME AS BEFORE

Guys sorry maine thode changes kiye hai isliye precap same hai……..ENJOY…..<3

Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res./Unres..
wow! Loved it.. TaaRey's scene were nice.. Intense! Loved it! Update soon..PM me!😛
Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GUYSS THOSE WHO WANT PM'S OF THIS STORY N ARE NOT MY BUDDY...PLS SEND ME BUDDY REQUESTS SO IT WILL BE EASIER FOR ME TO PM YOU ALL...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Super amazing update, dear...
Ufff, correct timing...
I mean the rain...
And, then our Rey followed Taani...
The cottage scene was so romantic and intense..
Loved it...
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Plz. update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb...updates !!!!
Loved Them a lot ! 😊 😊 😊
TaaRey r awesome,...please update soon i want to read more nd more..=) about this FF ~ Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I jst read ur ff.its awesome. I luvd it..cntnu son.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update...continue soon
i have sent you a buddy request so plz pm me about the updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just caught up with the story, it is absolutely brilliant!!! Please do continue soon, I'm really looking forward to the next part!! N pls pm if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 4


Bhai '.taani shouts n goes out'.whole gang was there''

swayam tells her to change n she comes back after some tym'.rey also comes n then they all go towards the road'..

suddely they see a truck coming towards them'..

ther make a straigt line in between the road n signal the truck to stop ''the truck stops n all get in bharat n amar get in first n everyone gives them their luggage'.then nil goes up n helps simmi n like wise amar helps rinni''

as Sharon was going up she saw swayam helping aashi to get up on the truck n feels bad somewhere inside her'..then when swayam sees her , he helps her also (llhh) '.

the boys also do the signature step(chemistry)'..vicky goes up n neha calls him to help her bt as usual he ignores her n then bharat helps her up'''now rey comes up n turns to see taani struggling to get up to the truck'..

a slight smile comes on his face n when taani looks at him his smile vanishes'..but then he forward his hand to her'she looks at him (llhh)'.gives her hand n he pulls her up'.

they r standing holding each other still lost '..suddenly the truck starts n with a jerk taani's ankle twists n falls down n cries in pain'.rey gets worried '..


Rey- taani mujhe dekhne do '..he moves forward bt taani turns her face'.


Taani- nahi rey koi zarurat nahi hai main theek hun'..


Rey (shouts'.haan mujhe dikhraha hai kit um kitna thik ho '..

mujhe dikhaao'..n toches her her leg '..

she shivers by his touch bt then she was about to say something when rey interrupting her says '.chup'kuch nahi bologi tum '

bilkul chup chaap seedhe baithi raho'..taani stares at him '.

she saw love n pain in his eyes n was about to melt bt now she wqs strong enough to control herself'..

Taani ' nahi rey pls mat karo bahut dard ho raha hai 'pls'..he says 'kuch nahi hoga '.bus tum meri aankhon mein dekho taani'.tumhe kuch pata nahi chalega'..she obeys him'..

n rey again twists her ankle n '..ouuchh!!!...she cluches reys shirts n closes her eyes in pain''.now she opens her eyes n comes to her sense '.sees him holding her leg '.

she pushes him n gets up n was about to shout at him wen she realizes that her leg is no longer paining'..she jumps n feels happy'they all sit down n like this the truck goes on''..


AFTER 4 HOURS


(SO GUYS AS I DON'T KNOW ANY THING ABOUT THE LANGUAGE SO I'LL USE NORMAL WORDS LIKE MOM DAD BUI CHACHU N ALL'.SRY IF N E ONE FELT BAD ABOUT IT)


(family members:- *nupur:taayam's cousin '.*bui'.*'..dadaji'..*daadi ji'.*gunjan(her bff)n samrat'.pinky'maid)


Thet reach the SHANTI NIWAAS taayams home''.n swayam n taani enter '..there's one girl who comes n hugs taani '.shes'NUPUR'HER COUSIN SIS'..then taani asks where's bui??


Nupur- wo bahut naaraz hain'tumne unse baat nahi ki na isliye'.wo bahar nahi aayeingi


Taani(worried)- ab kya karun'.the gang had just entered n were shocked to see what happened'..taani cried in pain holding her leg'.rey got worried bt swayam knew what she was trying to do so he stopped rey'.

.taani sat on the floor '..naughty expression on her face'.she shouts loudly'."AAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!"'..N THEN LOOKS HERE N THERE''.searching someone'.

suddenly a lady of age 40 came out'..taani saw her n again closed her syes n she shouts loudly'."AAAHHH!!!!!!!!!!"'''bui comes to the dining table with an angery look '

doesn't look at n taani n the gang drinks water n goes back''..


Taani gets up '..more worried''n suddenly she faints''nupur shouts taaniii!!!!!...swayam n rey also run to her'.pinky comes n calls bui''now bui gets worried runs out to taani '..

bui keeps taani 's head on her lap n says to pinky to bring water''while all this taani opens her eyes n winks at pinky''here bui was telling pinky to bring water but bui sees pinky making her lips in o shape n pinky says"haaawww"'.

bui gets confused n looks at taani who had a bada wala naughty smile on her face now''.every one also relaxed n laughed''..

bui got angry on taani n said aise kaun karta hai pagal ladki kabhi ni badlegi n she hits slightly on taani ' s head n taani scratches her head n makes cute faces'..

bui smiles n says haaye meri bacchi kaisi hai tu n hugs her '.every one also laughs at this'.

Now before any one cud say something taani was being dragged by nupur n pinky'...swayam also goes n gang now enters'''


Chapter ends here


PRECAP-taani hears a loud thud n goes out to see'.


While out she jus had a funny thought that who fainted'.bui or the gang'..

(I know that the precap did'nt seemed funny to u bt it will when I'll post d next part'..)

Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago

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