TaaRey FF : oNcE uPOn A TiMe- aFtEr brEAk Up [chapter 7 updated pg 31]

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TaaRey FF : oNcE uPOn A TiMe- aFtEr brEAk Up

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GUYSS ...THIS IS MY FIRST TRY TO A ONE SHOT...I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT
BEFORE THE PROLOGUE I WUD LIKE TO TELL U THAT THIS OS WILL NOT END ON A GUD NOTE AS ITS ABOUT JUST A DAY OF MANY OTHER DAYS AFTER THEIR BREAK UP SO IT WILL JUST GIVE YOU A ... NOT THIS EASY U NEED TO READ IT ...DO TELL ME IF I HAVE A GUD CONCEPT...PLSS COMMENT IT WILL ENCOURAGE ME TO CONTINUE...



PROLOGUE



now tears welled up in her eyes and she started walking while all the scenes of that night were flashing in front of her eyes...

soon she reached her destination and was moving towards its entrance as a lifeless body...

she looked at him...

he was bare chest , wearing a blindfold and was dancing with the same passion...

is eyes were covered but she cud feel or maybe wanted to see the same pain of seperated from ones love and maybe the same feelings which once she had seen in his eyes for her...

but soon she recovered and said to herself- " NO!!!!" ... "he doest love me anymore... i m no one to him ... and HE IS NO ONE TO ME!!!!"

Chapter : 2
Chapter : 3
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Chapter : 4
Chapter : 5
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Chapter : 6
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Chapter : 7 (part a)

soo how was it do tell me ...i atleast want 20 to 25 comments else i wont continue...


just kidding...i'll continue anyways ...i badly want to share it ...n yes i will be very happy if u all comment on it n do HIT LIKE!!!!


guyss i have got a request to take this concept forward ...if you all want that then do tell me n yes i wud want at least 20 requests then i'll definately continue... n ya if you have any idea that how can i take this concept forward then pls PM n tell me i'll be waiting
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Originally posted by: taarey1fan

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HERE IT STARTS...


Rey: guys tum log jao, I'll see u later, mujhe thodi aur rehearsals karni hai

All went coz they knew rey was not happy with this break-up .

Though they did'nt know the exact reason behind the break-up

but still they could sense it from rey's behavior

He was behaving weird as in front of taani he used to act all cool,

bt then after she was gone he seemed all lost''


--------------AT NIGHT--------------


Rey was alone in RH


Taani was in the projector room working on files

Then suddenly her calmed expression turned to a tensed n

worried one. She thought-" ye toh NDC ki report files

hain'..mujhe ismain rey ki help leni padegi par''..


Maine to saare performance dekhe hain par phir bhi rey se help

leni hi padegi'.she looked at her watch and thought ki ab tak toh

rey chale gaye honge '.ab kya karun''.


Suddenly she hears random songs n thought maybe rey ghar na

gaye hon n decides to check on him'''..she picked up her

files and was going to the RH when suddenly the song

changed'''..


She stopped and closed her eyes tight hoping she will not hear it

anymore but to her nightmare it was true, YES!! It was the same

song'..DIL SE RE !!!...


Ho Ek Suraj Nikla Tha Kuch Paya Pighla Tha

Ek Aandhi Aayi Thi Jab Dil Se Aah Nikli Thi

Dil Se Re Dil Se Re

Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na

Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na

Piya Piya Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya

Piya Piya Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya

Dil Se Re Dil Se Re



now tears welled up in her eyes and she started walking while all

the scenes of that night were flashing in front of her eyes...

soon she reached her destination and was moving towards its

entrance as a lifeless numb body...

she looked at him...

he was bare chest , wearing a blindfold and was dancing with the

same passion...

his eyes were covered but she cud feel or maybe wanted to see

the same pain of seperation from ones love and maybe the same

feelings which once she had seen in his eyes for her...

but soon she recovered and said to herself- " NO!!!!"'..."he

doesnt love me anymore... i m no one to him ...and HE IS NO

ONE TO ME!!!!"

she gathers courage to enter coz nothing was left inside

her'..coz she had tried her best to HATE him'''bcoz she

thought that if she would face him again then she would'''..


she broke her train of thoughts and focused for what she was here

she went in and thought how to talk to him while he was busy

dancing, she kept the files below and turned to go to switch off

the music system but as soon as she turned to move, she was

stopped by rey and for that moment she was lost somewhere,

everything had stopped for her''only the bliss of the music was

in the air'depicting their feelings''


There was a sudden burst of images in front of her eyes and then

she heard him saying- "I can feel you" ''.she came out of her

trance n tried to go away and'. And'' and the mistake was

done


~(THE NEXT THING THAT FOLLOWED WAS SAME AS IN THE SHOW '''''''''''''''''''''' HERE IS THE LINK- http://youtu.be/YKOZ4OhEy1U?t=3m25s )~*~(just ignore kriyansh scenes)~

Do Patte Patjhad Ke Pedon Se Utre The

Pedon Ki Shakhon Se Utre The

Phir Utne Mausam Guzre Woh Patte Do Bechaare

Phir Utne Mausam Guzre Woh Patte Do Bechaare

Phir Ugne Ki Chahat Mein Woh Sahraon Se Guzre

Woh Patte Dil Dil Dil The Woh Dil The Dil Dil The

Dil Hai To Phir Dard Hoga Dard Hai To Dil Bhi Hoga

Mausam Guzarte Hi Rahte Hain

Dil Se..



Bandhan Hai Rishton Mein Katoon Ki Tarein Hai

Pathar Ke Darwaze Deewarein

Bele Khilti Ugti Hain Aur Gucche Bhi Khilte Hain

Woh Chalte Hai Afsaane Kirdaar Bhi Milte Hai

Woh Rishte Dil Dil Dil The Woh Dil The Dil Dil The

Gham Dil Ke Pad Chulbule Pani Ke Yeh Bulbule Hain

Bujhte Hi Bante Rahte Hain ...

Dil Se ...

Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi

Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi

Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi

Pakhi Pakhi Pardesi


Taani was lost in his thoughts when he again said I can feel

you'''''


she broke out of her trance n had almost escaped when she felt a

strong grip

on her hand which was very tight'''. She was shocked for a moment


then turned hesitantly''.. while all this rey had already removed his blind


fold'''he pulled her closer n pinned to the mirror'''.she was scared


n then she saw many emotions pass through rey's face ''.she

was'.CONFUSED!!!...


Then she brushed her confusion off n tried to get free of his hold but suddenly

stopped in her struggle when she saw tears in his eyes''she was hell

again '.LOST!! in him'..

He moved closer to her n kissed her on her forehead'.she closed her eyes

enjoying his touch''.he caressed her face then went toward her neck n

placed a trail of wet kisses while entwining his fingers with hers''..then he

came to her throat n again placed kisses down the throat till her cleavage n

she moaned''.now he came up to her chin n brushed her lips with his

thumb n stared in her eyes''he now pulled her closer bhy her waist n taani

could feel his touch on her belly (you know her top is a little small so) '.she

closed her eyes n now could feel his breath on her face ''.she started

breathing heavily now driving him crazy''.he came more close now

almost no space b/w their lips when taani suddenly opened her eyes n in that

single fraction of second rey's lips crushed hers'..she was in no mood to

melt this time '.she pushed him n this only resulted in a rough kiss ''.rey

tightened his grip on her waist so that she doesn't escape again '''.

While kissing n seeking her permission he said please taani'..let me''n

taani suddenly opened up against her will''rey as soon as e realized she

had opened up he deepened the kiss passionately'.. taani's hands

automatically went up his neck n clutched his air tight''.now she thought to

enjoy this moment''the moment which never came when they were in a

relationship''.wait!! taani thought'' "we aren't in a relationship" '.i

need to stop this n she tried to stop but regardless of her struggles rey didn't

lt go'.. now she was angry n with all her might pushed him''''..rey

was shocked '.then he saw tears in her eyes n while he was registering all

the events he got a tight slap on his face from taani'' she was full of anger

n tears were falling from her eyes as if they are never going to stop'..n then

taani shouted on top of her voice ' "I HATE YOU MR. REYAANSH

SINGHANIA''DID U GET THAT''I'.HATE'..YOU'.."'

rey tried to stop her but she said in a soft firm voice that-


" rey...pls...agar main aur ruki toh mujhe aapse ...phir se pyaar ho jayega...pls rey...",,,, she certainly was lost somewhere ...when she came back to her sense she pushed him...


'now she

just ran mummering "I hate u rey" many times''here rey said '..'"BUT I

LOVE YOU TAANI'.I LOVE YOU'." He felt down his knees clutching his

hair n reapeating again'..I LOVE YOU TAANI!!




~(THE END)~




NOW DONT KILL ME FOR ENDING IT HER BUT I KNOW ITS SAD N I

ALSO KNOW THAT THIS WAS THE ONLY CONCEPT WHICH

ATTRACTED ME WHEN IT OCCURED TO ME...


SO GUYSS HERE I END IT...TELL HOW WAS MY FORST OS ...N I WANT

MANY LIKES N COMMENTS SO IF NEXT TIME I GET N IDEA ...I CAN

WRITE IT


Edited by taanifan - 12 years ago

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