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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashw99

one word SUPERB!
loved the ending Arnav going to temple i didn't see its coming amazing.
This was beautiful Helee all the loops were properly closed specially Shashi Gupta's.
Good to see Anjali getting married again she deserve to be happy and we can trust Aman with it.
oh before i forget makeover of Mamiji by her grand children too good.
Loved "Baat ta" talks of kidies exactly how it would have been.
Thanks for the best version of ipk.


Thanks a lot dear!
I didn't write more about Mr. Gupta or anyone else because this story had always been about Arnav and Khushi.. I am glad I could bring a closure to all of them 😊

Mamiji ko bhi badalne ka padi 😆

And babies..aah.. I love babies!! 😆

Oh my God, you think this is the best version? No way!!!
Thank you!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nilu_sarunholic

that was tooo goood yaaar

loved it loved it and loved it
thanks for pm


Thank you so much!! Thank you thank you thank you!! 😃

Originally posted by: Jalebiee

Superbb ya!
Perfect ending...
Will miss this part but i knw...you 'll keep us entertainig with new ones...
Thanxx...


Thank you so much!!! 😳
I dunno if I'll start with a new story.. let's see!!


Originally posted by: manikka

wonderful ss dear...


really loved it...


Thank you so much! 😊

Originally posted by: binimoti

I read all the chapter in a go, they were all so brilliant, lovely written, kash the same thing has happened in iss pyaar ko all the instances were so logical and satisfying to read


Thank you for saying that! I feel so good!! 😃
Thank you!! It took some work to get it right..specially the original scenes and all.. And thanks for liking it!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears

Oh it ended already so where is your new story Helee? Waiting for it 😊 As far as last update goes, you gave a proper closure to everyone and Mami said bye bye to those atrocious sarees due to her grand daughter was hilarious. Very beautiful update, love conquers all in the end. Prefect end to an amazing work 😊


My new story??? Aaahh!
Its somewhere out there.. cooking.. and attracting various comments in air-space. 😆
Thank you so much for being with me throughout the story!!
Love does conquer all!! 😊




Thank you!!!
When I quoted your response, it read "surprising nicely written" at first sight 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

u deserve all the appreciation sis🤗


😭 <= Tears of happiness

Originally posted by: aman3354

I totally agree with cheesemad... U really deserve this appreciation..!! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: aman3354

🤗 👍🏼 🤗
Lots of Love...😊


😕 😭 😕

Thank you yaaron!! Seriously! Thank you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally unres'd page 27

Sorry for being late 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hmtxyz


Thank you Komal!! 😊
Khushi has learnt a lot, you know! After all, she had ASR as her teacher! 😉
Thanks for understanding the reason I ended it! 😊
New story... dunno.. maybe? 😊

🤗


y do thank me all the time babes...its not needed...
i totally know u r going to write for us😉
watinggg for a new lovely story😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aman3354

I totally agree with cheesemad... U really deserve this appreciation..!! 👍🏼


see we all agree...ur the best😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely loved this ff!!! V v v good job!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hmtxyz


You shall be the death of me one day 🤢
How am I supposed to respond to such a lovely response from you, except to grin 😃 ?
Thank you so much, Deepti!!
I'm going to miss writing too, and reading your comments!
Writing more? Pata nahi.. lots going on...

But I'll definitely try!!!

🤗 to you too!



Koi ni... write when you get time...😊
I shall be eagerly waiting for your next one...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Firstly, I'm really sorry for un-resing so late.

This chapter was brilliant! It had everything and more. I simply loved it!

I loved Arnav in the first two scenes. 😆 He was super-cool, yo! And behaved like such a newly wed. Super cute.

The flashback was very nice. I loved Arnav's confession and his acceptance of things. Khushi was so strong in the scene. Arnav sounded like such a vulnerable kid. I wanted to hug him!

And coming to the *ahem ahem* scene. Woman on top, then man on top, and then both under water (I mean shower) 😉 👍🏼 Loved it!

Last scene was so lovely!!! I think I loved it the most. It was almost dream-like.

I am married to a man who is brave, yes, the world fears him.

Kind, but only to good people.
Just, yep.
Loving? To his loved ones, yes.
Caring? To the point that you feel he's not taking care of himself when he takes care of you.
Fun loving? His ideas of fun have made me bold and blushing.
Filmy? He will never accept it, but he is filmier than me. Grandiose and dramatic. To the T.

👏
It's not even funny how true that it.
@Red - 😆 I agree! Arnav is sooo dramatic and filmy.


He stops, to my surprise, at the Mandir. And then he climbs up the stairs with me.
And the final miracle happens when he bows his head in front of the Lord's idol.

You know, I'm not a very religious person. And I don't believe in going to temples. But hey it's Arnav! And for him to this for Khushi is just... I loved it here, and I loved it in the show.

Great part! This SS was wonderful. And I understand the need for you to end it where you did. Sometimes, you just can;t stretch things. Can't wait to read more from you.




Hey Pocahontas!
Its absolutely fine, I can understand that life moves beyond I-F. 😆
And you've always let me know your vishesh tippani before, so I had no doubt that you would, even now! 😉

I know its strange that a person who was a devout atheist suddenly goes to the temple and prays, but you caught on to the hidden meaning behind those lines. Its easy to just assume he started believing in God, but the truth is that's not how it happens. He did it to make her happy, and in the process, started having faith..

Thank you for being with me through the fumbles and pitfalls of this story.. To be very honest, it had been your comment on my one-shot that had prompted me to write this story.

Getting encouragement from good people is equally important, as being praised for something anyone can probably do, as I think anyone could have written this story; but you were one of the few people who did encourage me and I shall forever be grateful!

I will try and write something new, but I cannot promise.. You shall get a PM whenever I do!

Cheers!
Helee

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