A SwaRon Short Story: Fairy-Tale Affair ch9, pg53 {The End} - Page 21

lovedd itt very much😊

continue soonish⭐️

So it is great like all the updates and right now I do not have much to say, I might edit it later,

It was penned down so beautifully and so good

It is really nice

Btw the answer to the question, Sharon's mom :D

Had no idea that such a beautiful piece also existed on this earth. Like,seriously. But thankfully I got your pm Di and found it. Yay!!

Its just commendable 👏👏 not just the way you have handled the characters but with the finesse you have developed them and have used them according to the situation. Remarkable!!

I loved how you have put across the past and the present. Its just beautiful. It got me more rotted to the story. I simply loved how Sharon dreamed about him 😆 and the of course their first encounter. It was fiery and passionate. Bang on,I would say. They were forcing themselves on each other which they thought was out of revenge but actually the unknown feelings had already evolved. But Sharon's confession was something that I had not expected at all. It was simple yet had that fire needed for her character and persona. "Her Mud blood'... absolutely loved it And then their fate playing another card on them by making them meet on her own palace. The way you portrayed their emotions was simply classic. The fight to control your desires but eventually falling prey to them.

The chapter that really took me by surprise was of Swayam's revelation. I was really happy to know that he was a prince as well. First I thought that Shraon had left from there because of disappointed but the abductors were really selfish. Amazing portrayal of Swayam and King Martin's concern and love for Sharon.

Coming to the 8th chapter...I just loved how you summed up the story in this by relating it to Swayam and Sharon directly. I could imagine each and everything. Flawless.

Now waiting for the next chapter eagerly. Update soon Di :)

Love Fati 😳