A SwaRon Short Story: Fairy-Tale Affair ch9, pg53 {The End}

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: spicyrays
nyc strtin... swaron in fairy tale updte soon... eager to read dis

Thanks a lot😊

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha
wow...
amazing start...
sorry for being late n thnx for pm...

Thanks a ton.. and no worries,, even I was late to update😉

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Enough for the day,, Tired,. Comments for chapter one,, or prior to chapter two are been replied.. Rest all in the up-coming days..

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky
RES! ! YAAY!! My shenz di is back!! [:D/]

Kab sudheregi???😡

And yes, I am probably back.. 😃

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: aishu3003
Moi 😃
unres

woww this was fabulous⭐️⭐️

well-written⭐️

Sharon callin swayam a mudblood 😲

d endin part was lovelyyy

its gettin more interesting⭐️

waiting for d nxt part😊

Thanks Aishu.. not just for reviewing but also for unreserving..

Well yeah you heard it.. Oops sorry you read it right, she called him Mudblood..

Ending? tujhe sachhi achhi lagi 😆

And about next.. All I can say is Working on it!!!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Hey shenz the update was brilliant I read both the chapters and concluded one thing you're a brilliant writer girl..👍🏼.
I like the intense first meeting of swayam and sharon the haughty and arrogant princess and the stern and proud prince both the individuals so contrasting yet so compatible..😊.
Sharon dreams about swayam every night and ends up making her bed look like she was banged in it in the night hehehe poor thing love makes her hallucinate about swayam..😛.
I like reading the intense swayam and sharon in your ff and the story very intriguing so the next time you update it send me a pm like this time..😃
Love,
Kashmi.🤗

This was the first comment to get a smile back on my face after those reserved comments😛

Well I am not one.. I just try to put up something good, especially on the couples whom I adore and love.😉

I wanted to keep their personalities contrasting.. As there has to be some reason when they say - "Opposites Attract each-other" 😆

Well, the dreaming part was conceptualized long back, its only that I had got the opportunity to jot down the same this late..

Well thanks I will take it as a huge compliment as I don't recieve such all the time😳

And of-course, I don't wanna lose genuine readers like you, So there's no chance of not PMing to you, when I update next 😊

Love,

Shenz.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: rhu90
awesome one... thanks 4 the note...

Thanks a lot dear

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: zk456789
Very nice
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: yogini64
Nyce chappy...😊

Even I was confused that how did swayam landed in a princess room... despite of so much security...😳

These maids disturbed Sharon when she was dreaming their hot encounter... not fair...😛

Rofl.. her bedsheets tells story of her desires n frustration of not having him around ... still it gets the other way...😆

What did he said to his family abt her btw?? &when did he got her pendant?? Its full of mysteries... 🤪

She's really bad mouthed... her pride n ego has blinded her from human emotions... 😡

& he gave her a Good dose of punishment... nyce... 😉

He has really changed this rude princess in a lovestruck teenager girl... love can do wonders 😃

Well when I was typing it, I just found it to be hilarious to have put something like that.. I mean its embarrassing, isn't it? 🤣

And about the pendant well he had got it while their horse riding😆 Those oldies aren't a part of his family, he belongs to the Asian territory and those oldies reside in the kingdom ruled by Sharon's father, Martin. - European territory and Russian territory. So there's basically no connection between them 😛

Well yes, status does make people blind for human emotions, I have experienced it myself. Of course she did get a good dose, but she was even determined to make him pay for his harshness😉 So there you might get something like ________________

Yeh blank aap khud soch kar fill karo😛 Lets see aap kitna match kar paate ho Sharon ke views ko😆😆

And yes love can do wonders and it has done😉

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: -Marium-
Firstly, Wah wah wah wah wah! 👏
Like seriously! What are you, Shenz? 😳

A girl😛 Simply a girl 😆

You just got me addicted to this SS with one single chapter!? Like Sharon is frustrated and needy for Swayam, same as me for this awesome SS. 😆

I would suggest don't get addicted I have people banging me for non-frequent updates, I have quite a record with that. But I don't think one can get addicted to a SS with JUST one chapter.. Not possible, girl. By the way it's been two chapters 😛

And of course addiction of anything is injurious 😆

I am really needy for this SS, man! 😛 You write so amazingly, girl. I mean the way you pen the story line which each scene so wonderfully that is stunned me like anything.

Now I can't take this much goody-goody words about me. Yes, it does feel good, In fact more than good, it feels great.. But I guess there are people who write better than this.. in front of whom I am nothing 😊 But if you say you are need I will try to get the update done sooner.

I loved how you showed Sharon thinking of Swayam, like he was in her every thought. I so loved how you showed the old century, rather very old. OMG Swayam must look hot in that ballon sleeves shirt and tight pants and Sharon, ah don't even ask.

Well, I wanted them to look royal, classy as well as hot and sexy😉 And they can look that way in every attire they get into, isn't it?

You made me imagine every single thing you wrote in it since you write just so beautifully that it had a huge impact on me with every single line! 🤗

Thanks, and so was your review I had a smile throughout. You have an impact on writing reviews beautifully.

OMG! Swayam is such a cheez! He kissed her, ab woh kisi bhi wajah se kia ho... but he kissed her! ☺️ I so wanna see them passionate in coming updates because normally people of that century wasn't into such things but i would love to see oh so in love and passionate SwaRon! 😎

Well of course, both of them are.. The tow are hot-headed, short-tempered individuals. I at times bother what if the love story doesn't bloom and I end up with an abrupt SwaRon. This thing bothers me a lot. I just hope it goes with the flow and I can put it the way I have imagined.

Great update, dude! (Oops, i tent to saw dude everyone!) 🤣

It's fine dude!! 😆 And of course, you are getting me addicted to your reviews, this might be a big time trouble for you 😳