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Posted: 12 years ago

Chap 9: Secrets Yet To Be Revealed

Sharon turned around with a victory smirk but as soon as her eyes fall on Swayam who was lying on floor holding his wound which was bleeding like hell. The sword in her hand falls on the floor and she gasps and runs to him. she puts her hand on his wound trying to stop the bleeding. He screams in pain as soon as her hand touches the wound. Tears roll down from Sharon's eyes she was cursing herself from inside for hurting Swayam. She was guilty and panicked soon she called Rey and Taani for help. They came rushing in the place where Swaron were practicing sword fight.

"Swayam" yelled Rey rushing in the room. Rey kept Swayam's head on his lap and tries to lift him up but he was in pain and couldn't even move properly. Taani was silently crying sitting beside Reyam. "It's entire my fault. I hurt him but I didn't mean too" Sharon said with her head dropped down and tears continuously falling down her eyes. Rey looked up at Sharon in anger but seeing her crying he melted. He couldn't totally blame her as she didn't know that he was shot early in the process of saving her. rey in frustration says to Sharon "its not your fault Sharon. Its his woun..." he was cut by taani "he means its not a deep cut don't worry Sharon bhai will be fine lets go to the medical room." Taani signaled Rey not to say anything and they went for the medical room.

Sharon was confused of what Rey was trying to say and why Taani interrupted and cut him off. She also didn't understand why Swayam was bleeding that much. According to Taani it wasn't deep cut than why he was in so much pain? Why was he bleeding like that? Taarey and Sharon was standing outside the medical room where Swayam was being treated. Taani comes and sits beside Sharon "bhai will be fine. He is a fighter. He will come out fit and fine." Taani gave a weak smile to Sharon showing that everything is okay but deep inside she was worried for her bhai. Sharon smiled back and says "may be you are right. He will be fine" I know there is something you are hiding from me Taani and I will find it out soon. But not now as I know you are really worried for your bhai but this secret will soon be revealed. I will find out the secret you, Rey and Swayam are hiding from me thought Sharon. "umm I think you both should go home. I will stay here with Swayam and keep you guys updated. Make sure you both eat something before going to bed" says Rey to Shani looking at Taani while saying the eating part as he knows that she will skip the meal cause of tension and worrying for her bhai. Taani smiles at Rey and both Shani leaves for the house and Rey stays back with Swayam.

Swayam could feel the silence that was surrounding him. The only voice was the beeping sound of the cardio transmitter, indicating he was alive. His eyes struggled to open, his body aching from the rest of long time. He tried to open his eyes against the blinding light. He hissed and shut them again. Then after few flutters, he opened them again. His eyes then surveyed the room. There was no one in the room. But in the corner of a ceiling, he noticed a micro camera. He sighed. He will never give up playing with gadgets. He tried to move a little but the pain in his shoulder made him hiss and lay back. Just then he heard the door opening. "hey Sherlock how are u feeling now?" ask Rey sitting beside him with full concentration. "Am fine ansh" said Swayam give him a small smile. "swayu is getting wounded is your fav hobby ? I don't understand it why only you get hurt?" rey ask in an angry tone, "i said am fine ansh" said swayam "fine ? are kidding me? u have got stitches again at the same bloody place for the second time" rey said in total angry tone. swayam was about to get up when rey shouted at him. "stop don't get up ..u have to take rest did u get it?" said rey . "yes sir "said swayam . just then sharon enterd into the room "hmm hie "said sharon look at reyam. "hie sharon" both the boys said in unicon. "okay guys i have some imp issue to deal with so i have to leave ..hmm sharon will u take care of swayam?" said rey making an excuse to leave. "ya sure rey" said sharon sitting beside swayam. rey left frm dere unknwly he banged into taani who was coming into the room .and taani lost her balance and was about to fall but rey saved her and held her in his arms safely. she closed her eye in fear of hitting the ground but soon she realized that she was not gng to hit to the ground opnd her eyes to see herslf in rey's arm as soon as she opend her eye she was lost in his chocolate brown eye's. the same was with him ,soon both came back to there sense and stood straight , "sorry" both said in unicon. "swayu ke pas jarahey ho?" askd rey looking at Taani "ah kyu?" ask taani. "but moti we have some work to do now ..u can check swayam later as now he is busy with sharon ..we still didn't track the address of the devil right now lets do it" said rey to taani. "well i have come over here to discuss about it only ..i have track it , the devil is hidden in the old oil factor in the outskirts of the city" said taani. "wow.that grt now it my trun to strat working ..will you pls help me out?" ask rey . "yup sure" said taani. both left to DR and rey strtd working on the plan and taani was helping him. mean while with swaron, "hmm wo am really sorry swayam..i didn't mean to hurt u" said sharon looking at him. "hey its okay siren ..there is no need to say sorry" said swayam giving her a smile. "okay so how are you feeling now?" sharon ask placing her hand on his shoulder "ah" swayam hissed in pain. "am sorry was it really hurting?" said sharon in a caring tone. "nope ..it was not " swayam said keeping his hand on hers and giving her a fake smile assuring her that he is fine...soon they both were into there long convo. here with rey "so finally done with the plan" said rey looking at his planning map..

*The End*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nic update loved it...

Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..simply Awesome👏👏..
read all 9 parts in one go only :)
you both are awesome writer👍🏼..
loved every bit of it❤️..
Taarey n Swaron first kiss was amazing😳
swayam save sharon without caring about himself..aww swayam is always like this only..
thank god he is now fine..n what sharon dad is kidnap😲..poor sharon feeling really bad for her..
loved ReYam convo😃
becoz of shivam rey avoiding tani..
what rey again kiss her😲
tani n rey both share their feeling swayam aww..
n Swayam is Best friend n brother😳he understand both of them so well..
Swaron face to face..
Swayam knows sharon more than she knows herself..thats again proven right hehe..
their little nok jhok was so cute..
their HQ seems cool place..you guys describe well.
they got video..poor sharon n her dad feeing bad for both of them..
Swayam again console sharon n i just loved swayam lines ❤️
aww taarey were missing each other so badly..
they are so stupid hehe..good thing they talk to swayam but still it would be more better if they talk to each other n sort the problem na😊
taarey found clue at the same time...yipee..
great going taarey ;)
Sharon is also now in their group:)
all reach the place..taarey scene was cute there😳
what there was no one..but still rey found watch that to special one..
that shivam😡
poor tani,she was so hurt..that her so called bbf did this..
n sharon,she was in her siren mode n want to kill that shivam right there..
only swayam can handle sharon..so true rey hehe
Rey teasing Swayam part was so cute..totally loved it..
reyam bit shivam so bad that he speak the truth haha..he deserve this..Go ReYam Go 😆
what an plan swayam..You are the Best😳
shivam haha,"maine kaha hu,maine kon hu🤣
aww rey cover sharon with blanket..
poor tani still crying over that shivam..but when rey is there then why to fear right hehe
rey's maggie awesome banihogi😆
he console tani n they are back together😃
my swayam make that gadget working all night toh awesome toh honahi tha..seriously love the gadget alot..it was so cool.. my Swayam is super Intelligent😳
SwaRon sword fight was awesome..
swayam shoulder bleeding :( hope sharon got to know about this soon..
again she didn't get to know about swayam injure :(
poor sharon crying n poor tani she couldnot cry also so as to console sharon..
loved the concern rey had to all n specially tani..making sure she eats😃
swayam is fine yipee..
loved reyam convo..
commanding rey n cute swayam😳
taarey scene was cute😳..they need to go back to work..great job tani n rey👍🏼
Swaron part was also cute😳
sorry for super long comment😳got so excited i didn't realise i write this long comment😆hehe
plz plz update soon.
n don't forget to pm me ;)

Edited by anushka1129 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
Aww Sharon feel guilty for hurting Swayam
I love Reyam bond that they share...
Rey know Taani so well, by telling indirectly that she needs to eat
Amazing job guys
Yahh Swayam woke up, hope he feels better soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
loved the bond between reyam and the way sharon is worried that swayam is injured because of her
and rey taani ko kitna achhe se janta hai and the way he cared for her
nice and cute

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...
poor sharon...
she was feeling so very bad
hurting swayam...
fight toh fight hota hai.
intentionally nahi kiya but...
swayam bohot injure hua na...
and wound pe wound...
poor fellow...
and i am smelling chemistry...
but kya hide kr rahe they???
anyways... taarey scene was awww...
loved it so much!
and ab aayega mazaa!!!
taarey plan!!!
waiting 4 it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an update,..
Seriously loved it..
ShaTaaRey were so worried for Swayamm.
And Rey's anger to see his best buddy hurt..
But it even melted seeing tears in Sharon's eyes..
And Taani!!
Though she herself was damn worried was trying to console Sharon and calm the situation down..
Sharon understood that they are trying to hide something..
Poor Swayam..
he got stitches two times on the same place.
He was in so much pain..
Really loved the ReYam scene..
the care of Rey for Swayam cold be seen clearly..
And then loved how Rey left SwaRon alone..
Sharon was feeling so guilty for unknowingly hurting him..
And Then The TaaReyy scene..
Awww.. So cute they are..
Hospital main bhi start hogaye..
Loved that Eye Lock..
What did TR plan..
So eagerly waiting..
Do update soon, dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply Awesome👏👏
loved the bond f reyam
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was wonderful update

Rey maggie nd his antics to stop her crying.

She eating maggie like a kid nd rey teasing her
Swaron sword fight was amazing.
nd Swayam injured in Sword fight

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