The Fantastic Four (SS & TR FF) thread 2 posted - Page 54

Originally posted by: dh19

awesome.
loved the way rey consoling taani

loved the fight sequence between swaron.

Originally posted by: austen4ever

how can anyone mess up maggie!! poor guy, lol.

the swordfight was very well described. such sequences.are tough to pen down n usually become confusing but u did a great job. i guess now sharonz about to find out that swayam z not as much of a loser as she thinks.

p.s- that suit was every superhero's dream suit.

Originally posted by: sonisam22

Superb update...👏

"I so wanted to beat Shirritating again until he breathe his last breath but I couldn't"
i loved it... Rey is so angry with Shivam...

Loved Rey - Taani scene...😆

Swayam - Sharon part has been beautifully written... wow just wow...

Thanks for pm...😊

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

Awesum yr rey cooked maagiee for taani nd he too told cry on it but nt on dt betrayer..hug n kiss aww too cute lubd it swaron sword fight ws superbb

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Awesome ff

Read all the chaps...they were amazing

Really loved it😛

Plz update soon pm me too

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Superb update guys
Love Rey pov, him making Maggie for his moti was so sweet
I love the way he cheer her up
Swayam new invention is super cool
Swaron sword fight was nice until Swayam get hurt
The chapter was beautifully written

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Amazing update, dear..

Awww.. My Rey cooked maggie for her..

He was not able to see tears in her eyes..

I loved that part..

Both of them were so cute..

Her cute expressions..
And his cute pouts..

Loved how Rey told her not to cry for that betrayer..

And to cry over his maggie..

hahahaha.. Loved their hug..

And then the forehead kiss..

What an amazing gadget..

I wish it was real..lol

To main kya kya nahi karti..

SwaRon Sword fight was greatly described..

OMG!! FLUX And all..😲😆

Nahiii!! Physics..😆

Anyways, loved the update,..

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey

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As always fantastic update!!!! 👏 ...n d best thing dat har update me taarey scenes r sooo cute!!!!😳
awe i didnt know tr scenes r cute in each update

Rey coming home n finds sharon sleeping...n covers her wid a blanket!!! Loved dis part!!

i know it was cute 😊
Rey was hungry...n was gng to d kitchen n peeped in taani's room!! She was cryong n pieces of paper were lying around!!! 😲 ... rey felt bad seeing her cry!! N he knows her soo well!! He knew she would hav skipped her meal!! 😳

yeah she is his moti have to know her 😳
He went to cook for both of dem... n realized he didnt knew cooking...dat was actually funny🤣..
Yummmyyy!!!! Magggieee!!! I so luv it!!😆 Rey making maggie for her...dat was really sooo sweet!!😳
Omg!!! Maggie bhi banane nahi aati... 😲 ...is he dat miserable in cooking!! ... 🤣
😆 i guess rey cant cook anything poor guy 😔

He knocked at her door... why did he do dat? Use bhi nai pata n even taani was shocked!! Actually even i was confused...is it because he was nervois or something lyk dat!! Dunno!! 😛 😆
i dont know either

Taani hiding dose piecies of paper... n rey started to eat first... though he wasnt being a gentleman...still it was soo cute afterall he was trying to lighten or divert taani's mind!! 😳...N taani's reaction..😆.. she snatched d bowl n started eating!!! Awww...rey was adoring her!!😳
lol yeah taani's smile mattered more than manners 😉

Rey saw dose paper pieces n it was shivam's photo..his possessive side!! He wanted d same to happen wid shivam!! Taani was on d verge of crying n rey didnt wanted dat to happen n so he again snatched d bowl of maggie!! N wen offered taani refused... he tried to feed her wid his hands... awww!!! Dat was soo sweet!!!😊😳...n taani jerked his hands away!! 😔...n hamaara rey got angry...gusse me bhi kya bola ... i never entered a kitchen!!!🤣
lol yeah i didnt realize it was that funny unless i read ur comment 😳 😆

Even taani laughed at dat n rey was looking soo cuttee!!!😳... taani hugged him n started crying... n rey wiped her tears.. n told her not to cry for dat traiter... d entire scene was soo sweet n den d way taani said yummmyy... rey couldnt stop himself frm adoring her!!! 😳... she slept n he kissed her forehead n was feeling nice!!!! Awww😳
taani hai itni cute koi kya kar skta hai

Next day swayam called dem n vo suit wala gadget!!! Omg... iss gadget ke saamne to superman ..batman...spiderman...sab fail hain!!! 😆😆... it was really awesome!!

lol 🤣
N den swaron ka sword fight... my goodness... hatsoff for dat yaar... d way u wrote it... all their movements n d action scenes... u defined it soo well!! It seemed so real...speechless im!! 👏 👏 😳 ... pehle sharon 1 point n den swayam 10 pts!!😆 ...his way of defrating sharon was mindblowing...opened her hairs!! 😆 N den sharon ka kaali mata ka avatar!!🤣...swayam was sp scared dat he would never touch her hairs ever... actually anyone's hair🤣
all dis was renu's efforts she did a fab job with sword fight 👏 lol kaali mata 😆

His shoulder was bleeding n became unconcious!! 😲 😲 ... n sharon was soo scared n worried!!!

awe dont worry he will b fine have to fulfill his promise to Sharon
Pls pls update soon... really waiting eagerly!!!!! 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

loved swaron sword f8
bt for me taarey scene ws bit odd
i dnt knw why
bt still i liked it
it ws kind of cute

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
Loved swaron sword's fight
Swayam's shoulder is bleeding
Waiting for next part