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Originally posted by: prerna1

hi dear
i had no problem with flashback initially but now it seems very long and confusing too
if you dont mind try to cut it short and to the point
sometimes the flashback is way too detailed with not much thing in it
i like this story but somehow loosing interest due to this long flashbacks.
And also plz clarify the character of Raj sometimes you have introduced him a ok character then after sometime as a negative character. Where the original khushi according to your story fits in all this.
And if Raj is bad and pari left due to his and khushi then why he is still with singhanias

Hope you understand and clear my doubts soon

Originally posted by: kbtr

Flashbacks are OK, as they clarify the past, but not if they come in between ArShi. But sometimes, they can be confusing. I like the triangle with Raj (sometimes confused, is he a good guy or a bad guy?) But I don't want ANYTHING or ANYBODY between ArShi, now. Pari (the new Kushi) should only have happiness, now.

Thanks for asking. You are one of the few interactive writers on IF, giving your readers what they want! Awesome!!

Thanks, also, for taking the time to write and share your story!😃

Originally posted by: Archu61

I would do the flashback but a condensed version and explain why pari became khushie it gets a little confusing ,otherwise to keep track of all your secondary characters where they fit in ,idea is good but try and edit it a little and bring the present story in it too

Originally posted by: saima4744

dear thanks u u took our opinion.

w do not have any problem with flashback.

Originally posted by: riafna

Arnav and Khushi and Ipk related characters and one or two character like Chahat and Raj(he is villain ) keep them and Ansh is need soon he is going to be Anjali's pair keep them and i think we know their life style and their day to day life is not needed and if it needed present track can have a small fb track not like this.ITS an Arshi ff we are missing our Arshi even Khushi is not there its Pari there. Are you hurt? No intentions to hurt you . I felt like this...

Hey thnx fr keeping a poll, i srsly feel der is a need fr flash back, to understnd d stry bttr but these falsh backs are really very long nd to a extent its confusing, so if it is possible fr u to cut shrt dem and again brng bck to d arshi track d stry wud be interesting

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnx fr keeping a poll, i srsly feel der is a need fr flash back, to understnd d stry bttr but these falsh backs are really very long nd to a extent its confusing, so if it is possible fr u to cut shrt dem and again brng bck to d arshi track d stry wud be interesting

no d flashbak part is going on well..bt just edit it a lil nd ya as m a arshi fan ,will love 2 c arhi nd waiting eagerly...

Originally posted by: piyaaich

no d flashbak part is going on well..bt just edit it a lil nd ya as m a arshi fan ,will love 2 c arhi nd waiting eagerly...

Originally posted by: salooni

i understood you i will keep it arshi ff only. and i am not hurt but sad that you all told it when i ask it would be better if you all have consider right on me and said it friendly.

next time onwards like your elder sis i will tell you. Pakka.