very important for all my reader

hi my readers

To say, we are really missing Arshi but I think the flashback is also important... bcoz the running track cannot be ended abruptly and u may end it a bit fast if more votes are for Arshi track. It would be better if it ends faster but not without clarifying everyone's relation with Khushi.

hi dear
i had no problem with flashback initially but now it seems very long and confusing too
if you dont mind try to cut it short and to the point
sometimes the flashback is way too detailed with not much thing in it
i like this story but somehow loosing interest due to this long flashbacks.
And also plz clarify the character of Raj sometimes you have introduced him a ok character then after sometime as a negative character. Where the original khushi according to your story fits in all this.
And if Raj is bad and pari left due to his and khushi then why he is still with singhanias

Hope you understand and clear my doubts soon

Flashbacks are OK, as they clarify the past, but not if they come in between ArShi. But sometimes, they can be confusing. I like the triangle with Raj (sometimes confused, is he a good guy or a bad guy?) But I don't want ANYTHING or ANYBODY between ArShi, now. Pari (the new Kushi) should only have happiness, now.

I would do the flashback but a condensed version and explain why pari became khushie it gets a little confusing ,otherwise to keep track of all your secondary characters where they fit in ,idea is good but try and edit it a little and bring the present story in it too

Arnav and Khushi and Ipk related characters and one or two character like Chahat and Raj(he is villain ) keep them and Ansh is need soon he is going to be Anjali's pair keep them and i think we know their life style and their day to day life is not needed and if it needed present track can have a small fb track not like this.ITS an Arshi ff we are missing our Arshi even Khushi is not there its Pari there. Are you hurt? No intentions to hurt you . I felt like this...

dear thanks u u took our opinion.

Originally posted by: yashu_95

To say, we are really missing Arshi but I think the flashback is also important... bcoz the running track cannot be ended abruptly and u may end it a bit fast if more votes are for Arshi track. It would be better if it ends faster but not without clarifying everyone's relation with Khushi.

Originally posted by: jm020

I agree with yashu_95 missing Arshi but the flashback tracks are important to find out what and how the relations with pari and Khushi are so ending it abruptly wouldn't make sense

Jenny x