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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow!! wow!! wow!!

beautiful os

loved it

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

itna bada os
omg
type kese karli itna sara
any ways os was awsome
n finally kria n rey become kriyaansh
the way rey getting jealous of swayum n grooms brother
was so funny
thanks for this os

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Shreya

@krasforever

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

ni re if dis os would have been double or triple in length of wat it is now, even then i wud have liked it as much as m liking it now or may be more *if it is even possible to like it more*...

n yes with this os u reduced our frustration too😊

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Crazy_Arshi

@Crazy_Arshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awsome os
Loved kriyam's bonding ,rey's possessivness ,his confession in short loved the whole os
Keep writing n entertaining us

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

i'm left speechless ...

nowords to describe this os

it is the best i've ever read ( n even the longest one 😉)

just wow

actually any adjective would be an understatement

this totally awesome

luved it

i mean it was just mind blowing ...

thanxx for the pm ...

once again the os was just above expectations ...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

amazing...👏

its fab... enjoyed reading it 😃

itna lamba kaise likh leti h yaar?? 😆

iss delhi k contract ne kitno ko bhala kar diya na 😛

hehehe... swayam ka ye roop pehli baar dekha h.. 🤪

kriyam .. rofl... rey ko dara diya 🤣

superb twists n turns...👍🏼

achha h rey ne sab sun liya.. smriti kriya ka convo...😳

poor rey... kriya sabse baat karing .. but rey ko ignoring

ye bachelor party skip karne ka idea to aur bhi mast h 😆

happy confession... aww.. my cute kriyaansh..

shaadi bhi ho gyi 😲

lovemaking ke liye tu hamesha license dilva deti h vaise...😉

its perfect 👏

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Mehek Asaria

@Sweet.Sarcastic

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

i dnt know what 2 say...
i mean it is just awesome..
beautiful mindblowing...
how can u write re-unions so well man..
being honest..
as im mre of taani fan..
when u said about taani finding some1 who loves only her i thought u would show a little taani-prem..
but nevertheless..
it was A FABULOUS OS!!!
and fida dii..
u gave us lots of romance 2day..
cant believe u gave so much romance..
lol...
keep writing..

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DocSNair

@Mukthaa

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow...super duper os yr...dnt know what to
say...mindblowing...fantastic work..
I know u r a very talented writer.so when I saw the pm I expected a lot but I must
say it was even beyond my expectation...beautifully written...more than perfect.
Thanx a lot for such a wonderful work...a big thanx to the challenget also

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

haye u made my day loved it

super awesome

story

loved it

really awesome u made my day

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Wow!!!

This was a truly amazing os!

Loved the way u described every single thing

KriYam's convo was super cute...and jealous Rey hayeee...and although I dislike Taani, I really loved the way u portrayed Swayam's concern for his sister

Really awesome piece of work

Hatzzz off 👏

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