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chapter one...



Hey guyz how r u all thanx 4 appriciate us '. I love u guyz n ur lovely comments '. So perious 4 us ' now here the story begain '. !! PLZ FORGIVE ME FOR MY GRAMITICAL MISTAKE '.

Chahu mai ya na '


Chapter 1

In aarohi's room ..

Aarohi come closer to her vordrop'.n open it' she select her dress ' she wear a cool jeans n a sexy white top '. N than she come close to her dressing table luk at herself n doing some make up '

suddenly 1 voice came in her back side '.

She turn around luk that the person who is talking 2 her '.

Jiya : wow someone luking hawt '. today !! oh hello mam kya apko apne hone wale boss ko apne pe latu karwana hai ? tabhi apne this kind of dress pheni hai '. !!

Aarohi: really but mai ithni achi nhi lag rhi hu !! so plz jiu stop teasing '. Me haa nhi tho !! (n rolled her eyez)

Jiya: oh plz aaruooo luk at ur self !! esa lag rha hai that u r not going for ur interview that u r going for ur date (n she winked her)

Aarohi: oh plz yr ' !!! aagar date pe jati tho tujhe sath lekar jati ' !!

Jiya:haye aruoo ithna pyaar ' !!

Aarohi: vo kya hai na tu mera time pass kar deti '. !!

Jiya : ye bath tho hai !! vese tujhe ptha hai agar salman khan yha hota na '. Tho tujhe dekh kar melt icecream ho jata '.

Aarohi: really '. ?

Jiya: really !!!

Aarohi: thanqu thanqu !!

Jiya:ur welcome !!

Aaohi: jiu now I m very late '. So bye (she kiss on her chiks) n take care of urself '.

Jiya:tu meri dost nhi baby sitter hai ms. Haa nhi tho ' !!

Aarohi: vo kya hai na aap jaise bache ke liye thoda sa sticket ban na padta hai '. Varna jiju (salman khan) ko bura lag jayega ki unki pyaari si jiya ko humne sudhara nhi haa nhi tho ' !!

Jiya: badi aai jiju ki side lene wali ' !! (she rolled her eyes wid attitude)

N they brust out laugh ' (n they both huged each other)

Aarohi: bye '. !!! (huged her)

Jiya: bye '.!!! (huged her back) One second '. wait I miss something ' !!

Aarohi: plz hurry yr I m already very late !!!

Jiya: ya I forgot to tell u'. tonight party'

Aarihi:party ?

Jiya: ya teri job lagne ki khushi mai'. !!

Aarohi: jiya meri job lagi nhi hai !!!

Jiya: I m just kidding babzz'.actually its royal party ' n

Aarohi: n ???

Jiya: I got a two passes'. !!

Aarohi: r u serious ' !!

Jiya: yes babz ' !!!

Aarohi: but how u get this pass ' !! ye tho royals ki party hai na !!

Jiya: vo kya hai na '. Hume sab jante hai tho '. Passes arange karwana konsi badi bath !!

Aarohi: kya bath hai !!

Jiya: ye hi tho meri bath hai '. !! vese tujhe late nhi ho rha ' !!

Aarohi: ya I forget thanx for remined me chal bye ' !!

Jiya: bye !!

In other side '.!!

Uday in his room '. !!

N talk to someone in phn '. !!!

Person: yr plz for god sake ye kaam tho tu badh mai bhi kar sakta hai '. But if today u r not come so I will kill u '. Or fir koi ye bhi nhi khe payega hum yuvraj udayveer singh hai hume kon maar sakta hai n u know very well mai tujhe maar sakta hu !!

Uday: wow !! rahul I tell u something bachpan mai tu humare hath se ithna pita hai ' fir bhi nhi sudhra ' abhi bhi pitne wale kaam kar rha hai !!

Rahul: bhai phele hi bol rha hu tujhe ana hai '. Or unnati ko bhi le aai yo'' yr royals party hai tera tho ana bantha hai agar tu nhi aya tho mai party throw nhi kar rha n u know wat j vb bhi aa rhe hai '. So plz maze aayege !!

Uday: oh j also coming '. !! fine tho hum bhi aa jayege '. Actually humare ko achi company mil jayegi !! or choti ok bhi sath le ayege vb ko company mil jayegi '' !!

Rahul: or mujhe kon company dega ' ?

Uday: tumhari tanhai '.

Rahul: ye koi ladki hai kya '. !!

Uday: actually I m talking ur lonliness'.

Rahul: ohh '. !! sorry my mistake

Uday: its kk !! vese ye party throw kha kar rha hai tu '. !!

Rahul: are uday niwas mai '.. !!

Uday: kya bath hai kya jga chuni hai ab tho humare ko definetly ana padega '. !!

Rahul: sure '. !! chal bye take care of urself '. !!!

Uday: bye !!

Call cut when a waiter knok the door '!!

Uday:come inside !!

Waiter: sorry sir when I disturb u '. But a boy who is on phn .. he just talk to u' !!

Uday: who is he ?

Waiter: sir he is akash '. !!!

Uday : fine !! give it 2 me '.

Waiter give him a phn' !! n he asked for leave '. Uday agreed '. n waiter is gone ' !!

Uday :akash wat happened ? something is wrong ?

Akash: I just tell u '. Today '.. u can select ur secatory '. many girls r there '. For interview so sir u r coming !!

Uday : yes ' unhe bethake rakho '. I m coming '. !!

He sit on his car '. N start driving ' !!!

Aarohi calling for auto '.

Auto stop in left side n she is standing in right side of road ' she luked at him n than walk to the auto '. Side ..she don't know'1 car come close to hit her ' she luked at the car n she think now death is coming for her ' n no one can rescue her '. She close her eyez titlly she think she is dreaming'. A car driver '.. shocked to see her like this ' he hit the breaks '.. !! car stop'. In 2 inches where the girl is standing ' !! person come out his car '. !!

Person : oh hello miss jhasi ki rani '. Marne ka ithna hi shock hai tho kisi or ki gaadi ke niche aake maro na roka kisne hai '. !! ha ab hum samjhe humari car ke niche ane mai bhoth fayeda hai na ' isliye humari car ke niche marne aa gayi '. Jha amir admi ki car dekhi nhi'. bas kud jate hai uski car ke samne'

Aarohi: oh hello mujhe apni jaan se bhoth pyaar hai or apne aap ko marne ka koi shock nhi '. Or tum ho kon kahi ke yuvraaj ho kya ? ye sadak tumhari hai ? tum kya traffic police wale ho ? kon ho tum ' ? how dare to talk me like that ?

Person: ha hai hum !! yuvraaj'.

Aarohi:bas tum jaise log hote hai'. jo road ko bhi apni riyasat samjh kar rakhte hai haa nhi tho '.

Person: oh hello mr . jhasi ki rani ' tum humari car ke samne aayi thi '. !! or ye road hai.. koi garden nhi

Aarohi: acha tho tumhare khene ka mathlab hai galti meri thi'. Kon apni akhe band kar ke gaadi chala rha tha '. Agar mujhe kuch ho jata tho kya hota mera !!

Person: let me guess '. Tum ek middle class famliy se belong karti ho right ' !!

Aarohi: oh hello middle class family se belong karti ho tho kya ? insaan nhi hu ?

Person: tum jasi ladki mai ithna gussa ?

Aarohi: tho kya ab gussa karne hak bhi tum amiro ka hai' sorry galti ho gayi aage se yaad rakhungi '. !! (she join her both hands n she luked at him wid angrey luk )

When a traffic police man come ' !!

Police: suniye aap dono '. Yha se nikaliye dekhiye aap dono ki wajh se traffic ho gaya hai '.so aap dono nikalte ho yaa aap dono ka chalan katu ' !!

Aarohi: oh hello police uncle ji'. for kind information mai car nhi chala rhi thi tho mera chalan kyu katoge maine kya kiya hai ?

Police: oh hello madam road par shaut karna or traffic karna it's a big crime '. Aap dono jail bhi ja sakte ho !!

Person: jail tum jante ho hum kon hai !!!

Police: kon hai aap ' ?

Person: hum yuv'. !!

Aarohi: pagal insaan ' psycho ' idiot ' !!

Person: tum apna introduction badh mai dena unhone mera introduction manga hai '. !!

Aarohi: ohh mujhe nhi ptha tha ki tum psycho ke sath sath gajini bhi ho koi bath nhi thik ho jaoge actually ye mai tumhara introduction de rhi hu ' !!

Police:aap dono chup ho jaiye nhi chaiye mujhe kisi ka introduction '. !!!

Aarohi: par '. !!

Police: in dono police station le chalo

Aarohi: huh mai vese hi late ho rhi hu or tumhari is car ki vajh se ab mujhe jail bhi jana padega '. !!

aarohi suddenly luk at down she luked a small stone '. N put on her hand '. She luked that person wid angry luk than luked the police man than she throw the stone his car glass ' glass is totally broken ' !!!

Person: wat the f#@k !! tumhe tumne kya kiya '. !! u know who I m ?

Aarohi: I know who u r '. !! u r a panotii ' get lost !!

N she trying to go '. but the Person who is really angry wid her' hold her weast '. N trun around very forcefully '. Manyta very close to him n now she met a brown choclaty eyez she luked at those eyez who hipnotize her '. She have no words to say anything ' he lukz her wid angry luk ' !!

Person: listen hum nhi jante tum kon ho but iski tumhe bharpai tho karni padegi '!!

aarohi luk at those eyez she luk like a dumb stuck ' her hair is coming her face for disturbing both eyecontact '. He took his hand on her face n put her hairs side she didn't know wat he is doing she just close her eyez n feel it '. !!!

suddenly she back her sense n she pushed him wid full of energy but he didn't moved ' !! every one who is standing the road luk at them and smiling at them '. !!

than she scrach on his hand '.. he luked his hand n aarohi is run there as fast as than suddenly she stop luked turn around 'n she shout on the road ' (EK DIN DEKH LUNGI TUJHE)

person is smiling at her '. N said (VO DIN HUM BHI ZAROOR DEKHNA CHAIYEGE MS. JHASI KI RANI) (wid his killer smirck)

NOW MANYTA(aarohi) REACHED HER DESTINATION'. (uday niwas)

She take a long deep breath n shout to herself'. !!

Arohi don't be narvous mountain dew le pi sidha jake beth jaaiyo us sit pe aarohi u got this job yes I got this job '. Ye job tere liye bani hai aarohi jo bhi vha bethe hai just apna time waist kar rhe hai yes sab apna time waist kar rhe hai ya '. Ya I got it '. !!

One man who watch her wid weared face '. !!he come close to her n put his hand on her sholder she turn around n luke that person '

Person: r u kk ? something is wrong wid u ?

Aarohi: sorry vo actually andar mera first interview hai so I m getting narvous '.. or seriously mujhe nhi ptha mai kya kya bol rhi hu mera first interviw hai na mujhe dar lag rha hai or mai pagal ho rhi hu agar mujhe ye job nhi milli tho oh my god '. ( she said in one breath)

Person: hey ''''.. !!! take a breath in take a breath out '. !! now u r kk ?

Aarohi: thanx mai narvous hoti hu na tho chikhna shuru kar deti hu '. !!!

Person: don't be narvous I know u r trying ur best '. !!! because u r the best '.. !! so chill kk !! u get some water ?

Aarohi: no thanx !!

Person: gud by the way hey I m aakash !!

Aarohi: hey !! tum bhi yahi kaam karte ho !!

Aaskash: actually I m a manger of uday niwas ' !! n uday is my boss !!

Aarohi: tumhare boss bhoth stiricket hai kya ?

Aakash: vo tho bilkul bhi stricket nhi hai '. Or vo employes se bhoth ache se bath karte hai !!

Aarohi: uufff mai tho bekar mai ithni tension le rhi thi !!!

Aakash: waise tumne nhi bthaya !!

Aarohi: kya ?

Aakash: name ?

Aarohi: oh srry my name is aarohi !!

Aakash: aarohi ? aage ?

Aarohi: nhi just aarohi !!!

Aakash: nice name ' !!

Aarohi: thanx ' !!

Suddenly one girl call her name ' !!

Girl: who is aarohi ?

Aarohi: that's me ' !!

Girl: aarohi sir is calling u !!

Aarohi nodded ' !!

Aarohi: bye aakash!!

Aakash: bye n ya all the best n I know u got this job ' !!!

Aarohi: finger crossed ' !!!

Aakash smile ' at her ' !! she give him smile back

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

Manyta(aarohi) entered uday's office' !!

Aarohi: may I come in sir '. !!

She don't see his face because he's seat turn on the wall side ' !!

Uday is now shock he thought(humne ye awaz kahi suni hai) he turns his chair n luked at her

Aarohi: sir ye meri '''''' ? she just luk at him wid big shock ''.. she wasn't believe in her eyez ' !!

Uday just luk at her wid a killer smrick '. !!

Aarohi: wat the '''.. ? tum ? (point out him)

Uday : wow !! ms . jhasi ki rani ? wat a surprise !!

Aarohi: esa kese ho sakta hai '. ? esa nhi ho sakta '. !! tum uday sir nhi ho sakte ' !!

Uday: kyu hum kyu nhi ho sakte '. Hum smart hai dashing hai charming hai ab ye sari quality tho yuvraj udayveer singh mai hi hai so'.hum hi yuvraj udayveer singh hai !!!

Aarohi: agar tum yha ke bose ho na tho yha hum naukri kabhi nhi karege !!

Uday got up his seat n walk to her side she get backward step '. !! uday come to close her she take a backward steps n suddenly she pinned the wall she trying to go but he is bolcked her way ' !! than she luked at those eyez again '. Those choclaty eyez (ms. Jhasi ki rani bhoth gutz hai na tum mai) she just luk at him like a dumb stuck he put his hand on her face' he touched her milky skin she closed her eyez ' he toched her red lips who luk like a rose pattles he more close to her ' she didn't knew wat was happing to her (why she didn't stop him?) !!! he is is really close to her she trying to say something when she say something but that time he tag his lips on her '.. manyta trying to rescue her self but after few min she enjoy his kiss ' he gentally kiss her she don't know why she is not trying to stop him '. !! after few min she back her sense she think wat the hell wats wrong wid me she pushed him wid full force but uday is not that mood to leave her he is just out of his mind uday just lost her beauty '. !!!


read this ff also please this ff began yesterday

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3576508/manveer-ff-meri-ashiqui-ab-tum-hi-ho


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Edited by pari_vania - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
awsssmmm uday kafi fast haii
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Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm uday kafi fast haii



lol ... 😆 ya he is to fast between ... thanx 4 ur lovely comment huma 😊 its really prisious 4 us kritzz ... !!

Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
this was so good thanks for the pm
love manyata nick name ms. jasie ki rani.
i want to see manyata reaction when uday kiss her
i am sure manyata would probbaly slap him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome, very well written
Thanks for the pm
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start dear
thanks for the pm
continue asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice update
especially the fightong b/w both
nd manveer first kiss
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely chappy pari
uv toh express train se bhi fast nikla, jst one meeting and he kissed her also.
Do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice update
waiting for more romance
please continue soon

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