MANVEER FF/Chahun Mai Ya Na update chapter 12 pg 93 (new update) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nishaya...

Lovely chappy pari
uv toh express train se bhi fast nikla, jst one meeting and he kissed her also.
Do cont soon



thank you so much deary
han ya tu han ya fast tu buhot han age age dekho hota han kiya😉😉😉yes he kisses her n ya kiss age bhi dekhna
update tonight okay😉😉😉😉😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: roopali15

hey nice update

waiting for more romance
please continue soon



thanx roopali ... 4 lovely comment... 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: htgcute

Superb update just luved it grt work... 😊



thanx a lot for appriciate our work love u ... !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishba33

hey awesome update 👏
cont soon



thanx 😃 babiee ... !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55



Love u all'. love u so much guyz' for appriciate our work n ya me n pari give u a big hug who was comment n like ...in our ff so here the story note plz PLZ FORGIVE ME fOR MY GRAMITICAL MISTAKE n PLZ PLZ DO COMMENT N LIKE ALSO '.


Chahu mai ya na '

CHAPTER TWO' !!


...aarohi trying to stop him she pushed him forcefully but uday is not that mood to leave her he just lost her beauty he know that she will trying to stop him but he decide to kiss her more forcefully he holds her full strength n he pinned her on the wall he kissed on her lips he bites on her lips he trying to pull her more close to him she can't rescue herself on his grip she trying to puch him again but this time she have no strength to push him she knew that he is really stong than her he smiled at her he bite her lower lips who is invited him to bite on her red lips than he kiss her uper lip very softly her red rossy lips invite him to bite her upper lip he bites her upper lip n this time manyta had a pain he is just enjoyhis smooch but she is not enjoying anymore than she again try to push him now this time she succed to push him he get one back step than definetly she trying to slap him on his face but unfortunetly he stop her on his left hand n he got her weast pull him close

toword he mummerd on her ears

uday: ur lips like a stobbery n u know wat I love to eat stobbery

aarohi just luked at him she is in a deep thought wat the hell how he dare to kiss 'me? he is pysico or wat ? wats wrong with me ? why I m not stop him ? oh god plz help me !!

uday: wow kya hua? jhasi ki rani ki bettry khatam ho gayi '

suddenly aarohi back her sense ..

aarohi: agar tumne mera hath nhi choda tho !!
uday: tho ??

aarohi: tho mai '. Mai '. Mai chilaungi !!! so just leave my hand u ghode ki duum

uday just listen her n brust out laugh ye ithne khatrnak khtrnak word lati kha se ho tum ' ?
aarohi: ghar se '

uday: wow hume dekhna hai esa konsa ghar hai jha pe ithne ajib words 'exisest karte hai hume bhi tho ptha chale '

aarohi:halkat vede yede khamanukhane chor mujhe

uday: wow kya bath hai hume nhi ptha tha humare ithne sare naam hai ..

aarohi:mai tujhe chorogi nhi han nhi tho?

uday:miss han nai tu phale hume pakkar tho lo phir chorne ki baat karna (smirks)


aarohi: chod mujhe ' !!!

uday: phele humare chote se sawal ka jwab do '

aarohi: wat ?

uday: usually hume logo ko jane mai sirf ek min lagta hai tum kha se aai ho akhir ho kon tum '?

aarohi: akhir kon hu mai ?rishte mai hum tumhare baap lagte hai naam hai shensha ab hut pare ..

she pushed him n trying to go but he again catch her on her weast n he pinned her on wall

uday: jane se phele humare chote se sawal ka jwab deti jao ' tumhara koi boyfrnd hai ?

aarohi:kyu '. Puch rhe ho ye meri shaadi tey karwani ' hai ?

uday: just relex princess hum tho just ithna jana chate hai ki kon hai wo jo tumhe jhel rha hai I mean u need a man !! (smriks)

aarohi: oh I need a man ? or vo man kon hai tum ?

uday:vo kya hai na princess ' hum apne mhu se apni tarif nhi karte '

aarohi: huh really u need a .psychiatrist !!!

suddenly knok the door uday leave her hand ' they both luk at the door side'

uday: come inside '

one girl is coming inside '

uday: wat happened mariya'??

mariya: sir many girls r wating outside

uday luked at aarohi ' n said mariya go outside n tell everybody I got my sectry so now they leave'. !!

manyta just luke at him she luk like statue she thought I got this job ? wats wrong wid him 'oh I don't understand wat he is thinking in his mind' !!

she take a long deep breath '' !! n said so now can I leave ? '.

uday luk at her wid his killing smrik n he

nodded her ' !! she go out n mummered her self..

smajhta kya hai apne apko kahi laad shab hai kya? sala kamina chorugi nai mai isko bas iski himat kaise hui mujhe kiss karne ki

akash hey so u got a job gud

aarohi: ya '

akash: so humare sir kese lage' !!..

aarohi: vampir !! mummered herself

aakash: wat ?

aarohi: nice ' !!

aakash: gud ' so '

aarohi: can I go 'actually its already very late'

aakash: can I drop u some where' ?

aarohi no thanx mai chali jaungi bye !!

aakash: bye..!!

aarohi: bye' !!

she run outside'.call the auto ' n she sit ..on it ..

around 7 pm she reached home '.

suddenly she fel her phn is buzzing'

she picked the call'.

in weak voice she said (hello)

person: oye chudail kya hua tujhe weak sound kyu kar rhi hai

aarohi: nothing tired yr ' !!!

person: oye chudail hai kha tu ? or hua kya?

aarohi:ghar par hu

person: ghar par beth kar kiski shock sbha atnd kar rhi hai ' !!

aarohi:aapni shock sbha atend kar rhi hu ' !!

person: oh teri tu kab mari ' ?

aarohi: just abhi abhi ' !!

person: waow kisne mara tujhe '?

aarohi: mere new boss ne!!

Person:oh teri job lag gayi ?

Aarohi: ha yr ' !!

Person: tho kamini party mai aaja maine do passes esa hi arrenge nhi karaye '

Aarohi:mude nhi hai jiyu

Jiya: iska mathlab tera boss ithna hitler hai

Aarohi: vo hitler nhi hai vo chuha hai '. Jo apne bill mai rhena pasand karta hai '

Jiya: oh ho !! humari aaruoo ko tang karne wale ka koi naam hai ?

Aarohi:hai na yuvraj uday veer singh ' !!

Jiya: mai bhi milna chati hu tere boss se ' !!

Aarohi: but mai nhi milna chati use !!

Jiya chal math miliyo ' kam se kam party mai tho aa ja ' !!

Aarohi: maan nhi hai tu jake us party mai apna salman khaan dhud or mai ghar par beth kar koi movie dekhti hu !!

Jiya: oh hello apna gussa party par kyu nikkal rhi hai tu aa rhi hai or ye mai tujhse puch nhi rhi mai tujhe btha rhi hu !!

Aarohi: par'.. ?

Jiya: par var kuch nhi tu aa rhi hai bye ' !!

She trying to say some thing but '.. jiya cut the call !!

Aarohi: bhoothni phn cut kar diya ' !!! ab tho jana padega '

Aarohi take dress ' n wear it

Aarohi wear a sexy red dress ... !!!

Aarohi doing some make up on her face her hair is free 'she luk like hawty ' sexy she wears sliver colour sandils 'she luk herself in mirror ' n smile ' !! she is ready ' now to go for party ' !!

Aarohi to text jiyu n tell her I m coming where ius the party ' she sand her a address ..

Aarohi luk at the mess ' n she is shocked now ' party is in uday niwas ' !!

Aarohi text her back ' I m not coming jiyu!!!

Jiya: wat happened now ?

Aarohi: vo forhead mai dard hai 'so'. U know possible nhi hai ana !!!

Jiya:ek kaam kar ' !!

Aarohi: ha bol ' ?

Jiya: desprine le pani pee niche ja auto le auto mai beth or uday niwas phoch ok bye '

Aarohi: wat the '. ?

Jiya: f**k ?

Aarohi: how u know mai jhut khe rhi thi ?

Jiya teri rag rag se fakif hu ' !!

Aarohi: I hate u !!!

Jiya: same to u babz!!

Aarohi: tujhe puri duniya mai ye hi hotel mila tha ' !!

Jiya: party maine throw nhi ki hai !!

Aarohi: I hate that person who throw the party there

Jiya: ho gaye tumhare drame aab jaldi aa warna !!

Aarohi: I know I know mujhe ghar se kidnappe kar legi ' !!

Jiya: samjh dar hai jaldi phoch uday niwass'!!

Aarohi: okkk !!! happy ?

Jiya: yes I m happy aaruoo !!!

Now cut the call n ' !!

She mummered her self' f**k !!! NOT AGAIN !!! OH GOD PLZ HELP ME I just hate him fir bhi aap mujhe use milwate 'how could u ' !! (wid puppy face )

Thats it guyz I hope u like it '. Plz guyz do comment n like also ' !!

Precape: manyta in a big problem 😭😭 couz of j' !!! 😡😡

Kritz n pari ' !!!😊😊😊



















Edited by priyash.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys anybody want to pm den please comment it n say pm me den i'll add u pm list okay n thanks for great support guys love you all n please give a commentss


hey guys we know we both not a good writter kritzz is good but i m not but plz comment it n u have any idea so please comment it we will try to add ur ideas n ager yaha nai tu ap sab mujhe pm karsakte han idea apna pari_vania is my account okay

Edited by pari_vania - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it and cant wait for the next update becz j and manyata fight
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow loved the talk and bonding between aarohi and jiya...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i must say wat a story ... kritz love u ... jaan i loved it ... !! uday is really fast ... i like whole update kritz mhuuuaaa ... lovely story gud concept charector skach was mind blowing ... manyta n j fight wow maze aa jayege ... manyta ka uday ko ghode duum bulana lol 🤣 had hai... jiya n aarohi ki bonding just love it i m wating for ur next epi ... 👏 gud job guyz pari n kritz ... love u both ... !!!

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