Murat Fantacies By Radhika (short stories)... ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ATTENTION...

Hello Ladies and Ladies, here i am again with a story but with a short one...well i am not able to update my rest stories due to some reasons so thought why shouldn't i start a story which i can update through my mobile... 😊

i know, i know you guys are ready to beat me but please kya karu main, story mind main thi, so thought to share with you all...well i am updating through mob so it will be very short updates and stories bhi zayda long nahi hongi bas mostly 4-5 parts and THE END...

n agar kisi ko mujhe kuch bhi kehna ho regarding this so plz pm me, khule aam post main likh k meri bezzati na karein 😆

all type of comments are wholeheartly welcomed... 😊

DHANYAWAD...

kahani next post main...


LUV RADHIKA... 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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SOCHA NA THA (PART-1)...
HER BANGED ENTRY IN HIS LIFE...



It was the chilling night of the winter and he was still driving on the silent roads in that freezing environment at late night. Usually he returns at 7 in evening but today only god know's why he choose to do overtime today and left the office when almost whole office staff including the peons have been left. To make himself relax and for the peace of mind he was listening his all time favourite radio show and was enjoying the last song of the show releasing all the tiredness of the hectic day.


He was just enjoying the heartwhelming melodious romantic track when from a sudden a girl elegantly dressed in her maroon wedding dress banged with his car but soon prevented herself from falling down, where on the other hand seeing her infront of his car, he put on his breakers and his car halted with an sudden jerk.


As his car abruptly halted he staired at the girls in complete shock with wide open eyes, his heart was beating too fast than normal thinking what would have happen is he hadn't put on his breakers on time but before he could have even understood what had just happened or came out from his shock state, that girl ran and hurriedly sat inside the car beside him and almost shouted badly huffing to breath, ''dekh kya rahe ho BHAGAO, BHAGAO ,BHAGAO!!!!!!!!...''.


As her voice stuck to his ears, he came back to his senses still stairing at her, ''what?, bhagu but kiu? ,and tum kaun ho?, aur yahan meri car main kya kar rahi ho?'', he asked her with an mixed expression of shock, surprise and puzzlement.


''dekho main apni shaadi se bhag kar ayi hu aur mere peechey police aur mere ghar waley hai, agar unhone mujhe pakad liya toh wo tumhe andar kar denge'', she replied pointing her finger at him.


''WHAT???????'', he exclaimed in horror, ''shaadi se tum bhaagi ho toh wo mujhe andar kiu karenge?????'', he asked with an puzzling frown.

''because unhone agar mujhe pakad liya toh main unhe kahungi ki tum mujhe bhaga ke le ja rahe the, samjhe'', she thretened him with an angry frown still pointing her finger at him.


''WHAT??????'', he shouted on her in atmost disbelief and before she could have threten him any more, they heard a loud whistle, ''are tum khud bhi maroge aur mujhe bhi marwaoge, kya kar rahe ho bhagao na'', she impatiently shouted seeing cops and her family members appearing from darkness.


Not able to understand that what to do in the situation in which he was unwantedly stuck, he just did what she had asked him to do, he geered up his car and ran away with her without knowing that it was begining of something new in his life.





Hope You Guys Like It...
Forgive for any kind of mistake...
Do give your review...
LUV RADHIKA... :-)




Edited by ridzzi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di muje pta chall gya h- hum dono ka dil se dil ka connection h koi pakka!...

mei bhi kuch aisa likhna wali thi...

hum dont worry- theme same but characters different h...

meri herien bhi shaddi se bagegi- but meri heroine hi kuch alag h.. :D. bhot alag h!..


but i like dis heroine too- heroine kyaa..ye tho hero se bhi jyada phaddu h...
i liked it- bechare ne achi karni chahi overtime..yahan love track ne hi usse over take kerr liya!..

hero k right time entry tho bhot dekhi- but heroine ki worng time entry bhi best h iss story mei...

chalo mobile se jaldi jaldi update dena..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tooo...
amazing and luvly start di

kya bride h apni merrige se bhaag kar ayi or
hamare hero ki car me bhaith kar
bhagao...bhagao...great di
ha bhagao tumhari hi dulhan h...
in future...
thanks di for such a beautiful story and pm
plzzz cont soon
luv u😊

Edited by soniaparte90794 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow new rtmc ...and starting was so great cont soon and thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniaparte90794

<font color="#000099" size="3">tooo...
amazing and luvly start di
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<font color="#000099" size="3">kya bride h apni merrige se bhaag kar ayi or
hamare hero ki car me bhaith kar
bhagao...bhagao...gr<font size="3">eat</font> di
ha bhagao tumhari hi dulhan h...
in future...
thanks di for such a beautiful story and pm
plzzz cont soon
luv u😊
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are ek dum bindass wali dulhan h...thanks for commenting sonia...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

wow new rtmc ...and starting was so great cont soon and thanks 4 the pm




thanx glad u liked it...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand1234

Superb yaar...Nice start!!! :D



thanx for giving ur views...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are rashmi ye toh tera mera pyar h, jise hum ek jaise stories ka idea ata h... ;-)
well chal tu bhi ek mast wali story start kar, we all r waiting...
thanx for this lovely comment...
luv u... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SOCHA NA THA (PART-2)
HER REQUEST, HIS PROBLEM...



He instantly come out with angry frown on his forehead as soon as he stopped his car outside his apartment and while opening the door of her side he angrily demanded, ''come out'', as she heard him, with an hesitant guilty smile she nervously came out elegantly holding her ghaghra preventing herself from any mishappening from it, ''what the hell were you doing?????, kya tha wo sab'', he ironically asked glairing at her at any extent, ''sry'', she said in a low voice, ''wo actually us time unse bachne ka koi aur way nahi tha'',she replied lowering her eyes in shame.


''tumhe zara sa bhi andaza h ki agar unhe pata chal gaya toh wo mere saath kya karenge'', he furiously asked but on receiving her guilty eyes lowered in shame he frustatingly closed his eyes and then claming himslef down he said,'' listen jo ho gaya so ho gaya, ab plz mera peecha chodo and go where ever you want to go'', he calmly said and then moved towards his apartment leaving a scared and confused girl.


Seeing him moving away like this she didn't wait for a second before shouting from his back,'' arey mujhe aise akele chod kar kaha ja rahe ho'', as her voice stuck to his ears, his walk came to an slow halt before halting completely in his track and turning to face her in confusion. Seeing him turning she relaxed thinking that may be her trick is working to find some place to hide herself untill everything set back to normal,'' tum ek akeli ladki ko aisi andheri aur sunsaan raat main chod doge'', she poutingly asked to which he just asked in puzzelment,'' what?????'', seeing that it's working she again spoke up in a fake cracking voice,'' main kaha jaungi, kiske pass jaungi, apne relatives ke yahan nahi ja sakti, wo mere ghar walon ko inform kar denge and agar ghar gayi toh mere papa us gadhe se meri shaadi karwa denge, plz mujhe apne saath rehne do sirf saat din, i promise uske baad main chali jaungi'', she said finally brusting into crocodile tears.


HIs heart melted seeing her crying uncontrolably, ''ok ok fine, you can'', he said finally reaching at her to comfort her,''really??????, oh thank you, thank you, thank you so much, you are so sweet'', she said wiping her tears but before she could speak up anything more he curtly said,'' but aise nahi reh sakti, you have to work as you are not paying anything, you have to make breakfast,lunch and dinner for whole seven days and you have to do other works too'', he prensented her his conditions.


For few seconds she was quit but the with a broad smile she happily replied'', ok'', after replying she didn't waited for a second and ran towards his apartment.


As she moved inside his apartment, he thought to himslef,'' abhi toh ro rahi thi'', he looked up at sky and shook his head in disbelief before moving towards his apartment.


HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT...
DO GIVE YOUR REVIEWS...
LUV...
RADHIKA... :-)




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