Ariya SS:Vishwas Tootne Ka Dard,ch9,pg54.precap-pg55

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

awesome update dear

she left etf

i hope she finds peace

thanx fr d pm

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

awsum update...
loved riya's meet with her masima and baoudi...
shree's outburst was nice...
so riya kee jaane ke baad they realized their mistakes...
continue soon..

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Question:

should this story take a leap of some months or years,
OR,
should I reveal the girl's identity now which forced Arjun to slap Riya and for which Riya left Mumbai and Mumbai ETF?

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

go with options 2 along with 1
mean app dikhao riya kitni badli hain aur etf ka kya haal hain uske bina

aap ko jo acha lage vo dikhao
love it
n u tu 😉

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...
go with options 2 along with 1
mean app dikhao riya kitni badli hain aur etf ka kya haal hain uske bina

aap ko jo acha lage vo dikhao
love it
n u tu 😉

nice idea...
I wanted to show that,there is a leap of Two years and,Riya is completely changed girl,promoted to the rank of ACP as the 2nd in command of Kolkata ETF.
During a case in Mumbai ETF,Arjun,Rathod,Shree and Chotu cant solve the case,because Riya want there and then they realize their mistake.Right at that moment,The girl's true identity is revealed in front of the Mumbai ETF. Then they all go to the DIg ka beta,Rohit ke biwi ki godh bharai rasam.Rohit happens to the friend of Sameer Rathod and Arjun.

What abt this,Amu?

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Koi toh apne suggestions likho,warna,i will have to stop writing this story,and I am really serious abt it.

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Kaveri di,where r u?
I am waiting for ur comment.

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Zebbie leap wala idea awesome hain.
Or tune jo amu ko bola hai vo bhi idea ek dum dhasu.
Lekin meri ek baat su jahan tak maine story padh kar samjha hai us hissab se mujhe arjun thoda rude or ghamandi laga to tu ek naya character introduce kar jab arjun kolkata jaye or vaha pe riya ko ek ladke ke saath dekhe to he realize his mistake.
Its my opinion

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: mastmegha22
Zebbie leap wala idea awesome hain.
Or tune jo amu ko bola hai vo bhi idea ek dum dhasu.
Lekin meri ek baat su jahan tak maine story padh kar samjha hai us hissab se mujhe arjun thoda rude or ghamandi laga to tu ek naya character introduce kar jab arjun kolkata jaye or vaha pe riya ko ek ladke ke saath dekhe to he realize his mistake.
Its my opinion

mast idea like ur name,Mastmegha...
Sure,i will do that...
Hey...
U have fb?

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Dii... I agree.. Go with option 2 along with one..!! 😃

Show something like The ETF are remorseful on their actions.. Riya is like real (uh... Show?!) Arjun.. Closed up.. stern (kinda like a zinda lash) and lost the dimpled smile... Kolkata and Mumbai ETF have to work together on some case and Riya doesn't talk to anyone except for professional talk..!😳

And on the other hand, reveal that girl's true colours..😡

And jealous Arjun will b a sone-pe-suhaaga!😉

Edited by Arjunkibehen - 12 years ago