Ariya SS:Vishwas Tootne Ka Dard,ch9,pg54.precap-pg55

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

nice idea...
I wanted to show that,there is a leap of Two years and,Riya is completely changed girl,promoted to the rank of ACP as the 2nd in command of Kolkata ETF.
During a case in Mumbai ETF,Arjun,Rathod,Shree and Chotu cant solve the case,because Riya want there and then they realize their mistake.Right at that moment,The girl's true identity is revealed in front of the Mumbai ETF. Then they all go to the DIg ka beta,Rohit ke biwi ki godh bharai rasam.Rohit happens to the friend of Sameer Rathod and Arjun.

What abt this,Amu?

right di 😊

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

mast idea like ur name,Mastmegha...
Sure,i will do that...
Hey...
U have fb?

this one is also gr8 di...
arjun jealous that too is gr8

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

mast idea like ur name,Mastmegha...
Sure,i will do that...
Hey...
U have fb?

up and you?

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: mastmegha22

up and you?

yup.
I m in fb.apna id de sakti ho,please?

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

me too go with option 2 along with opt 1

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

i read all the parts in one go jst now zebbie...

wat a story

wat a concept

wat a track crrying

wat a flow

loved everythng

u r a brilliant writer zebbie

now ans to ur que

yes u should go fr a leap

i think this leap will answer all the rest of the questions

nd pls reveal dat bitch...(sorry fr th language) jst too much grieved on dat sick lady who brewed mis understandings inETF

dear zebbie plz send me pm fr th nxt updates

continue soon...

eagerly waiting

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

i will go with leap

but arjun ko itna rude mat banawo

plsss

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Priyanka

@A_Derry_Girl

Achiever

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Read all the parts now...

lovely concept and great parts...

disappointed with whole of ETF, why couldn't they trust Riya😳

i loved the way Shree answered back to Arjun in the last part though, he needed that.

and about your question, both the options are good...you can take the leap where they get to know the truth..and Riya giving a royal ignore to all of them.

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

i guess go with the leap...!!! and show how successful riya has become...!!

and etf team specially arjun regretting their actions and realizing her importance...!!!

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Thanks for the views,dearies.
U r really good.
Well,one more question...
"Should I start writing abt the leap from ch 4 or after ch 5 or ch6?
And,the leap should be of how many years?"

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