Ariya SS:Vishwas Tootne Ka Dard,ch9,pg54.precap-pg55 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Question:

should this story take a leap of some months or years,
OR,
should I reveal the girl's identity now which forced Arjun to slap Riya and for which Riya left Mumbai and Mumbai ETF?


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after leap of months reveal the secret😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
zebbie what about ehsaas story


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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Thanks for the views,dearies.
U r really good.
Well,one more question...
"Should I start writing abt the leap from ch 4 or after ch 5 or ch6?
And,the leap should be of how many years?"

years?...ummm...may be 1-2 ??? and write from the next chapter...riya in kolkata now, new frnds, new life...new year.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Leap kitne saalo ka du?
and,should i show the leap in the next chapter or not?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Leap kitne saalo ka du?
and,should i show the leap in the next chapter or not?



2yrs and make riya as Acp and second hand command of kolkata ETF and vo jealousy wala part rakhna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Question:

should this story take a leap of some months or years,
OR,
should I reveal the girl's identity now which forced Arjun to slap Riya and for which Riya left Mumbai and Mumbai ETF?


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go with the option 2 along with 1 i think u should take a 2 years leap n pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: shaff


go with the option 2 along with 1
i think u should take a 2 years leap n pm me wen u update


leap wala thing kis chapter mein post karu?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
i guess aftr the leap u cud reveal the id of d gurl! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: zebbie0504


leap wala thing kis chapter mein post karu?

leap wala thing chapter 5 main laao i think it will be good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
zebbie dear sorry yaar...marriege prepration mein sab bhool gayi

apani bhabhisa ko maaf karde...

see what i got for you...








OK come to your update...

ek pal mein tumne rula diya...i hate that girl jo bhi thi wo...usane ariya ko alag kiya aur riya ko etf se bhi alag kiya...

i hate her so much

ab shayad sa badal jayga...riya jab tak apna innocence prove nahi karegi tab tak shant nahi hogi...

hey dear thanks yaar mere ek req pe update karane ke liye...just add me in ur pm list

next time mein bahot bada sa injection leke aaungi...taki jaldi update mile...lol
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago

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