ArHi FF: BETRAYAL IN YOUR LOVE THREAD 8 - PART 45

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saba

@ASR6262

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

wow very emotional and well written update
want to read more and more very very interesting
poor khushi what have u done ASR everyone will hate u now
I feel so bad for khushi😭 I hope noting happened to her please
can't wait for next part continue soon please and thank u for pm me

Edited by ASR6262 - 12 years ago

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

take a standing ovation
amazing update dear
i wann aryan to learn say he hates asr
kkg nt responding
u said before 18th rigjt
pls give ayleast 2 mire updates of this ff before u take leave

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

congrats for the new thread dear...

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Abhisa

@dattamaitry

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice update...

all the best for your presentstion...😊

good luck...

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Nilmi

@nilmi

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+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome update...loved it😊

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I expected a slap from Payal...I am disappointed...
No Aryan in this update but I think only he can bring her back...

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

ok..now its time for repenting..he is already repenting...but dont know that would help him to win her heart back...

and others giving him a hard time too..a good punishment..lets see what will happen to our poor Arnav..but cant help he deserve it all this time..

take care!!!

and plz try to give one more update before u go😊

Edited by disnie - 12 years ago

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

ohh nooo...u again left on cliffhanger...

plzz plzzz continue soonn...

thnks for the PM...

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clairvoyance

@clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Very nice update

I think this story is not about sympathising any character even if its arnav.

Its about right and wrong and in the story arnav has been consistently wrong with his approach.

evn payal hv shud told him- if khushi dies it shudnt bother u cause u hav sheetal and now the custody of ur son

at the end evrything will turn fine but evryone shud ask arnav at that time...Khushi went through so much of pain just to get her laad governor back to her . are u so special arnav ...evn God doesnt take so many tests and here u hv made her commit suicide.