Mohini ff 'New Beginning' - Page 37

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Foru 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and PM...will give detailed comments after the 7th...plz forgive your di.😳...love u...tc 😊

Originally posted by: kaatayani

so... I am finally in a position to post a looong comment on this story...

I read the whole stuff from the beginning... and MR a Bengali boy.. it always clicks with me😉😉 and that too when his name is Agantuk... tab toh baat hi kuch aur hai..😳

Meera.. independant but vulnerable.. hmmm😃😃

What happens when the Dashing Bong babu meets the petite Bong Baala...???

sparks... sparks... and more sparks...😳😳😳

SRJ in tht Look in your banner... yeh toh pakka stylo lag rha hai...!!! but looks villaineous too..!!!😉

back to the story review... the pace is even and the scenes are set well... thoda punctuation ka dhyan needed... but gadbad is understandable { since I am writing OS myself... punctuation mistakes ho jaati hai.. 😛😛}

secondly... the best parts of the story is the soliloquies of both the protagonists...!!

and how can I forget the ever green Hiten... (GRji)

ufff...!! the funnyman... and the true chaddhi buddy of

the shy bengali babu...!!😆 His antics are well placed

and depicted very cutely..!!

As off now... I am waiting for meera to come back and see agantuk's performance while shooting... I can actually imagine scenes😳

Time was moving slowly for Agantuk and Meera...
they were eager to see each other.
Meanwhile Meera decided to go for shopping as she had a huge list of things which her freinds had asked her to purchase for them from her hometown.
she also purchased some gifts for them from her side,
in one shop she saw a beautiful Ganesha idol, she purchased it.😃
she happily passed some more days with her family,(as its said that family and near and dear ones always helps us to forget our pain)😊
she forgot her ugly past...
she arrived at mumbai as a New Meera...
who was independent and capable to handle such incidents by herself,
who wil not cry but will react and show those abusers their place.
she was all transformed into a cofident lady, who was much stronger mentally then before.⭐️
she reached Roy Mansion..
no one knewed about her comeback...
she wanted to surprise Prem and Aditi, so she decided to meet them next morning in their office.
she told her maid not to inform anyone about her comeback...
she went asleep with happiness to meet everyone next morning
Meanwhile Agantuk too was busy with his movie,
half of the movie was done, only the climax scenes were yet to be shot which required high drama and action...
everything was going smoothly, as planned.
he was eager to meet her but didnt knewed wen she is goona come back, even Prem cant answer his question as he himself didnt knewed about it.
Next morning...
Agantuk was getting ready .today he was feeling so happy since morning, hiten was shocked to see sudden change in his frnd. Coz till yesterday he was upset and today he is smiling, singing songs...

Agantuk replied: no not new but I feel that she is back, I can feel her presence.😃

Hiten: hmmm tell me who is doing jasusi for you???you are hiding something from me??

Agantuk: shut up! What jasusi and all.. I love her so you know i can make out.😆

Hiten: ok ok forget it, m getting late for my office.. m coming with you, drop me to office and then go for your shoot....and they left

Prem and aditi were in office.

Meera woke up, got ready, wore her fav dress and left her house.😃

first she went to siddhivinayak temple and from there she left for office

But midway she got a call from reputed Director, who wanted Meera to choreograph a dance sequence for his movie...so she had to call Prem and inform him about this... as she always seeked guidance and advice from him.

So prem came to know about her comeback... But she asked him not to tell this to anyone else... and they decided to meet for lunch.

Prem invited all actors for lunch obvously it included Agantuk too...

Firstly, I'm really sorry yaar, as Maine Mera PMs bohot late check kiya hain toh iss Update ke PM vi bohot late late mein open kiya. Now, I'm thanking my Lucky Stars, as Finally maine Padh liya, Kyunki mujhe laga issbar Update late mein honewala hain as before August's last week main regularly ye Thread check karr raha tha toh Socha It wouldn't be in August and Late hogaya. First mera Sorry take karlo yaar, Main sachmein Bohot Sorry.

Now, Back to the Update: Brilliant set-up with MeeraG's family. So, MeeraG do have a Bro too, their's Sibiling rivalry was really adorable, I could actually imagine my this year's Raksha Bandhan experience, Sisters hote toh Dangerous but, Inse Jayada Best aur Koi nahin!😆 Now, waiting more, from her Family.

And, Agantuk-Hiten sir... this Duo were Always at The Top, when talking about Friendship. As usual, in This update too They remain intact with the Witty lines, and Friendly Nok-Jhoks. Specially, The Personal Assistant wala.. 😎... Also, Car and Garrage, one.🤣

While reading The Description about Agantuk sir's Father, It seems like, He is a Tough Guy yet Always had The support in his Child's will but Not through the Emotion. Perhaps, That's why Giving Agantuk sir, his Most precious Dream a Grant, he couldn't whole Heartily Became one with His son's Dream, and That's why the Little silence in his approach, at Today.

Now, Now, Now... Superb, Fantastic, Brilliant, Splendid, Marvellous... Update. Absolutely It was brilliant, and How could It not be. Just Awesome Yaar, Now Waiting for your Next Update.👍🏼

Originally posted by: MrToolConfuser

Firstly, I'm really sorry yaar, as Maine Mera PMs bohot late check kiya hain toh iss Update ke PM vi bohot late late mein open kiya. Now, I'm thanking my Lucky Stars, as Finally maine Padh liya, Kyunki mujhe laga issbar Update late mein honewala hain as before August's last week main regularly ye Thread check karr raha tha toh Socha It wouldn't be in August and Late hogaya. First mera Sorry take karlo yaar, Main sachmein Bohot Sorry.

Now, Back to the Update: Brilliant set-up with MeeraG's family. So, MeeraG do have a Bro too, their's Sibiling rivalry was really adorable, I could actually imagine my this year's Raksha Bandhan experience, Sisters hote toh Dangerous but, Inse Jayada Best aur Koi nahin!😆 Now, waiting more, from her Family.

And, Agantuk-Hiten sir... this Duo were Always at The Top, when talking about Friendship. As usual, in This update too They remain intact with the Witty lines, and Friendly Nok-Jhoks. Specially, The Personal Assistant wala.. 😎... Also, Car and Garrage, one.🤣

While reading The Description about Agantuk sir's Father, It seems like, He is a Tough Guy yet Always had The support in his Child's will but Not through the Emotion. Perhaps, That's why Giving Agantuk sir, his Most precious Dream a Grant, he couldn't whole Heartily Became one with His son's Dream, and That's why the Little silence in his approach, at Today.

Now, Now, Now... Superb, Fantastic, Brilliant, Splendid, Marvellous... Update. Absolutely It was brilliant, and How could It not be. Just Awesome Yaar, Now Waiting for your Next Update.👍🏼