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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
PM list on page 1- cmmnt or PM for removal or addition of ur name.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for being late dear ... It was awesome dear ... Taani's flashback aww it was so hurting .. Poor Rey he was also missing Taani so badly... Waiting for next part dear :) Plz update soon :)
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hey !
plz pm me this story too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chap 3:

it was amazingg...
arjun is juss soo cutee...hehe =D
bt d flashback was sad =(
precap seems really exciting... =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cha4,Oh my Arj's parents hv selctd Taani fr hm! Ufff,d dnc & d FB of Tani,drm of Arj ws vry well written.Tani ran away lvng cnfusd Arj behind,i pity hm! Prcp is gd.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wonder where Rey goes every month that reminds him of Taani. Arjun is adorable, I wonder what will happen when everyone finds out that Taarey were in love and that Arjun and Rey are brother?

Nice work, I hope that you continue!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chap 4

amazingg and yet painful...
loved the way u merged the present, flashback and the dream seq...
it was jus amazingg...
loved it alot...

waiting for the next part ...update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 5

a car came n stops. rey comes out of the car and starts moving ...

rey:taani i m here again ,for u...taani u r my life and main tumse kiya hua promise kabhi nahi tod sakta..main aaj bhi har month yaha aata hu apna promise poora karne...humne saath mein yaha jo promise liya tha vo tum bhool gayi but mujhe aaj bhi yaad h vo din...aaj bhi main tumhe yaha feel kar sakta hu.


then he starts moving and there was a church in front of him...he moves inside and see that taani was running from rey(img) and he was busy in chasing her. a smile appears on his face.

rey leave me na...rey plz...rey plz dekho jesus ji bura maan jayenge... (rey laughs) jesus ji...haan to kya hua...aap mujhpe has rahe ho...jao main aapse baat nahi karti...arre taani suno to.

then he see that taani was busy in praying to jesus and rey(img) was just admiring her ...he moves forward and tries to touch taani's face but she disspears and then he luks and both (taani and img rey were disspeared)...



then rey goes and sits on one bench ..keeps his hand on front desk and starts praying and lights a candle ...he opens his eyes and see that taani was sitting beside him and just praying to jesus...he again starts staring her and a tear drop fell from his eyes.

R- taani where are u?? jesus ji plz mujhe bata dijiye na ki taani kaha h...i cant live without her ... main har mnth yaha aata hu ye sochkar ki shayad taani apna promise poora karne yaha aa jaaye...par vo nahi aati... i knw ki galti meri thi...par main to sirf uski khushi chahta tha...maine kabhi usse hurt karna nahi chaha.taani kaha ho tum.

then rey again starts rewinding his old memories..

flash back starts-

taani was standing in front of jesus and rey stands on the stage(a platform above the ground level..where priests stands ) and starts saying some words...

so the beautiful bride ..would u accept rey singhania as ur future husband...

taani- NO.(opens her eyes and smiles on rey's wrds and replies)

rey- taani plz say yes na...plz.

taani- rey what is this...stop this nonsense.

rey- huh taani tumhe humari marraige rehersal nonsense lagti h.

taani- marriage?? rey aapne abtak mujhe officially and properly propose bhi nahi kiya h.

rey -so what abhi kar dete h. but first say "I DO."

taani - rey..

rey- taani plz say yes na..plz.

taani- yes,I DO.

rey- so mr.reyansh singhania..would u accept taani shekhawat as ur future wife.

rey comes down the stage and stands beside taani.

rey-yes I DO.

then he sits on his knees and takes out a box from his pocket and takes a beautiful diamond ring in his hand

rey- taani shekhawat i promise to love u every moment till forever ...can u give me the extraordinary owner of marrying u.

taani's eyes filled with tears and she says "YES"...rey gets up and slides the ring in taani's ring finger.

rey-so now may i kiss my beautiful bride.

taani- no.( and moves back)

rey- but taani marriage poori nahi hogi bina kiss ke. ( moves forward)

taani- to abhi marriage poori karni kisko h...aur vaise bhi hum cristans nahi h...hum to hindu rivazo se shaadi karenge.

rey : arre mujhe karni h na shaadi...aur hum dono(hindu & cristian) rituals ke saath shaadi karenge..so give me my kiss now.

taani (shouts and runs )- NO.

rey runs behind her .and grabs her by her waist and puts his lips on her ...she also enjoys this.they both kiss each other passionately till they were short of breath...then they broke the kiss and touches each other forheads nd rest...

rey: mrs.singhania u r mine forever.

flashback ends-

rey was still sitting on that bench and his eyes filled with tears...then he moves outside the church.

it was so beautiful outside the church...rey moves to the left side and there was sea and stones on his left...he goes and sits on one stone and starts luking towards the sea. his ears again strikes with some sounds...a girl was laughing ...and running in front of his eyes. (flashback starts )

taani was laughing and running on beach and rey was running behind her.then he grabs her wrist and holds her by waist.

taani- rey bas kijiye na...bhai ko pata chala na to aapki khair nahi h.

rey : arre yaar romance mein ye tumhara bhai kaha se tapak gaya. sachmein saala h vo mujhe romance bhi nahi karne deta.

taani : rey...

rey : accha sorry baba...chalo na baitho yaha pe..pakka ab koi sharat nahi karoonga.

taani: pakka na rey.

rey: arre haan princess pakka.

then both lyes down on the beach and starts luking towards the sky.

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london - (same night )

taani stops her car in front of her house and moves inside her room...she directly rushes to her her room's bathroom and starts the shower and sits down the shower and starts crying...she folds her legs and keeps his head on her knees and cries badly.

taani- why rey?? why u did this to me...i hate u..i hate u the most ...but still i cant allow anyone to touch me except u...i can still feel ur touch on my body...but u forgot evrything.

and then again starts crying .

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flshback continues-

rey and taani lying down on the beach hand in hand and luking towards the sky.

taani- rey ..tauji humara ye relation accept ko karenge na...agar unhone mana kar diya to.

rey : no princess...vo kabhi aisa nahi karenege .

taani: par agar unhe pata chal gaya ki aap dancer h to.

rey: taani kbhi na kabhi to unhe pata chalna hi h na...main handle kar loonga.. u just dnt wry.

taani: par rey agar unhone humein alag kar diya to.

rey: vo aisa nahi kar sakta...aur agar unhone try bhi kiya na to .to ...to main tumhe bhagakar le jaunga.

taani: (laughs)accha...bhagakar kaha le jaoge.

rey: hmmm sabse door...is poori duniya se door..jaha sirf main aur tum honge...main vaha apni dance academy kholunga and hum vaha...(taani cuts him in between)

taani: rey agar hum dono akele honge to aap dance sikhaoge kisko. ( n laughs )

rey (bites his lips) : arre tumhe sikhaunga na...meri favourate student.

taani: pakka na rey...sikhaoge na.

rey : haan baba pakka sikhaunga ...aur meri fees?

taani: hmmm apni wife se hi fees loge kya.

rey : arre professional and personal life ko mix nahi karta main...batao na meri fees.

taani gets up and keeps her hand on rey's chest and starts moving towards his face ...he closes his eyes...he could feel taani's breadth on his face ..she moves to his lips and then passes by it nd shouts in his ears...

taani: apni fees bhai se le lena.

rey: bhai???. ( and opens his eyes and find a laughing taani in frnt of him)

rey: sweet heart meri fees tumhare alawa koi nahi de sakta.

taani: accha...aisi kya fees h aapki.

rey pushes her down and gets on top of her...

rey: accha batau kya fees h meri.

taani: nahi rey mujhe nahi pata karna ( and tries to move up)

rey : ab to main batakar rahoonga...(n pushes her down )

rey starts kissing her.she closes her eyes..first kisses her forehead ...and then her eyelids then cheeks...taani feels shy and turns her face to ground...rey starts placing wet kisses on her back and shoulder and make taani turn with his hand and strts kissing her neck and shoulders...taani clutches his shirt and turns her head aside to give him better access...he continues kissing her and then places his lips on hers and kissed her hardly...first she did not respond but then he tightens his grip on her waist ,...so she had to respond and then they both starts kissing each other passionatly...like its their last kiss..then they broke the kiss and smiles..taani's eyes are still closed. rey kisses her eyes and asks her to open her eyes.
she opens her eyes but feels shy .so hugs rey tightly ..rey was shocked of her sudden action but then he also hugs her and then again sleeps beside her on the ground.

rey: taani...

taani: hmmm

rey : vaise tumne bataya nahi ki tumhe apna dance course contnue karna h ya nahi.

taani: matlab.

rey: arre agar dance sikhna h na to roz fees deni padegi...

taani hits on his chest ...rey hugs her from side and both again strts luking towards sky.

taani: rey ye jagah kitni sundar h na...ekdum shant...yaha aakar kitna accha lagta h.

rey: really...tumhe itni pasand aayi ye jagah.

taani: haan...bahut jyada..aur maine to suna h ki agar yaha aakar har month candle jalao na to har wish poori hoti h.

rey: hmmm ...to taani abse hum har mnth yaha aayenge...issi din. 5th of evry mnth.

taani: sacchi rey...pakka na.

rey: haan baba pakka.

taani: aur agar hummein se koi yaha na ho to.

rey: to doosra aakar candle jalayega...aur apne pyaar ke liye wish karega.

taani: okay done rey...promise hum dono mein se koi ek har mnth yaha pakka aayega aur apne pyaar ke liye candle jalayega.

rey: promise.

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rey crying after remembering this and moves to the beach and sleeps on the sand and closes his eyes...then he feels a soft hand on his hand he opens his eyes and see that taani was lying beside him and smiling...(ya he was imaging her...he could feel her beside him)..then rey holds her hand tightly and keeps boths hand on his chest and starts luking towards sky and then sleeps.

LONDON-

taani comes out of her bathroom wearing her night gown and moves towards her cuboard...opens it and takes a wooden box out of it...she opens it and takes some stuff out of it.

first she takes the pocket watch which swayam gave her when she became GS and keeps her near her heart and starts crying "I MISS U BHAI ..i miss u so much "...then takes one album out and starts seeing pictures of gang and swayam and rey...she moves her hand on rey's picture and then closes her eyes and then angrily closes the album ...then see looks at the ring which rey presented her in church and starts crying again...and keeps her near heart and lyes down on the floor and sleeps while crying.

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MUMBAI-

next morning rey was sleeping on the beach and then sun rays falls on his face and he opens his eyes...he looks at his side but taani was no where...his face fades and then with a heavy heart he gets up and moves towards his car...he gets in and then checks his cell phone which he kept in his car last evening so tht no one could distrb him...he checks 20 missed calls from swayam,15 from sharon ,8 from kriya and same with othr many D3 members ...and 18 missed calls from arjun ...rey get worried tht why arjun called him so many times...he then calls arjun and arjun was in his office...


REY: bhai aapne itni baar call kyu kiya tha.

arjun:chote kaha tha tu..pata h main kitna pareshaan tha tere liye.

rey: kahi nahi bhai...vo phone silent pe tha...accha batao aapne call kaise kiya?

arjun: vo actually...rey vo...rey vo main kal apni DG se mila.

rey: what??really ..again...not bad bhai..so fast.

arjun: haan...vo kal bussiness party thi na usmein...nd u knw wat...humari company ne uske saath hi bussiness deal final ki h and.

rey:and??

arjun: and maine tujhe bataya tha na ki mom-dad ne mere liye ek ladki dekhi h...ye vahi h...

rey: really bhai...kya kismat h aapki...so cool..to naam kya h meri bhabhi ka.

arjun: tanusha...and bhabhi...arre abhi se bhabhi nahi h.

rey: kyu aap mana karne wale ho kya.

arjun: chote...

rey: accha sorry...vaise abhi se bhabhi kyu nahi h.

arjun: kyunki usne abhi haan nahi kaha h.

rey: arre to keh dengi...vaise bhi mere bhai ko koi mana kar sakta h kya.

arjun: par jo kal raat hua...

rey: huh bhai itni jaldi...kya hua kal raat... (teasingly)

arjun: chote...huh...kuch nahi hua vo bas hum dono dance kar rahe the and..

rey: vooo dance n all haah...accha vaise phir kya hua.

arjun: phir vo chali gayi and vo ro rahi thi.

rey: what??? ro rahi thi..par kyu...

arjun: pata nahi...shayad usse bura laga mere saath dance karna...aur aaj meeting mein bhi nahi aayi vo...uski company ke manager aaye the and bataya ki mam meeting mein nahi aayegi.

rey: strange ...par chalo koi nahi...bina kisi ko jaane koi opinion banana sahi nahi h...so aap usse jaan lo pehle.

arjun: haan..par kaise...vo to aa hi nahi rahi h office.

rey: to aap unhe milne ke liye bula lo...and then shaadi ki baat bhi kar lena.

arjun: pakka bula lu na odd to nahi lagega na.

rey: arre nahi bhai...unhe bhi to batana hoga aapko apna decision...but girl h to shayad sharma rahi ho.

arjun: chal thik h phir to main abhi call karke bolta hu usko.

rey: oh god bhai...kyu acche khaasi love story ki aisi ki taisi karne pe tule ho...call karoge na to vo mana hi karegi...coz u knw na girls kitni shy hoti h...aisa karo ki flowers ke saath message bhej do and reqst karo ke aakar mile...pakka aayegi then.

arjun: pakka aayegi na.

rey: haan bhai pakka aayegi.

arjun: chal thik h phir bye...n ya thnks.

rey: anytime. bye.

then rey cuts the call and smiles...and then drives away to his home.

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guys so sorry ki ismien taajun's drive add nahi ki...vo actually sab log taarey scenes ki demand kar rahe the so...this part contains only taarey scenes...but nxt part is gonna be taajun's scene...and it will definately bring tears in your eyes.

PRECAP: taajun's date
arjun's heart break


















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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazingg update...
i guess this is what is called destiny...
arjun and rey and taani...somehw connected...
the flashback were amazingg...but when it came back to reality, felt so bad for rey...
update soon =)
and hope arjun finds out that she is taani and hope he knws bout taarey...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls post the next part soon and pm me...

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