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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update
Taarey's flashback was fantastic
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Superb luved how rey manofy taani n taajuns first meeting...eager to next chapter update soon n do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome update 👏
very well written 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice nice
please update soon :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Lovely update... Aww love Taani dream it was so beautiful
Arjun is going crazy over his DG lol. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update i luv arjun 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awe d flashback ws nostalgic! Arjun again lost in his DG,Rabbaji! Ufff,Taani at Singhania mansion,Arjun & Taani meeting ws wndrful.Our Arjun is so ecstatic wit d bracelet gesture.Hope hs heart dsnt brk wn he learns d truth tat she isn't meant fr him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Great update, I'm loving the concept, n I lovedd the flashback, haiii taarey!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
CHAPTER 4

mumbai-(afternoon tym)

rey was sitting in his cabin. he was lost in any other wrld...taarey wrld n thn someone knocks on door...rey comes to his senses and says"come in".
and then a girl wearing a beautiful dress comes inside..she hands over some files to rey and talks abt some wrk with him.and then while leaving.

girl:rey..r u alright??

rey:yeah kriya,i m fine. (guys dnt bash over kriya ,she is a +ve character)

kriya:so we all r going out for a movie...why dnt u join us??

rey:no thanks kriya, i have some work,u guys enjoy.

kriya comes out of rey's cabin and tells swaron tht he said no.swaron becomes sad.

kriya:let him be guys...hum pichle 2 saalo se yehi to try kar rahe h but vo nahi maanta...vo har mnth vaha jaaye bina manega nahi.so we should not force him.

sharon: ya kriya u r ri8...we should not force him varna vo phir depression mein chala jayega.

swayam: okay then guys lets get back to work.

LONDON (singhania's party)

arjun was busy in finding his dream girl...its been 20 mins but he didnt get even a single glance of her.but he is not gonna loose hope so easily...then suddenly someone taps on his shoulder.he turns around and see tht his mom-dad were standing behnd him.

A's dad:arjun kya dhoond rahe ho.

arjun:kuch nahi dad...vo aapko kuch kaam tha kya.?

A's dad: haan beta vo tum tanusha se nahi mile na ab tak.

arjun:baad mein dad abhi mujhe kuch aur bahut jaroori kaam h.

AM:par beta ek baar usse mil to lo...i m sure u wnt regret ur decision..plz ek baar mil lo.

arjun:okay mom main mil loonga...but vo hai kaha.
arjun(in mind):haan milkar usse jaldi se mana kar deta hu...aur phir apni DG ko dhoondunga.

arjun's mum luks all around in the hall and then she finds taani(tanusha) standing near a window.she tells arjun n indicates towards window...arjun starts moving towards window.

taani was busy in her own thoughts...she was not intrested in this party at all...there was a little snowfall outside...evrything was so beautiful but not more than taani. as arjun was moving towards her,his heart strts beating faster but he ignored it n goes n stands behind her.

arjun :excuse me ,miss.shekhawat.

taani turns around...and luks tht the same guy with whom she collided in the eve was standing there.

arjun was hell shocked now...he was not in this wrld. he was on ninth cloud.

taani:ya i m tanusha shekhawat,aapko kuch kaam tha.

arjun was still shocked and not answering her question.

taani:excuse me ...hey..where r u lost...??...hllo (n snaps her hands in his frnt)

arjun came backs to his senses n asks again. "r u tanusha shekhawat"??

taani: yes i m tanusha ,tanusha shekhawat.

arjun(happily moves his hand forward) :i m arjun..arjun singhania.

taani shakes hand with him

taani:nice to meet u mr.shinghania...so we r gonna wrk together on this project...ri8??

arjun:really ?? i mean yes yes...we'll definately wrk on this project.

then there was an awkward silence btw taajun...they were just luking here nd there.

arjun(in mind): omg...tanusha hi meri dg h...thnk u so much god...thnk u so much...ye kuch bol kyu nahi rahi h...main hi baat karoon kya...isse pata h humare rishte ke baare mein,...obviously usse to bataya hi hoga uski family ne .par baat strt kaise karu...god help me.

arjun: so tanusha (taani luks at him )...congrats.

taani:congrats???

arjun: dad ne bataya tha ki tumhe bussiness women of the year ka award mila h.

taani:oh ya...thnks mr.singhania.

arjun: arjun...call me arjun.

taani: thnks arjun.

arjun: so...kya karti ho tum. (in mind-freak arjun..bussinesswmn ka award mila h to bussiness hi karti hogi na...)...i mean business ke alawa studies n all.

taani: hmm nahi abhi 1 yr pehle hi studies finish hui h abhi only tauji ki help karti hu bussiness mein.

arjun: tauji?? oh so mr.shekhawat tumhare tauji h...nd tumhare parents i mean ur mom n dad...india mein rehte h kya. ??
(taani's face falls suddenly after hearing wrd parents)

before taani could reply...mr n mrs singhania came there. n joins them.

AD: tum log yaha akele kyu khade ho...come ..hav fun.

AM: ya why dnt u guys dance.

taani: vo actually aunty...(before she could complete..arjun's mom goes in centre n takes a mic n makes announcement)

AM: attention evryone...thnks for coming...so as we all knw..today singhania's and shekhawat's are going to make a big project. nd we r glad tht our children are gonna luk after this project...so i want to call miss tanusha shekhawat and arjun singhania to dance nd to make this day more memorable.

taani was not comfortable at all ...she hates dancing ...actually she hates evrything which reminds her of rey ...but dancing is top on tht list...because while dancing she can feel rey...she can feel his presence...dance is rey's soul nd taani wanted to stay away frm even rey's memories so how could she dance .

arjun was confused tht why she is thinking so much over it...then he thinks tht she must be of shy nature...so he forwarded his hand n asks taani for dance.

taani looks around and see tht evryone's staring her and she didnt want to create a scene so she keeps her hand on arjun's hand and gives him a smile.

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they both moves in centre and many other couples join them...and then the song starts...arjun asks for taani's hand and she gives him her hand and he holds her by waist and taani keeps her hand on his shoulder and closes her eyes.

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon mein hogi subah

taani in rehersal hall wearing a red dress(valentine dance dress)...rey was angry with her,...she keeps her hand on his shoulders...and sings ..and keeps rey's hand on heart...rey takes her in his arms sidely and rotates.

Jab saanson mein teri saansein ghuli toh
Phir sulagne lage
Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage
Haan baahon mein teri aa ke jahaan do
Yoon simatne lage
Sailaab jaise koi behne lage
Khoya hoon main aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahaan ab hosh mein
Makhmali raat ki ho naa subah
Be intehaan, be-intehaan
Yoon pyar kar be-inteha

arjun was standing in middle of the hall and taani was in frnt of her...they were all alone in the hall...arjun takes her hand and rolls her to himself...and then holds her by waist and takes her up ...she came slowly slowly down and then arjun hugs her and then rotates her...and she rests her head on his shoulder nd then arjun cames out of trances and see taani in frnt of him and still closing her eyes...he smiles seeing her like this. there was a sweet smile on her face.

Gustakhiyan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum karein is tarah
Sharma ke do saaye hain jo
Muh pher lein hum se yahaan

taani was still in her flashback...rey came nd starts tickling her ...she was running from here and there and then rey holds her by waist ...taani feels shy nd hides her face in his chest.

Haan chhoo to liya hai ye jism tune
Rooh bhi choom le
Alfaaz bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Haan yoon choor ho ke majboor ho ke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Do bekhabar bheege badan
Ho besabar bheege badan
Le rahe raat bhar angdaiyaan

rey cups her face in his hands and kisses her forhead, then eyes and cheeks and was moving to her lips...their lips were inches apart and then taani turns nd strts running but rey holds her hand nd pushes her to himself...she comes crashing his chest...rey thn starts giving wet kisses on her shoulder...then rey leaves her and stands still there...taani see this nd then turns around and places her lips on his...they were kissing each other passionately...then a tear drop came from taani eyes and she realises tht she is not with rey anymore...she opens her eyes nd see tht she is with arjun...they were still doing tht formal dance and evryone around them are busy ..some in dancing...some in their talks...she was feeling bad to be in arjun's arms. she wanted to free herself frm his hands.

Be inteha, be inteha
Yoon pyaar kar, be inteha
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishan, be-intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan

arjun notices the tears in taani's eyes...he was confused tht why she is crying...before he could understand or ask her ...she rans away from there...she runs out of the door...still crying leaving a confused arjun behind. and then arjun moves from there. and then song also ends.

arjun wents outside and tries to call taani but she sits in her car nd drove off. arjun was now confused as well as worried.

MUMBAI (eve- 6pm )

a car came n stops. rey comes out of the car and starts to move...

rey:taani i m here again ,for u...taani u r my life and main tumse kiya hua promise kabhi nahi tod sakta..main aaj bhi har month yaha aata hu apna promise poora karne...humne saath mein yaha jo promise liya tha vo tum bhool gayi but mujhe aaj bhi yaad h vo din...aaj bhi main tumhe yaha feel kar sakta hu.

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precap : taarey flashback
rey crying for taani
taajun's first drive

guys nxt chapter is gonna be vry emotional and heart touching...but i m really vry dissaponted...main arond 50 pms bhejti hu but cmmnts only 10 or hardly 15...guys itni bekaar story bhi nahi h...F.B pe upload karti hu to sab bahut like n cmmnt karte h but yaha to koi karta hi nahi h...i m really vry sad ...plz cmmnt guys ...ab agar 20 cmmnts nahi hue to main nxt chapter update nahi karoongi...so cmmnt guys . agar acchi nahi h story to cmmnt kardo and main aage nahi continue karoongi...but plz guys cmmnt.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Sorry for reading and commenting late but here is my compensation
part 1
loved how u describe taani and her sadness.
lol i was expecting arjun to be rey but well he is nice too 😉
poor rey wanna know y she left
swaron r couple yaaa
gonna go read next part n comment on it 😃

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