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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">amazing</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">loved it</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">so much</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">thanx frd pm</font>


Thanks dr for the comments
Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz if u hav a time guys then
choise any one for my new thread...lolll yes u heared me right...
i know abhi time haiii...
phir bhi..
yes Lolll thoda or bardaah ker looo...

one vali ya two valiii


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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART=30
"Hone lagi hai ek nayee rishte ke shuruyat..."

.

.
SCENCE-
Arjun encircled his arms around riya's waist n rest his head slowly on riya tummy,
.
Just wanna to feel his baby or whats his baby is saying,
.
that was the beautiful moments for both,
.
tears comes out riya's eyes but that time its a simble of happiness,
.
She wanna to creased arjun's hair , she wanna to touch arjun's face,
But controled herself her best,
.
---
the sweet moments is
brocked by a stupid phon call,
It was non other then sameer,
.

Arjun comes out his dreamland,
he didnt realize when he encircle riya's waist,
.
Arjun hegitatly stood up.
voo main ...
(She felt litle said bez
the sweet moment is brocken soon)
n picked his call,
.
haan rathore bolo,
koe case hai kya.??
Ra-kyun bina case ke phon nahi ker sakta kya..??
.
Ar-(in mind) ab. ese kya ho gaya.??anyway
ab bologe kis liye call kiya,
.
Ra-voo tum or riya thik thak gher pahoonch gaye ya nahii,
.
Arjun litle angery,
Rathore hum koe chote bachhe nahi...
but rathore cut him mid,
.
Mujhe tumhare phiker nahi,
main to bus riya or apne bhanje ke bare main poonch raha tha,

.

usane dinner kiya ya nahi,

Ar-(In mind)Ohh shit main to es baare main bhul he gaya,
ab tak to dinner thanda bhi ho gaya hoga,
.
Few minute before
Arjun changed his nightwears,
n goes in kitchen for preparing some healthy food for riya n ofcouse his baby to,
He instantly made chapati n daal,
(Loll cool hubby ehsa hubby to sab ko milana chahiye whats say..?)
he arrenge tray...
with chapati ,daal salet,one glass milk,
n goes in riya's room..
Before he asked riya to eat her dinner,
he noticed she is lost in somewere,
he put tray aside n goes near to her..
N put his hand on her shoulder...







Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Arjun cut the call n goes in riya's room..
now she was bussy on phone..
.
Few minute before
The same time riya's phone start ringing..
It was shree...
Ri-Haa bolo shree..
Sh-Ri pehale ye bata tu akeli hai na..
Ri-haan per tum ehsa kyun pooch rahe ho..
.
Sh-Are kuch nahi bus conform ker raha tha ,vo khadus to tere asp pass nahi hain..esliye..
.
Ri-Shut up shree jo arjun sir ke baare main kuch kaha..
.
Sh-Arjun Sir gher per bhi sir..
Ri tera kuch naho ho sakta..
Yr gher per to thoda romentic tarike se baat ker..
darling ,hubby,sonna my sweet heart, vagera vagera..
.
She blushes after hearing this..
but soon her blush faded..
.
Ri (MV)-ye huk to shayad
mujhe kabhi nahi milega..
.
Sh-are kahan kho gaye..
Dekh arjun sir ko apne adaon ke thode jalwe dikha..
Unhen abhi se apne kabu main rakhna shikh le..
.
Ri (in mind)-Vo to mere taraf dekhate hi nahi..us najer se..
main to bus unke liye ek responsibilty hoon..
.
Sh-kya huya riya..tu sun rahi hai naa..
Ri-haan (with said tone)
.
(Arjun enters in the room)
---
AR-Riya kiss se baat ker rahi hoo..
Ri-vo Shree(hold her phon litle away)
arjun nodded carry on..

Sh-riya maine abhi abhi research kiya hai..or mujhe pata chala hai..
pregnacy ke time..78 percentage husband apni wife ke vajah dosari ladies main jayada interest rakhaten hain...
.
Ri-(yelled)Shuttt up shree kya bakbas ker...
but stoped in mid..
Arjun rised his one eyes brow n signal her to give him her phon..
.
She passed her smiled n say bus ehse hi..
(But his one glare is enough ,
she imedeatly giv her phon to arjun)
.
Sh-Are meri baat samajhane ke koshish ker Ri verna bahoot der ho jayegii..
.
Ar-kya der ho jayegi shree..
(Almost yelled on shree)
.
Sh-Siiirrr aaappp apne phon kab liya..voo o main to..
Ayaaa maaa n imedeatly cut the call..
.
on the other riya







Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Fearly closed her eyes..she think now definitly arjun yelled on her..
.
Ager sari baat khatam ho gaye too..
Dinner karen..
its to late ..or uske baad tumhen medicine bhi leni hain..
.
She just nodded her head..
N sit on her bed..
(Arjun put tray in front of
her )
A litle smile creapt on riya face..(In mind)-Aap bahoot achhen hai sir..(her eyes fixed on arjun)
.
(arjun sit near to her)
chalo ab jaldy se dinner karo..
She looks toward the food..
eyuuu...Phir vahi..(in mind)-enhen eske alava kuch or banana nahi ata..
.
Ar-es taraha ghurana band karo..or jaldy se finished karo ese...
.
She took one bits..
n forward toward arjun..
Arjun looked her with surprising expresstion..
.
Ri-Vo baby ka aaj akele khane ka mood nahi..
use apne papa ke sath dinner kerna hai..
.

Arjun binna kuch kahe chup chap kha leta hai..
(in mind-kabhi soncha nahi tha,roshani ke baad bhi koe mera apna hoga..meri apni family..mera baby..kuch kuch mahino baad meri god main khelega..
mujhe baba kahega..)
after finishing dinner..its time for riya's medicine..
.
Chalo aab chup chap ye medicine khao..
She makes again her face..
Humm k per main ye milk nahi piongii..
i hate milk..
Ar-riyaa just finished it,..now dont behaves like a kids..
(Its hurting riya ,she makes a sad face,n look other side)
.
Arjun took a long breath..
in mind-gher main kitani manmani or office main avaj tak nahi nikalti..
.
arjun took a long breath..
Riya chalo ab achhe bachhe ke taraha finish karo,
tumare health ke liye or baby ke heath ke liye u needs this
.
She yelled..why only me haan..aap bhi to baby ke papa hain..then u also needs na..
.
(Whattt (lolll )ye kya she yelled on me..)
.
Arjun again surpised by her behavioure..but he knew very well its all side effect of pregnacy or so called mod swings (uff poor husbands)
.







Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Arjun moves litle closer to her..
She looks arjun with her corner of eyes..
.
Tumne abhi abhi kya kaha riya..
.
Ri-kya.??
Ar-(litle naughty)..made her face to look him..
he leand his face near to her n wishper straght looking her eyes...
Yahi ke me also needs the milk..erada kya hai..?
.

arjun's breath hitting her face..thats increasing her heart beat...
.
Ri-WWhaaat erada.??
(she didnt understand whats arjun meants,
But after few second whats his meants...n turned her face shly..She feel emarranced...)

.
Arjun just smiled her antics n forwad her to milk glass..
She finished all milk in one ..
.
stil looking other side..
ab so jao..
After saying this he left her room..
.
Ri-(Stil smiled shly)Riya tu bhi..bolane se pehale ek baar to sonch leti..
n start giggling..
.
She kissed her hand n then put her hand on her belly..
good night baby ..
.
tumhare mama day by day thode pagal hoti jaa rahi hain..or apke papa day by day naughty hote jaa rahe hain..
again start giggling..
soon she drifted in sleep..
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On the other-
Arjun didnt know why he said all this to riya..
.
controled arjun..
pata nahi riya kya sonch rahi hogi meri bare main..
.
----
SCENCE-Shift in present--
.
arjun comes out his thought when riya again spook with her brocken voice..
Arjunnn... sirr..
Promised me...plz ..promised me..
.
Arjun hold her hand tightly..
n kissed her palm..
Haan bolo riya..haan bolo main yahin hoon..tumhare pass..
--


(I know its hurting u,but its eassy to feel the situation)
--
Sirrr plzz promised me..
plz..if u hv..v ,if u hv to choo..oise from o..ur baby n me..
.
Arjun put his finger on riya's lips..Riyaaa plzzz kuch maat kaho..
.
Ri-Pllzz sirr mujhe boo..olane dijiye..
in case if uuu hhhv to chose me..nnn nn ouuurr bb..baby
u chooosse








Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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u chhoise our baby..
Ar-Riiiyaaa
how could u think that..
Tumne ehsa soncha bhi kaise ke main..tumhare jagah baby ko choise karonga..
Ri-plzz try to unnderrr understan...d
Ar-justtt shutt up riya
(yelled on her)
.
Ar-tumhari manmani her baar nahi chalegi samjhi tum..
jab dekho apni manmani..
but now no more..
Samjhi ya samjhayon..
Ager ehsi koe situation huye bhi to i choise u..
he hold her shoulder..
Sunna tumne..i choise u..
.
Arjun leaned closer n hug tightly riya n start crying like a small child..
u r imortent most importent person in my life..
u r my life or tum keh rahi ho...
main tumjari jagah baby ko..
tumne ehsa sonncha bhi kaise..
tum mujhase meri life chhinane ke baare main keh bhi kaise sakti hoo..Riyaaa...
Ri-But u promised me arjun..
u protect our baby always..
Ar-Nooo i said i protect u n our baby always..
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SCENCE SHIFT:-
few days later--
justtt shut uppp guys ye sab kya laga rakha hai tum dono ne...
Tum dono mujhe kuch kaam kyun nahi kerne deate..
.
Sh-Ri tu tenstion maat le..dekh kaam kerne ke liye hum hain..or ehsi haalat main tera kaam kerna bilkul thik nahi..maine reasurch...
.
Ri-just shut up..bhad main jaye tum or tumhare reasurch..
.
Ch-Riya samajhane ke koshish ker yr..
But shut his mouth imedeatly looking riya's angery face..
.
Riya took her file again n start paper work..
.
Ch-bach gaye yr verna aaj to..
sh-haan poori gusse main hain..sab arjun sir ka aser hai..
Ch-unke sath rahegi to unki kuch adaten ton shikh hi jayegi..

-
Ri( in mind)-sirf abhi teen maoth huye per ye dono ehse react ker rahen hai..jaise main poori nine month ke pregnant hoon..
---
All work is complete n all goes their houses--
---
In ariya place-
After dinner
Arjun searching somthing in his almira..
TBC-whats he searching.???
Mast ya bore.??
hop u like







Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_piya_ll

Justwaittt aram se likhhngiii


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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update as always :) loved it
oh no sam broke their sweet moment
love the way rathore was asking questions to arjun
and then love the way arjun was replying to him
awww how sweet arjun prepared food for riya :)
shree called arjun khadus 😆
shree is too much 😆
arjun took riya's phone from her and almost yelled on shree 😆
love the way riya said "Vo baby ka aaj akele khane ka mood nahi.. use apne papa ke sath dinner kerna hai.." :)
poor riya didn't even realize what she said 😆
In present scenes i knew it riya is gonna ask arjun to choose their baby instead of her
love the way arjun was telling riya his feelings
awww choree aren't letting riya do anything :)
wonder what is arjun searching
can't wait to read more
please continue very soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Piya Aapi...!!

Plzz...update sooon na!

Sooon means 'SOOON'...aab samjhi...ya samjhaun?!

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