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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Awesome work dear
loved the bonding of ariya and other members of etf with riya
arjun understands her so well
update soon
thanx for pm
and i will be reading just ariya work so do send me the pms...

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Thanks sweetu for the update.

Awww their cute n romantic moment was broken by Sam's call.

Loved Sam's concern for Riya.

Waaaoo Arjun made dinner for her.

Loved Samjun's convo.

Shree n Riya's convo was funny yet emotional.

Bechara Shree bach gaya varna Arjun say jarur pit ta.

Eagerly waiting for the rest of the part.

Bakki ka bhi jaldi update kar dr,

Cant wait more.

Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago

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856040

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Husband toh arjun jaisa hona chahiye

kitna care kerta hai

yeh shree koi kaam nahi hai jo riya ko bhadka rahi hai

arjun is being so naughty

hope riya is fine

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

nice one dear.. Loved it..

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

I know thoda bore haii...
per track change kerna haiii...
thats why ????
thoda bardash ker looo...
hop u like...
coming trackkk
piya...
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TEASER

PART=31
Arjun opened his door n saw..
she was standing outside n her face covered woth sweats..
Before arjun could asked her..
She hug tightly arjun n start crying on arjun's arms...
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FEW MINUTE BEFORE:-

Arjunnn sirrr..!!!!! she screamed n wook up her sleep...
she breathing heavily..
she wiped her sweats..n looked here n there..just wanna to recognized her place...
.
She was in her room..
She turned his face n looked the time, it was 2:30...
.
She get up n goes outside arjun's room..
N start nocking his door...
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PART=32
2IN DOCTORS CABINE:-
Dekhiye kabhi kabhi ehse halat main nightmire aker ladies ko ate hain..
.
She needs extra care n concern..
Or maine aap se kaha tha she needs rest...
Riya ko proper aram ke jarorat hai...
mentaly or physicaly dono...
.
Arjun looks angerly toward riya..in mind-meri sunti hai tab na..
mana kiya tha maine kuch time ke liye aram ker lo..
etf anne ke koe jarorat nahi per nahi...
.
Riya looked arjun as she understand ,whats was he thinking...
.
Ar-or ye pet main dard..i meen...
Do-sab tenstion ke vajaha se or...
Ar-or kya doc-

Do-dekhiye ehse waqt
main ... mr arjun u hav to do full carefully..
i meen dont put lot of pressure..
.
What.??? he start coughing..
(lolll)
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hop u like lolll...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

Nice update... Ariya scene past one was nice... i knew this vl b Arjuns reaction whn Riya tell him to choose baby over her... emotional scene... continue soon

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Cool teaser last part cracked me up... Doc bhi na...lol

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bellasha

@bellasha

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Ohhh so cute update lvld it so much...
Waooo arjun is so nice..
he cook food for her ...so sweet...
ohh present scence is so imostionalll me gonna cry..
diii its realy heart touching..
i m wandering forum only reading ur update..
u know naa how much i bussy...
Teaser is cool but ye doc ne ehsa meens ahumm ahumm poor arjun..he he he update soon

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

Awesome part lovit plz cont soon

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#680

Haa...haa...haa...!!

Poor Shree! Ek to pregnancy ke upar research kiya...upaar se Arjun ka daant!!

Aww... Arjun is such a sweet hubby!

Lovely update aapi! Continu soon!