Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Lovely start to the new thread.

Things are speeding up between Arnav and Khsuhi, and it is good to their relationship from a different angle.

Khushi's confession about her cooking skills were so adorable.

And Arnav is the one who has god cooking skills here.

It seems that you have added many new talents to our great Arnav Singh Raizada.

looking forward to read the next chapter.

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aaliah3108

@aaliah3108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

sorry I am late. Was travelling yaar !!

... aye! haye !!! Arnav clicking pics of Khushi ... wow !!! you take the story from where to where even though the transition is veryyy subtle...

beautiful update. I really liked it... it is an important one because it has made Arnav realise that Khushi has entered his mind and heart slowly but steadily...

Likho likho ...likhte jaooo ... you are a sweetie I tell you.

tc and keep rocking !

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neha

@neag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

he is so afraid to open his heart for emotions such love and care ... angrey at himself

she is so live girl mature but child at times also

...getting with the story lets see what happen next ,,,,,,,,,, loved the update how Arnav secretly snapped Khushi in few pics and then made dinner for both

thanx for an update

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sugarbird

@sugarbird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

thanks for the update...
wonderful writing skills...
the inner mind monologue conversation of both end was lovely return... can view the scenes playing before will reading ur update...
lovely, thoroughly enjoyed...

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Fabulous Update...Loved it...

it was a day of understanding...understanding each other a bit more...

Where khushi came to know that her limp did not bother him at all...He was a man of few words and shied away from emotions and feelings keeping his heart locked up.

Arnav understood a bit of what care is again...Khushi refusing to eat till he ate something touched his heart...he got a glimpse of the mature and caring khushi.

You have potrayed Khushi very realistically...Like she has no experience running a household...Being as pampered as she is it was obvious as this is her first time to be left alone...Khushi cannot cook much and Arnav is a decent cook...😊...The Arshi convo in the kitchen was hillarious...😆😆...Khushi was cute...

"What do you wanna eat? Bread-butter or Maggi?' "

"'Neither. We should eat something normal people eat in dinner' "...🤣

Finally Arnav is getting more n more comfortable with her...be it being patient with her when she told him she had given OP and HP a day off...or yelling at her when she took a huge knife to cut the tomato being very concerned...initiating a conversation unable to bear her silence or indulgently listening to her just as Bade Papa and Buaji did...Khushi is making a place for herself in his heart...by not giving up of him even though he was rude to her initially...her caring abt him eating as he is diabetic...She is definitely becoming a habit of his without even him understanding it...Update soon...

Edited by musicfan5 - 12 years ago

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Sona Rajasingh

@sonarajasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

khushi is so cute and hilarious...perfect combination... awesome...loved it...the no dinner at home thing...ys we wuld hav done dat atleast once in our lives...superb...luvd how u potrayed dem in d kitchen...perfect household tunning it was...brilliant...

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lika63

@lika63

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

awww

how cute update.

thanks for pm.

wen update is perfect watelse should say other dan aww.

dnt hav anythng to anythng to suggest or to express 1 particular thing wen liked total update.

chuuper. :)

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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

that was too good,,...!!!
w8ng for next!!

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Beautiful update...

arnav is falling for khushi...unconsciously he took her pics in the mela...and he is worried for her...he does not like if she stops her chatter...

khushi made him feel like he is important and wanted...and it seems like it might be arnav who will realise his feelings for her first...loved the update...