Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

aww he looked out for her and took her pics=]
hes defo aint like shyam
i like the flow of this storyy
and arnav is slowly opening himself up to khushi

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basanti108

@basanti108

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

aww lovely update...they are moving foreword...slowly but surely are

Thank you for the pm 😊

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Oh dear!!!!!!!!! what an update!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome...the way arnav is slowly changing and give in 2 feelings for khushi has been penned very very nicely...keep it up...👏👏👏

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Awesome update

Arnav is getting chilled

He has a soft corner for khushi

can't wait to read more

Thx for the PM

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

read from chapter 9 to 11 as was out.. loved all the three chapters.. they were all awesome... loved the changes happening in Arnav with Khushi around him.. he is taking care of her and something more is happening with him and he is acknowledging them to be his own undoings.. but overall loved all the updates.. Khushi is always sweet.. 😃

thanks for pm and giving such a lovely story.. 😊

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sonia jangotra

@abraxos

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

what khushi doesn't know how to cook. i don't believe it. loved the update. loved how both of them are taking baby step in their relationship. well i loved cheff raizada

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cool_zephyr

@cool_zephyr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Woah that is one helluva awesome update which is very much vivid.
Just loved it to the bits.
This update stirred all types of emotions in me. It brought tears to my eyes when khushi was walking past behind him so that he wont feel embarrassed, when Arnav was having a monologue about heart and brain and about the expectations his heart shouldn't have. The tranquility when arnav was smiling to himself while seeing pics on his camera, the care they both had for each other. Laughing at khushi's culinary skills and their kitchen conversation and finally ajeeb sa sukoon reading arnav's finishing monologues where khushi is compared to a constant Sun which is true btw.
Awesomeness is all I want to say!!!!

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

I am so happy that Arnav is more comfortable with Khushi
He is becoming facinated with her, he wants her around
him

cant wait to see how things develops