Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

wow nice chappy dear...
Haaye iss pyar ko kya naam doon...
Update soon and thanks fr the pm...

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

very cute

so he took loads of pictures of her which made him smile seeing her smile

she didn't eat until she found something for him - pure care there

he is showing true concerns for her health etc.

and her smile will be his undoing - awww

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narcy24

@narcy24

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

That chapter was AMAZING...
Arnav started a conversation...he liked the time spent with her...that is new...
Loved the way you present each other thoughts.

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Wow, what an amazing update. Simply fantastic or rather beautiful. Just Arnav and Khushi, no one else in whole update and Arnav's baby steps towards Khushi. Every interaction was written so perfectly that it was like playing in front of me, very realistic & beautiful. Super duper awesome update, loved it.

Thanks for the PM, eagerly waiting for next!

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bhutop

@bhutop

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

lovely update...I like the friendship thts developing between them

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Seethu

@Seethu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

First and foremost, loved the description of mela and details in it ..

Loved the entire interaction of Arnav and Khushi during their day out;

The important aspects of this update are - Arnav got the complete/clear picture of Khushi's personality; he realized how she didn't take his rudeness into account and made all efforts to become friends with him ; he realized how affectionate she is towards him as she was not happy about him not eating anything through out the day ; he not only recognized her inner beauty but also her outer beauty which is why she occupied in most of the pictures :)

I'm glad that even Khushi got to know about his true self little bit when he didn't distance himself from her in the mela :)

Dinner sequence was just awesome and hilarious too :)

Awesome update !!! Thanks for the PM :)

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Rainy01

@Rainy01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Awesome update as usual... Description of Mela was wonderful as I was reading I felt like I was as actually in the Mela.. And Kushi eating after finding something that Arnav can eat...such a caring and him cooking dinner... Wow I was enjoying reading.

Thanks for the pm..ur awsome.

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Wow awesome update. Loved the potato chips convoy lovely. Then op hp day off just like a kid her answers. Then her self gard incooking.ho my pasta eating with all sounds loved it. Total a cute update. Thks for the pm dear.

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sarunsanju

@sarunsanju

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

beautiful update :-) finally arnav and khushi are liking each others company.dinner moments were so cute.waiting next update.

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Finally Arnav and khushi have become friends and now it seems soon she will have a very special place in Arnav heart although its going to take quiet sometime before he really acknowledges her importance in his life. Khushi has managed to make some place in his heart. Lets see how things move forward between these two and ya the pics he clicked lets see how khushi reacts when she gets o know what actually happened less pics of the mea and more Khushi 😉