Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 5

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daneshzeest

@daneshzeest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Hiii...
Read the update in the morning...
Sorry could not comment immediately...
Was held up the whole day..
Such a beautiful update...
Luved the part where arnav realises that he had clicked a lot of khushi's snaps...
The way khushi defended her cooking skills was so cute...
Good to read arnav changing his feelings towards khushi...
Waiting to read more...

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

lady your writing is just brilliant...

the part was just fantastic...it was like flow of water..one linked to another..in such a beautiful way

SUperb update :)

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

really hoped that arnav loved the first introduction to khushi's colorful and happy world!

very beautifully written update.

without even him knowing it, khushi is very fast becoming an integral of his life india!

khushi ll be the one who ll be able to unlock arnav's heart and show him that joys are life are from simple things and it doesnt cost anything to be happy and to smile:)

wow loved the caring khushi that wont anything until she is sure arnav too is having some thing! loved the way their comfort level has increased considerately since they were left alone on their own! a big thx for buaji (even indirectly) and sumer to have given them this golden opportunity to know each other better:)

that was so sweet of arnav to make them food even im not sure if it was willingly or out of fear of going to bed hungry.

eagerly waiting for the next update:)

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Aha! so finally the mela update! :)

Naaaice! :)

I had already anticipated that half the camera mem stick is gonna be filled with candid pics of Khushi's ! aww!! so cute!

I am glad Arnav is beginning to live a lill... courtesy like he himself rightly said 'Khushi'!

Loved the dinner conversation!

The Whole update almost dedicated to Arnav's POV was well appreciated at this juncture! His transition from being a cold person to that of warmth filled is but vital to the story! So it was well projected i must say!

Lets see how things shape up from this point ...

Thanks for the update Vats! :)

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@ihtruda

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

its just awesome... cant stop commenting on the story line. the way you write about two distinct characters is splendid... great work...

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GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

wonderful update

your writing skills are truly amazing! how you wrote so beautifully Arnav's emotions were awesome! i had tears in my eyes!

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

a not so perfect khushi is just so perfect.
ahan the fair pics were less thn khushi's pic and yet you mr arnav have to find out the reason for it.
awesome update. i couldnt help but smile through out.

Edited by Amiarisme - 12 years ago

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Loved Arnav and Khushi's together time. Its good to see them not just trying to bear each other but rather being actively involved with each other. LOL...Khushi doesn't know to cook and Arnav does. That scene was cute too. Loved it. Thanks for the PM.

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thesis

@thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Firstly am glad u give us long updates it was a nice one i have to admit this kushi is insecure but i like her zest n her witty remarks man shes funny i like she notices mr raizada hmmm things are gonna cook up soon even oger a hearty meal...

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sadia

@sadianabil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#210

Beautifully written.

"It is my first time running the house. It slipped my mind. I forgot that there would be no dinner waiting for us at home because generally it is there" -------- an honest confession. It happens in real life.

'I know how to make rice, maggi, warm up milk, boil potatoes and make bread butter & bread jam too'.🤣

Waiting for next update.