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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NIDZIII

for the first tym ever im commenting. On any of the ff's .. Its my favourite ff.. Nd yaa pls pls update soon..😊

thnx a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

awesome update


loved the swaron moment after everybody left


glad u liked it
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CHAPTER 39

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recap: entry of dada dadi, get-together, swaron passionate dance, kriyansh patchup




Get together ended with a happy note of everyone wishing Kriyansh once again .. everyone wrapped up as Neha was pregnant and she needed rest, she argued by saying that they could continue the party but no one listened to her..shikha and Maria left biding good bye to everyone n Aditya offered pinky to drop which she agreed..

Dadi and dada literally pushed Kriyansh inside their room ,

"tan-tadaaa!!! SURPRISE!!" daadaji shouted from back.. all came hearing dada-dadi's loud voice, Dada & dadi pushed Kriyansh into their room and all also came inside..

Kria's and Rey's eyes popped open wide with shock, they gulped hard and looked at eachother..They looked at the room which was decorated with beautiful candles and petals of roses scattered on the bed..

vicky and Neha controlled their laughter , Swayam looked at them and smirked whereas Sharon beamed with happiness'

"wow!! Di !! yeh room toh bahot sundar lag raha hai.." she chirped clapping her hands.. "aap dono ko kitna maza ayega na sone mein??" Sharon unknowingly blurted out without analyzing what she is saying..

"ahem !! ahem!!" Martin coughed fakely controlling his laughter looking at Kriyansh red blushing faces..

"acha chalo ab tum dono araam karo.. ok!!" dadi said and added

"chalo ab dulha dulhan ko akele chodo"

All went outside of the room.

"Rey sun..!!" dadaji called out..

"ji dadaji??" Rey came to dadaji

"ja mere sher aur jeet ke aa use..!! mera khandan ka naam roshan kar!! GO AND BELL THE CAT!!" dadaji whispered but somewhat was loud while saying the last sentence..

Kria heard it but pretended as if she didn't heard anything..

Dadaji winked at Rey and left..


Kria was really scared when she overheard dadaji .. Rey locked the door and as he was locking the door, Kria's breath stuck inside her body.. she was really scared, Rey turned back and stepped towards her but as he took a step, Kria too stepped back.. she was avoiding looking at him, he understood she was feeling awkward with the atmosphere.. he stopped moving towards her and sat on the sofa , seeing him sitting on the sofa away from her , she sighed with relief , she slowly sat on the bed..


after few min they both spoke in unison

"woh.."

They looked at eachother

Rey sighed and sat near her on bed at a decent distance from her..

"Kria!!"


As Rey called her name she jerked at her place, Rey noticed her reaction, he never wanted to scare her.. this was the last thing he wanted to happen between them, he wouldn't mind if they would keep on fighting playfully but feeling awkward while being with each other, he couldn't handle it..he thought to start a fight but at this time he thought much more was needed'


He took a deep breath and sat down on the floor near her legs and looked at her face, she looked at him with confusion..

"Kria main woh tumse kehna chahta ki ab humari shaadi ho chuki hai, and tum janti ho na ki hume ' ek hi kamre mein ...toh.."


"toh'??" Kria looked at him horrified , she was praying from inside "please god yeh kuch ajeeb na kare.. please god!!"


"toh' main yeh keh raha tha ki humhe yeh room share karna padega and I know tumhare liye yeh awkward hoga and trust me mere liye bhi same situation hai isliye to make things easier ' kya hum friends ban ke sath reh sakte hai??" Rey added

"so 'Friends??" Rey asked extending his hand to shake..


"friends !!" Kria smiled and they shook their hands

"Kria ?? ek baat aur.. woh main tumhe batana chahta hoon ki main kabhi-kabhi, mazak-mazak mein bahot ulti seedhi harkatein kar jata hu but please tum mujhse kabhi naraz mat hona..n agar tumhe kabhi mera mazak bura lage toh you are free to tell me.." Rey said looking at her

"acha main change kar ke aata hu!!" Rey said while going into the washroom

"hmm!! " Kria said smiling


Kria took her luggage bags and sat on sofa to look for something to wear..

"yeh kya Sharon ne apne jaise night wear kyu mere bag mein daal diye?? And mere nightwear kaha hai??" she said looking at the night shorts and a tank top on not finding her top and Capri or harem to wear..

Then suddenly a thought struck in her mind "HELL !! yeh toh maine socha hi nahi ,agar dada- dadi ne mujhe inme dekh liya toh?? Woh kya sochenge?? and moreover Rey ke saamne'" she trailed off..


Just then the door clicked open..

Rey came outside with wet hair wearing nothing on top and a track pants..

Kria gawked at him with open mouth..

Seeing her reaction, Rey smirked , he came near her , bent down at her level as she was sitting on sofa , closed her mouth and lifted her chin with his index finger and blew air softly in her face...

"so what say wifey?? Did I killed you with my looks?? Liked my muscles??" Rey asked flaunting his muscles before her like a body builder

Kria came out of her trance and stood abruptly making Rey step back away from her..

She turned her back towards him..

"Reyansh yeh kya hai?? Tumne apne saare kapde bech diye kya?? Tumne aise bina kapdo ke kyu ghum rahe ho??" Kria said

Rey smiled at her reaction and thought to play some more , he came near her from back and wispered

"kyun tumhe acha ni laga??"


"dekho rey please tum kapde pehan lo" Kria almost requested


"but Kria mujhe neend nahi ayegi phir!! Ok!! Relax!!"

He opened his cupboard and took out a vest and wore it..

"Kria now you can turn back" Rey said chuckling at her reaction

Kria turned back and avoided his eyes..

"acha ab tum bhi jao aur change karlo" Rey asked

"ummm Rey do you have any spare shirt??"

"hmmm.." he handed her his bestest shirt..


She hurriedly went inside the washroom without looking at him

Rey was not liking the way Kria was behaving, he thought "itna samjhane ke baad bhi..?? lagta hai Rey tujhe apna charm chalana hi padega, woh gusse mein cute dikhne wali Kria wapas lani padegi, taki uska awkwardness se dhyaan hat jaye"

Rey was in his thoughts and was thinking about a way to execute his plan..suddenly Kria came out

Rey looked at her in awe from head to toe..

She was wearing a tank top and shorts and she had tied Rey's shirt around her waist with the help of the shirt's sleeves so that it could hide her thighs..and the most amazing thing, she was still wearing the wedding bangles which he had made her wear and dadi had asked her to wear it for 15 days atleast..


She looked so sexy and hot but Kria tried to avoid his looks which didn't go unnoticed by Rey, he frowned..

He composed himself and said "Kria yeh kya kiya tumne yeh meri fav shirt thi"

Kria looked at him as if he is mad

"Rey ek shirt hi toh hai'"

"whatever!! Chalo ab hume sona chahiye.."

Saying this he made his way towards bed and took a quilt and pillow & came towards Kria

"what a gentle man he is!!" Kria thought

But her dreams shattered , Rey came to her and said

"tum ek kaam karo main bed pe so jata hu n tum couch pe so jao.."

"what??" Kria said loudly

"or nahi toh kya maine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki main apna bed kisi ke sath share nahi karunga" saying that he was about to go to the bed but Kria stopped him by holding his arms

"ohh!! Toh tumhe kyun lagta hai ki main couch par soungi??" she handed him the pillow n quilt and slept on the right side of her bed..

"mujhe right side mein sona hai!!"

"whatever mujhe left side mein neend ni aati hai" Kria tried to argue

"but' now this is really not done Kria!! Yeh mera room and mera bed hai" Rey whined

"main biwi hoon tumhari remember??" Kria retorted and covered herself with quilt

Rey chuckled a bit hearing that and smiled on seeing old Kria back, he thought to play some more

"ok biwi!!" he went and lied on the left side of the bed, then pulled the same quit for him that Kria was draped with, Kria shivered a bit but controlled herself, she was laying almost on the edge of the bed..Rey saw this and smirked.. he intentionally moved his legs and touched hers

Kria jerked feeling the sensation that she fell off the bed with a THUD!!

Rey bent down and asked with "oh-so-innocent-look"

"hey what are you doing there?? Kuch kho gaya kya??"

Kria glared at him but gave him extra sugary smile and said

"kuch ni.."


Rey felt weird at her smile

They both laid on their places, Rey had just closed his eyes when Kria's hand landed on his nose..

He jerked and sat on the bed, rubbing his nose but saw Kria sleeping, he didn't said anything , pushed her hand lightly on her side and again laid down and closed his eyes..

After some time,

"OUCH!!!"

he again woke up with a jerk, again her hand landed on him this time on his chest'

"Kria???"

He called out shaking her a bit, she didn't stirred but he knew she was only acting

He too acted as if sleeping closing his eyes but as soon as her hand was going to fall on him , he caught it and pulled her towards himself in such a way that Kria was on him, he rolled back and pinned her body below him..

She tried to push him but he held her wrist and pinned it on the bed , she wiggled her legs a bit but Rey trapped hers by his legs..


"Reyansh kya kar rahe ho chodo??"


"acha aur jo tum itni der se kar rahi ho woh??"


"main?? Main kya kar rahi hu??"


"acha jyada bholi mat bano.. tumhara yeh 2 kgs ka haath mere upar aise hi ni bar bar padh raha tha!!"

"Reyansh?? Chodo warna main dadi ko bulaungi!!"

"acha bulao'waise bhi yeh room sound proof hai'"

"sound proof??"

"aur ni toh kya ?? tumhe kya laga?? Martin ne jab hume washroom mein band kiya tha toh tumhari awaz sun kar koi aya kyun nahi??"

Kria made an "O" face seeing which Rey restrained himself from kissing her..

"ab tum puri raat aise hi rehna.."

"Rey tum kitne bhari ho utho'"


"nahh!! Mrs. Singhaniya.. you have to bear the result of waking up sleeping lion"


With this he dug his head in the crook of her neck and shifted slightly aside carefully not to crush her beneath him but not fully leaving her & slept, after few seconds,Kria could feel his hot breath on her neck ..


"arey itni jaldi so gaya' arghh!! He is too heavy to be moved.." she sighed on not getting successful, she too closed her eyes..

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Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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at midnight

Swayam knocked at sharon's door..there was no reply,

"lagta hai so gayi!!" he thought


"but lights toh on hai" he looked at the ground , light was peeking from bottom space between the ground and door, he tried to push the door and bingo!! It opened.. he didn't find Sharon on the bed.


He knocked at the bathroom door but he didn't get any response and door too opened, she was also not there


"shayad balcony mein hogi!!" he moved towards the balcony


He saw her looking at the stars, her hairs were blowing, her face shined in the moonlight, he stood mesmerized by the flawless beauty standing before him..


His trance was broken by shrill voice of his mobile..sharon turned back & looked at him with questioning eyes

Swayam talked with the caller and turned to Sharon

"swayu?? Tum is waqt??kuch kaam tha kya??"

"haan woh kal tum mere sath subah jaldi chalna kale k meeting hai subah subah!!" he said standing beside her and staring at the sky..

Sharon too stared at the sky and asked looking at the shining stars

"swayu!! Abhi raat ke 12 baj rahe hai!!.. tum ab bhi kaam ke bare mein soch rahe ho??tum abhi tak soye kyun nahi??"

"tum bhi toh jag rahi ho.." he said looking ahead

"woh bas neend ni aa rahi.. di ke bina sone ki aadat ni hai na.."

"Sharon tumhe abhi bhi Kria ke saath sone ki aadat hai??" he asked while looking at her as if making fun of her..

Swayu?? Are you making fun of me??" Sharon turned her head towards him asked narrowing her eyes

"are ni baba !! main toh bas!! Chodo yeh sab baate aur batao yaha kya kar rahi ho??"

"kaha na neend ni aa rahi!! Bas yaha acha lag raha hai"

"really??"Swayam asked and added "come on Sharon!! Itna toh tumhe janta hoon tum sirf isliye yaha nahi ho kyunki tum Kria ko miss kar rahi ho, come on out with it.."

"woh.. !!" Sharon looked down

"tum Kria ko miss kar rahi ho na??hmmm.. Sharon ..??" Swayam lifted her chin

Sharon looked at him and nodded in yes

"Sharon Kria yahi par hai , isi ghar mein hai.. dusre kamre mein"


"pata hai but!!"

"tum na bilkul pagal ho…achaa !! chalo ab so jao.."

"but agar mujhe raat ko baat karni hogi toh??"

"Sharon raat ke already 12:00 baj chuke hai aur kitni raat??"

Sharon punched him playfully on his stomach

"arey !! ok ok mai majak kar raha tha"

"but swayu, main nahi kar rahi agar mujhe raat ko baat karni hogi toh??"

"toh tum mujhse keh sakti ho.." Swayam said

"sach mein??"

"haan baba sach mein tum mujhse kuch bhi keh sakti ho"

"u know what tum bhi mujhse kuch bhi keh sakte ho!!"

"what??"

Swayam looked at her confused

"I mean tum he bhi apni dil ki baat kehne ka haq hai,!!"

"matlab??"

"matlab tum agar dada- dadi se apni dil ki baat karoge toh chote ni ho jaoge" Sharon explained


"Sharon main is bare mein baat ni karna chahta"

"but Swayam tum .. I mean apne dil ki baat nahi but at least ek normal behevour toh rakh sakte ho na unke sath??"

"Sharon please main is bare mein…"

"pata hai tum is bare mein baat ni karna chate.. well forget it..acha batao..agar mujhe tumse baat karni ho raat ko kabhi bhi??kisi bhi time pe??toh kar sakti hoon??" Sharon asked trying to change the topic, seeing sudden change in swayam's behavior

"you mean to say , tum sach mein Kria ko raat ke beech mein uthati thi??" Swayam asked unbelievingly

Sharon nodded innocently in yes


"aur woh uth jati hai??"

Sharon again nodded in yes

"you MAD woman!!" Swayam freaked out

"chalo tum chup chap so jaao.." he pulled her by arms and took her inside.

He made her sit on the bed and held her shoulders and made her sleep looking all the while deep into her eyes..

"good night!!" Swayam said

He was about to get up and go but Sharon held his wrist , he sat down near her Sharon too raised a bit and came near her and kissed him on his cheek and said

" goodnight" Sharon said and yawned loudly closing her eyes

Swayam was shocked , he draped blanket on her and left in shock ..he closed the door behind him and blushed a little.He went towards his room with smiling face

He layed on his bed and touched the place where Sharon had kissed him

"paagal" he thought and kept on smiling soon drifted in sweet sleep

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In sharon's room

Sharon opened her eyes when she felt Swayam was out of her room, she kept on smiling on remembering swayam's blushing face and red cheeks


"paagal!! Swayu!!"

She closed her eyes smile playing on her face..

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Next day in morning

@Kriyansh room

As the eventful night got over, sun peeped through the windows, disturbing their sleep...

Rey, being the lazy-bum, tried to hide his face from bright rays... After all who wants to be up so early...In this process, He unknowingly pulled kria close to him & dug his face a lil in the crook of her neck...He was still asleep, until he inhaled her heavenly fragrance...

On sensing something different, his eyes flew open... Just to find their faces millimeters apart..He could feel her rhythmic breathes on his lips; everytime her small rosy lips parted,, he could feel the pleasure...

She was sleeping so calmly.. Her face looked so innocent n beautiful that rey could name her 'sleeping beauty' , he leaned a bit, lost in her trance, but turned his face away as realization hit him... But unknowingly her soft lips brushed over his cheeks ... Making him numb..

He stared at her face.. pecked her cheeks & smiled at himself while caressing her cheeks tenderly...

Kria felt something crawling on her cheeks, lazily opening her eyes, she saw him close... So she get up with a jolt, making him flinch back...

She looked at him with questioning eyes filled with sleep...

"so cute" he thought

"woh mosquito tha tumhare cheeks pe, bas wahi udda raha tha" he faked... What could he tell her afterall...

"hmmm" she looked convinced, & not bothered to fight... "she'll never know who the actual mosquito was & what he did"

he bit back a chukle..

"good morning Kria.."


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"good morning.." she said lazily & rubbed her hands on her eyes to come out of her slumber ,opened her luggage and took a sari out & walked towards washroom...



He grinned, took her pillow, kissed it & fell back on bed holding it, almost embracing it..

"*phew* bach gaya, this morning!! Kria is so cute & innocent... And so soft..." He blushed & chuckled...

After sometime there was a knock on the door, Rey lazily threw blanket off him and get out of the bed, he opened the door and saw dadi standing before him

"woh beta sorry!! Woh main Kria se puchne aayi thi ki woh breakfast mein kya khayegi…" dadi was about to say something but Kria came out of the washroom , with her wet hair, looking at the ground adjusting her sari and whined without noticing dadi in the room


"reyansh dekho tumne kya kiya !! main thik se chal bhi ni pa rahi hu!!my legs are paining"


Hearing her dadi giggled a bit

"ahem !! ahem!!" Rey coughed gaining Kria's attention


Kria looked up & saw dadi and felt awkward

"dadi woh…" she felt short of words

"beta hota hai , I think kal raat kafi achi gujri..!! tum tyaar ho ke aa jana" dadi left giggling

"yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai!!" Kria said to rey

"acha meri wajah se?? Maine kaha tha yeh dialog marne ke liye??"

"aur nahi toh kya tum itne bhaari ho !! kal mujhe saas lene mein problem ho rahi thi.."

Rey giggled a bit but stopped seeing her in angry mode...

He ran towards the washroom…he came outside taking bath but didn't find her .. he quickly got ready and went outside

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Kria paced towards kitchen,

hoping she ain't that late... Knowing as per the indian traditions,

she had to make something sweet for the 1st time...

She spotted dadi near the kitchen & went to take her blessings and wished Martin goodmorning...

"good morning Kria baby" he replied sweetly

"Arre waah Kria, itni jaldi taiyaar bhi ho gyi, achha hai, maine toh Rey se kaha tha ki tumhe aur aram karne de…" dadi said teasing her

Kria blushed a lot

"dadi aap bhi na"


Dadi smiled seeing her blushing

"acha chalo ab tum dinning table mein baitho , mai breakfast bana ke laati hu" Dadi said

"but dadi .. woh..!!" Kria hesitate a bit

"haan bolo beta.."

"Dadima woh ek rasam hoti hai na ki nayi bahu kuch meetha banati hai apni shadi ke pehle din"

"tumhe kuch meetha banana aata hai na..??" dadi asked

"dadi Kria baby toh bahot acha khana banati hai.. sweet dish bhi acha hi banayegi" Martin praised Kria

"ji dadi, toh aapko kya pasand hai meethe me?i'll try " Kria asked sweetly

dadi smiled, seeing her respect & love for their traditions & elders,

she asked her instead of starting on her own...

"gajar ka halwa, bana logi na?"

she asked concerned, as it takes a lot of time in preparation & all...

Kria smiled "ofcourse dadi, I'll try "

"wow gazar ka halwa!! Aaj tak toh sirf aapke hath ka gazar ka halwa khaya hai..kria baby dadi ke hath ka gajar ka halwa tum khaogi na toh bas … mere toh muh mein abhi se paani aa gaya" Martin said dreamingly

"goodmorning everyone!!" Sharon came chirping as usual..

"hey beautiful ladies" Rey came smiling at the same time

Before Sharon and Rey could step inside the kitchen..

"WAIT!! MR. SINGHANIYA..!! AND MISS GHAI!!" Martin said loudly

"do you both see this board??" Martin asked showing them a board in which it was clearly written

"BAN ON REY SINGHANIYA AND SHARON GHAI"

Dadi looked surprised at the board which she didn't noticed earlier

"what is this Martin??" dadi asked surprised



"dadi this a way to stop storm coming into my kitchen.." Martin said proudly

"Dadima dekho na!!" Rey whinned

"Rey Martin and uske kitchen ke mamle main kuch ni bolungi and Martin is right.. tumhara kitchen mein aana matlab ek toofaan ka ana" dadi said taking Martin's side..

"but dadi main toh aa sakti hoon na!!" Sharon asked

Dadi looked at Martin to say something but before that Martin said

"NO!! dadi aap Sharon baby ko ni janti in matters of kitchen she is long lost soul-sister of Rey, if Rey can bring storm them Sharon is not less she can brimg hurricane inside my dear kitchen" Martin said getting horrified

"you are so mean-jerk!!" Rey said getting annoyed

"whatever !!" Martin said carelessly

"di!!" Sharon whined

"no way Sharon!! martin sahi keh raha hai, tum aur Reyansh chalo jao dinning table pe baitho abhi nashta lagta hi hoga.." Kria said

"hadh!! hai…" Sharon stamped her foot

"arghh!! Koi baat nahi Sharon lets go!! Tum mujhe dress select karne mein help karo.. main MARIA KE SAATH DATE PE JA RAHA HOON" Rey said loudly

"argh!! What the hell!! but how can you do that ?? you are married!!" martin argued


"but as handsome as before" rey smirked at him and left from there

Kria started her work, washed carrots & started peeling them...

"Kria, inke liye pheeka nikaal lena, inhe meetha mana hai"

"oh han, don't worry dadi, i'll take care... Dadaji ke liye special halwa"

dadi smiled seeing her care & got impressed with her culinary skills, she was fast, neat n perfect...She just kept on working & didn't take rest in between...

While martin cooked the breakfast, she kept on helping him & even garnished the halwa with chopped dryfruits...

Dadi kissed her forehead, as her expert senses had realized the taste just by its fragrance...


Meanwhile, the whole family gathered on dining table...Martin brought the breakfast along with halwa...

Dadaji was the first one to sense it...

"Arre wah martin, tera bhala ho, bahot dino se talab ho rahi thi gajar ka halwa khane ki, kitni baar isko kaha, par isse to kuch banta hi nhi ab, meri kadar hi nhi hai"

dadaji said pointing at dadi...

"halwa martin ne nhi, Kria bahu ne banaya hai, aur vo bhi mere kehne par, lekin mujhe to tumhari koi fikar hi nhi"

he bit his tongue..

"arre main to mazak kar raha tha, naaraz kyun hoti hai"

he cooed her...

"huh" dadi turned away annoyed..

& gestured martin not to give halwa to him...

Everyone smiled looking at the duo..

"Arre, mujhe bhi toh de, tu bhi iski side ho gya?"

"meetha hai, apni koi fikar hai ki nhi" dadi scolded..




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Before he could protest, Kria brought his special halwa...

"dadaji, ye khayiye, ye sugarfree hai" he pouted..

"trust me dadaji, you'll like it.."

he put a spoonful of halwa in his mouth & realized it was just like the way his wife makes it, the stuff just melted alongwith the tasty dryfruits, moreover it was'nt tasteless,but low sugar...

He smiled & blessed Kria...

Everyone appreciated her & rey was just staring her pretty face,

'her smile enhances her beauty..'


"ahem ahem" dadi faked coughed


dadaji looked at her and remembered something

"oh!! haan... kria bete yeh lo.. khana bahot acha bana hai.. tumhara inaam" he said handing some money to her


"but dadaji main yeh kaise??"


"lelo beta yeh ashirwaad hai , ise na nahi kehte" dadi reasoned


kria looked at rey.. he blinked in yes

kria took it and touched dada-dadi's feet for blessings

"Sharon tum tyaar ho'chale ??" Swayam asked as he finished his breakfast

He didn't get any response, he looked at Sharon who was busy in eating..

Neha nudged Sharon to answer him

"off swayu!! Thoda ruko na" Sharon said pouting

On hearing "swayu!!" from Sharon's mouth , a glass of water slipped from dadaji's hand and broke into pieces..

"SWAYU??" he asked shockingly

"haan woh dadaji main swayum ko swayu bulati hu, isn't it cute??" Sharon asked cutely

"haan haan !! very cute darling!!" dadaji said lovingly still engulping truth

Swayam ignored but was embarrassed for once "Sharon jaldi karo!! We are getting late!!"

"swayu ruko na , hum waise bhi late hai aur thoda late ho jayenge toh kya hoga?? And waise bhi di ne bahot dino baad halwa banaya hai"

"as you wish!!" Swayam said defeated

*CRASH!!*

One more sound of breaking utensil, but this time it was Neha who was standing holding plate in her hand

Martin was like WTH

"mr. Swayam Shekhawat can you be a bit predictable?? Because of you my whole crokery set will be broken" Martin yelled


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The reception was arranged in a hall, with family & all official staff and people were invited as REYANSH SINGHANIYA is not a small name


Media were also called as Rey didn't wanted to get interrupted in his daily routine work because he knew if wouldn't give his interview to media now, they will make his life as well as his family member's life hell by calling them unnecessarily ...

their marriage was full on secret affair, but the reception was a grand occasion...


Luckily, rey & Kria acted normal just like a newly-wed, after all they were already acting in front of dada dadi, so it wasn't difficult for them to fool the media...


He actually didn't need to act, as he was just lost in his better half, who looked angelic in purple evening gown, along with seductive makeup...He did'nt need to look around to check, but he knew all men must be gawking at her...

He himself too, but he had full rights off course...


While swayam seemed to be enjoying a lot, he was with his business associates, he stole glances of sharon & was happy to see her totally lost in dancing freely...

They came from reception hall After biding bye to all the guests, everyone sat on couch, tired from partying & dancing...


"wah!! Party mein kya khana tha warna Martin ke haath ka bekar khana kha ke toh bas..!!"


"kya mera khana bekar??" Martin said agitated


"aur ni toh kya hamesha ladkiyon ki tarah , yeh khao woh mat khao" dada said..


"tumhare kehne ka matlab hum ladkiya humesha chik chik karti hai?" dadi asked

Not oblivious to the situation but carelessly Swayam said swayam said, almost drowning on sofa.. "sharon, plz pani lana"


Sharon hit him on shoulder, "why should I?? . . Tum le kar aao"

"coz tum ladki ho, chalo hamari seva karo" rey said absentmindely..

"what do you mean, reyaansh singhaniya?? . . . Ladki ho, to sab kaam vahi karein?" Kria asked enraged...

Rey gulped, he just teased sharon with 'girl' thing, but did'nt knew what will it lead to..

"nhi, mera vo matlab nhi tha.."

"ofcourse, tum boys to yahi chahte ho, ki girls bas kaam kare, tumhari seva karein, aur tum log maze se tv dekho" Kria said dramatically...

Vicky who was watching tv, immediately turned it off... While neha glared at him...

"VICKY!! Tum bhi aisa hi sochte ho na girls ke bare me?" neha shouted..

"Baby, maine kahan kuch kaha?? Main to girls ki kitni respect karta hun,, See maine toh tv bhi band kar dia" vicky pleaded..

While Kria-rey were fighting, neha too started scolding vicky..

"Swayam, dekho tumhari vajah se ye sab kya ho gya.. Di & jij are fighting... Neha n vicky too... I'll kill you" sharon hissed in anger..

"sorry sharon, mujhe nhi pata tha ki mere pani mangne se itna tufaan aa jayega...

Tum kehti ho to main ab se pani hi nhi peeyunga.. I promise" swayam said holding a little flesh of his throat, swearing & fearing...


Sharon wanted to chuckle at his condition, but kept her face straight & barked again...

"bakwas band karo, aur pani lekar aao... Di ka gussa thanda karna hai, toh kisi boy ko hi kaam karna hoga"


swayam nodded & practically ran to kitchen...

Sharon laughed & looked around...

"oh god, and they call themselves mature.."

swayam came back & saw her face lazily dumped in her palms, her elbows on her knees & looking grogily on others..

'aww, she look so cute..'

he came out of his trance & looked towards all,, even dada dadi were also in quarrel.. Wat to do now?

"ENOUGH!!" swayam shouted...

Everybody stopped fighting & stared at him...

Sharon mouthed a 'thankyou'

He grinned..


"Agar lad lad ke pet bhar gya ho, to sab sone chalein?.. Its getting late"


"Huh . . . Inhi se pucho, neend lene ke liye kaunsa muhurat achha hai, sab kaam to yahin karti hai" rey joked...


While Kria rolled her eyes "yes, hum intelligent hi hote hain: kitchen, home, work.. Sab manage kar sakte hain any problem.."


"han, toh hum bhi kuch kam nhi hai, ek chutki me sab kaam kar sakte hain" Vicky, who was tired of neha's drama, said in full confidence...

"Achha,, toh thik hai, itna ghamand hain to khud hi bana lena khana kal se" dadi intrigued..


"han han, thik hai, tumse toh achha hi bana lenge..." dadaji retorted...

Neha, Kria & dadi laughed...


"so, fine kal ka breakfast aap sab banayenge, aur martin help nhi karega" dadi said.


"han, thik hai, sharon bhi hamari team me, usse bhi nhi aata na khana banana" rey smirked..


"maine kya bigada hai jiju apka?" sharon pouted.

"arey tu chup-chap reh, isi bahane hume kitchen mein entry toh mil jayegi" he winked at sharon


"ok done" neha said with attitude..


"but mujhe khana banana nahi aata" Sharon's face turned low..

"its ok shar, shayad issi bahane tum kuch banana seekh jao" swayam whispered to cheer her up...

Sharon smiled wide seeing his care...






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Edited by chetna_yogini - 12 years ago
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Res. . . .
Mujhe koun rok sakta hai res kerne se. .hehehe. .
Waise i saw dat all res were done. .is liye res karing.
Unres. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Yupiee. . .me 1st. .me 1st. .dhinchkita. .dhinckia. .
Finaly. .finaly. .finaly. .
Aap dono update giving. .yay. .
Awsome update di. . .
Realy superb. . . . . . . . . .
The start was superb. .
Rey doing thngs so dat unka awwkardnes mit jaye. .
Waah. .waah. .
Rey puri raat kriya ke upper soya. .
🤣🤣🤣 KR ka banter and unki anokhi suhaag raat. .
Superb. .
I realy liked d way swayum cares 4 sharon. .aww. .realy cute. .
Rey the mosquito.hahaha. .kriya ka woh dailog infront of dadi. .
🤣🤣🤣
maza aa gayi. .
Haiyee. .yeh reception kab shuru hua aur kab end hua pata bi nahi chala.
🤣🤣🤣
waah. .waah. .
Boys vs girls fight. .
Boys along with sharon khana banayenge. .
🤣🤣🤣
poor martin,i realy feel pity on him in advance.
🤣🤣🤣
Bechara jb apni kitchen ki haalat kharab dekhega toh shock se mar na jaye. .
🤣🤣🤣
realy awsome -dowsome update. . .
M realy excited 4 d nxt update. . .
Plz,is baar mujh jaisi nanhi si jaan pe daya kha-ke jaldi update dena. . .
Update super se bi upper soon. .
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Res till morg 😛 Done
swaRon romace cute ❤️ but short 🥱
or kriyaansh hmmm jldi unsay M love you bulwaao plzzz
or baki sab superb hai poor boys next update mein waat lagna waali hai 🤣
update soon
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Res. . . .
Mujhe koun rok sakta hai res kerne se. .hehehe. .
Waise i saw dat all res were done. .is liye res karing.

😡😡😡 madhuuu 😡😡
or cc kk kya hal chal hmmm tumhare plan kk kya huya 😃😃

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