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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar
Naya Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Aye Dil-e-bekaraar
Mere Dil-e-bekaraar

Udta Hi Firoon In Hawaon Mein Kahin
Ya Main Jhool Jaoon In Ghataon Mein Kahin
Ek Kar Doon Aasmaan Zameen
Kaho Yaaron Kya Karoon Kya Nahin

Usne Baat Ki Kuchh Aise Dhang Se
Sapne De Gaya Vo Hazaaron Range Ke
Reh Jaoon Jaise Main Haar Ke
Aur Choome Vo Mujhe Pyaar Se
Pehla Nasha
Pehla Khumaar

Misunderstanding =/

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago

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Aasmaali

@Aasmaali

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

That was a short one...
Again a looonnnggg wait...

Well loved the update specially the kiss part...
So awesome n superb...
It's so good to read your stories...
Makes me happy...
Please please please, can you give next update soon...
I know you've your own life n busy schedules but still please...
As i really wait like a crazy that when will you update...
It's good that arnav ain't ignored khushi...
Wife!!!! 😕
Hope the dinner will happen n more romance will come soon...
Hope arnav open up himself soon...
Update soon...

Edited by Aasmaali - 12 years ago

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Res😊

----unres----

Superb update!!!

Oh the kiss was beautiful , how they equally wanted each other, and then kissed again after getting air.. How adorable😳

Arnav called to let her know that he didn't run away, much of a relief to Khushi...then he ask her out to dinner, so sweet ... "Picking up Chinese on the way home", so comfortable with each other...

Oh come on, Nihdi, again you left it at a cliff hanger, now we are still " driving ourselves crazy" waiting to know who VSR is?? Arnav can't be married please...he booked a separate room for her,plus he asked Khushi out for dinner why would he do that? he knew that VSR is coming right ?

Poor Khushi what will she be going through now...

Now anxiously waiting the next part...please update soon

Thanks for the email...

Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Res

Enjoy this song till VSR comes and screws us !!😕

Edited : After reading the update i changed my song!

Full comment coming up later !

Loved the kiss by the way !😳

[YOUTUBE]http://youtube.com/watch?v=JVGNNihc3sw[/YOUTUBE]

"Again" Edited :

This update showed Arnav in a new feather free light ...one kiss and i see a change in him !

So i assume the touch has started its gradual process to heal !

The kiss ..N you described so beautifully and just as i was relishing in those words you followed it up with "Again" and it just left me sighing in pleasure literally. And with the lovely repartee that followed it couldn't be more perfect.

Some how i was nervous that Arnav will back off and regret his action that i was literally holding my breath till he called and fixed a date for dinner .

And just as i released my breath we have VSR enter the scene who you have very cleverly still kept a secret!

Already on vigilant for the next update !

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

res 😉

unres 😃

so the sparks flew from both ends and that too in a very natural way as though it was meant to be...😳

the part i liked the most was this

Khushi turned back to the ocean and nodded in agreement, she laced her fingers with his and fell in step with him as they walked back in complete silence, not realizing how much the silence they had found comfort in had changed.

yes silence speaks a language of its own and now that language had just become more personal between them wrapping them together with whatever it had to offer ... the silent music of the heart ... the equation of the silence had indeed changed

while they kissed the ocean roared...indeed ☺️

He noticed the blush that adorned her skin, like the colors of a sunrise across an untouched land.

is she the artist or is he?????😳

when khushi turned towards arnav or towards the ocean she is surrounded on all sides by him😳

She didn't want to have too many expectations, that was one thing that she knew would scare him away.

khushi has always been sensitive to his nature which is well reflected in this pov 😃

"Khushi the reason I called, well...after last night I didn't want you to think that I just left".

how well he understands her 😳

they both r in perfect sync...

not again 😭 the teaser became the cliffhanger 😭 😭 😭 😡 😡 😡

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

Edited by amus5 - 12 years ago

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

those were two kisses...loved it how it changed from a simple soft press to a wild one..never thought the word "again' can have such implications...

who is VSR????? she cant be his wife..otherwise why would he have booked a separate room for her???? whats the connection..tells tells...😉

Edited by Aparamegha - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Nidhi, you broke so many hearts in one go. How ould you do this?

Hope she is his sister. That will servve Vandy right, won't it.

The kissing scene was beautifully written.

I could literally hear the sea waves and the people on the beach.

And Khuhi's first kiss.

You described her feelings so well.

And then how she felt after the kiss.

How she couldn't sleep at night and then wanted to see him in the morning.

How she couldn't understand why he left without a word.

And then czme the invitation to dinner.

And then czme the twist.

Our Vandy made her Grand Entrance.

And comes the misunderstanding.

Waiting for the next part.

Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago

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ARUSHI_IPKKND

@ARUSHI_IPKKND

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

*RESERVED*

*EDITED*

Wonderful update..

Their first kiss was awesome.. Something out the world.. 😉

The fact that Arnav called her up to make it clear that he just din't left her; was really very appreciative of him to think so.. 👏

Thanx for considering that.. 😃

Ah you left us at the cliff hanger.. Urrgghhh.. I just hope she is not his wife.. 😡 Nidhi you are such a tease.. But still I love you and your stories..

Last but not the least.. Thank you for the PM and 🤗

Edited by ARUSHI_IPKKND - 12 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

** Edited**

Nids you are enjoying all these last laughs for quite some time now. I mean how could you leave it at that...leaving us hairan and pareshan and i thought you loved us dammit.

So i guess our wait begins once again...in knowing VSR.

But i sincerely hope that Vandana Singh Raizada is his sister in law or maybe as madhu suggested his 'stepmother' cause i can't see an Arnav kissing khushi and having feelings for her while he is already committed to another person. And i know that you love your Arnav too much to make him do something like that. So counting on your love for Arnav to make everything alright for me. Chaine ki saans at that for me.

"Again" never sounded so sweet and mush filled before.

I loved the way you described the kiss nids...it was too die for. Really you are becoming too hot to handle women...😳

I also loved the little convo that arnav and khushi shared right after the 'kiss', i could so see the smirky raizada stating "My ego thanks you, khushi"

I loved the way you wrote khushi's longing in wanting to see Arnav the next day morning. And just like that a date is also fixed...Wow this Arnav is moving quite fast and maybe the kitchen would be properly utilised quite sooner that we all thought ☺️😉

And then you just leave us hanging there saying hello hi to Vandana singh Raizada.

Kaun hai tell us atleast..paleez.

Can't wait to read the next update nidhi...Mujhe jaldi padna hai...

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

😃

well the young man is definitely hiding something, not sure what. he wouldn't ask her for dinner if he wasn't serious or wanted to talk. this bombshell is gonna interfere with the healing for sure.

i will be positive. if she was his wife he wouldn't have booked a separate room. maybe she is his brother's wife or his stepmom 😆

Edited by segad - 12 years ago