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A_BA

@A_BA

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

I absolutely loved this chapter Nidhi.

Khushi's conversation with her friend was so honestly portrayed...she has never felt this way before and she's confused about her feelings for this enigmatic man. Yes, she's definitely attracted to him, but she's also affected by him, and she doesn't know why.

Arnav is just as equally affected by Khushi. I get that he's a broken man; so he's taking himself out of the equation as he doesn't want to mess with Khushi...but at the end of the day, he can't stay away from her, which is why he is compelled to join her on the beach.

The ease in which he described his past to Khushi shows that he's comfortable around her and that she is someone he can trust.

Definitely was not expecting a kiss, but wow, you incorporated it in the chapter so nicely.

Now you leave us with a cliffhanger of sorts!!! So please update soon!

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

there is a smooth rhythm and flow and a beautiful piece of music is created here which very much mingles with the rabba ve-

but the problem is that there is a cliffhanger in the end as though the rabba ve- has been put in the pause mode 😭 and only nidhi can cancel the pause... 😡

oh pls do continue soon and thanx for the update 😃

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Wow... Good that Arnav shared some personal info with Khushi... You have nicely written the different emotions … Arnav wants to avoid seeing Khushi, but he can not stop himself. Walk on the beach was nice… Thanks for the PM

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Weird as it may sound.. but this is the first time reading this story that i've realised that maybe khushi is as much in need of healing as Arnav is.. his lonliness, aloofness, hard stance and the mask.., show his protective stance for himself.., it shows how much he is fearing to open up.. khushi is doing just the same but wid her own mask of "khushi"..! she opened up to jenny, relised her feelings and now those feelings are playing a havoc on her senses, overwhelming her..!

arnav though may be aloof, but is aware of khuhi's feelings, and more or less he is aware of khushi herself.., he catches a mere diappointment in her eyes.., he senses her emotions..!

he might not be able to give commitment and trust she deserves, but he's already given away a li'lll of his heart to her, when he saw her first..!

its mesmerizing that both of them fell of each other's eyes first.. those eyes only beakon them to be close, n to be together..

this share of arnav's past , i guess is noty the cause of his misery or lonliness, somethng else inside him dats eating him.. and i loved line..""That's just the problem Khushi, telling you that was unbelievably easy"."..

this line was beautiful.. n dats why probably khushi found it difficult to open up in front of jenny..!

and oo my gosh.. he kissed her..!

and i realised that by sharing a piece of his past, just brought them close..:)

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Omygod! They kissed!!! Did not expect that so soon. #NotComplainingThough 😉

What I love about your Khushi is that she acknowledges her feelings for him. And I love she expects things and that she sees possibilities. The walk and conversation along was beach was lovely, and the kiss was a cherry on top. Wonder what will happen next.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Nidhi,

I just dont know how to express my feelings after reading this update..I am not gifted with words so cant write long comments ...all I can say is this update has brought tears to my eyes...there was silence yet so many emotions were being poured out...just simply loved it..👏

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

res

mind blowing episode dii

so finally khushii and arnav realized dey r getting affected

i m in love nw he is trying to avoid her still end up wid her only hehehehe

mannn hee kissed her

i cnt believe he finally kissed her

y did u ended here dii thoda aur cntinue karna tha na

arnav is opening up to khushi and khushi also supporting him to undrstnd him better

bt ek baat hai jo avi tk nai samajh ayi aisa kya hai jo arnav ka bare mein ki woh khushi ki taraf apne kadam nai badha rha hai ..?

wat is dere in his past wich is making d suspense lolll dii plzzz jaldi batao warna hum mar jayenge😭

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Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Amazing update. Beautifuly written.
Khushi watching the lovers and thinking about arnav was well written. She doubts whether she loves him, good. Arnav decided to stay away from her and next moment he was with her. Glad that he shared his past with her.
Thanks 4 pm

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Thanku for d pm ...

a biggg wala thankuuu

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dancydreamer

@dancydreamer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#570

arshi's nightly silent companionship is so beautiful... it speaks of comfort, trust and solace that arnav so desperately seemed to need!

and loved the following lines - very promising lines... 😉
"Thank you for telling me that, I know that couldn't have been easy"

Arnav let go of her hand and cupped her face with both of his, "That's just the problem Khushi, telling you that was unbelievably easy".

Khushi looked at him with confusion in her eyes, "If you want to tell me these things then why are you holding back?"