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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.

The Khushi in your story reminds me of 'Mili', the girl from the movie 'Mili' that also had AB in it. I love that movie btw. Your Khushi is just as adorable. Childlike and full of life.

I am waiting for Arnav's past to be revealed a little to understand his angst better.

The interactions between them have already started and I am eagerly lookin forward to see how the story unfolds. 😊
Edited by IPK007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav is ocean Khushi so beware it may be sometimes cause Tsunami too.Some times it will be help you calm yourselves and sometimes it will cause your all worries...

So recognized her.And still he acted like thats him that indifference make him.
That moment and those brown eyes haunts him...
He wants to get rid of that moment?Doubt there

HE is watching Khushi thoroughly he lost his time when he watched her playing with kids and he attracted too and he noticed Khushi only ignoring him.When she is in trouble he is there with his helping hands...

Khushi can see beyond others eye reached or seems and she is in right path and direction too.
She is going to heal him..Healing touch...

Thanks for mail

Edited by riafna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope her trying to break the ice doesn't backfire on her!! Great chapter, I like how you are developing them individually!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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I'm loving the way you are building the whole plot!! I'm getting more and more curious about Arnav and his past...Khushi seems like very charming and fun loving girl !! Looks like Arnav too finds her very enthusiastic which is why he is getting distanced not to get anything revealed from him..
I hope Khushi does not do anything to know about him before having a bare minimum conversation with him..
Loved your description about the whole beach outlook..
Wonderful update !!! Can't wait to see their next interaction :)
Thanks for the PM :)
Edited by Seethu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
There is something which he wants to forget but cannot do so. What is it?
There is someone who haunts him. Who?
Questions everywhere. I would gladly wait for everything to reveal themselvea.
She is going to talk to him. But I feel that it would complicate the situation more. There would be fight, indifference, ignorance etc. Right??
It was a beautiful update. Thank you for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
As soon as I saw you were updating decided to stay up to read it. It's about 12:30am in NJ and I have work tomorrow but who cares when you are updating your new story :) Yet again Nidhi, you have captured the emotions of both them so well.
The part where Arnav helped her from falling was a total Rabba ve moment :) Arnav is so mysterious in your story and even I am anxious to find out his story to see what pain he is going through.
Loved how Khushi has made it mission to find out what that pain is and I am ready for that adventure. Knowing how well you write it should be amazing one.
Thanks sweetie for an awesome update and good night...can't wait for Finding love tomorrow.
Edited by Hetnjig - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WonderfulnupdAte!
Nice of him to come back to Khushi to help her.
He wanted to talk to her but decided to shut himself off.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Had to read it all over again now... bahut hee achcha update tha!!!! and the song in chapter 2 was really nice😃😃 Arnav helped Khushi and he lifted her up in his arms wow!!!!!! Because iss story ka Arnav kuch zyaada hee silent hain and seems to be a complete introvert compared to the real Arnavji in ipkknd... I felt so because khushi thanked him thrice but he did not even utter a word!!!! i am very curious to know what he hid inside his heart and what that special incident and memory was!!!! the way you explained it imposed a feeling that the memory was a dark one!!!! The way Arnavji is behaving it clearly seems to me that he will not tell it to Khushi so soon but hope is just what we can have so i will hope that Khushi gets to know about it as soon as possible!!!!😃😃 And let me tell you that visualizing the scene, feeling the emotions in it, feeling as if we are present there and watching this live is reflexive to reading THT and FL... It is a part and parcel of your story and the way you write and express it!!!!!! keep it going Nidhi Di!!!!👏 I cannot tell you how eagerly i am waiting for chapter 30 in FL!!!!!! you killing us alive...!!!!👏 Anyways let the love and romance blossom and let the healing touch begin!!!!!!!👏

Edited by barauni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ,superb and mind blowing update Nidhi.
I can't express my feelings with the help of few words,cause I am speechless.

Loved each word,sentence
Emotions and their thoughts .

Waiting for the next part dear,
Please continue soon.

Last but not least, she wants to hold him in het arms.
Arnav wants to go far from all the emotions...
Would love to read Khushi's actions .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg what a beautiful update...so Arnav did remember her from their first meeting...I feel a chemistry happening...I m glad khushi is gonna try to break the ice with Arnav...I just hope Arnav responds and not avoid her...loved it can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)

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