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Posted: 12 years ago
What a beautiful update.. loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chapter
loved it
so arnav is getting attracted to khushi...fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update. So what is Arnav's story. Why is he in so much pain?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved!

Unreserved!

I'm so sorry for unreserving my comment so late. But I won't lie to you, when you said in a note that you won't be updating for sometime, I got a little laid back. I'm extremely sorry for that. I hope whatever problem you had, it's been sorted and I hope your mother is fine now. I'm sorry I didn't know that she is not doing well. I hope she recovers soon and becomes absolutely fit and fine.

Coming to the update, I absolutely loved it. I loved the beginning. You captured the mind of an artist so perfectly, the correct mood and inspiration is always a must for an artist to work. And
when they begin to work their mind, body and soul belong to that piece of art and nothing else. And I also loved the fact that the inspiration for Khushi's painting was Arnav's song. Wow!!

I don't know about Arnav's past, but whatever it is, it must be very haunting and sad because he can't get it out of his mind and he has this uneasy feeling all the time. Also there is always some serious reason as to why a person likes to stay alone.

I loved the way Arnav was looking at Khushi while she was busy in her own happy world, her tinkling laughter brought him out of his sad thoughts, and no doubt Arnav thinks that she is a kid because only kids can be so innocent and full of life, who don't worry about anything in the world. I also liked the fact that he remembered Khushi from his first meeting because how can someone not remember a person like Khushi even if you see her for some seconds. Oh I absolutely loved that part where they both shared an eyelock, and Khushi being so lost in his eyes that she fell down, poor girl. The way he supported her and carried her till the inn was so amazing. I loved it. The way they couldn't take their eyes off of each other, they do share something unusual.

I loved this line,
"Arnav" whispered Khushi, "Deep as the ocean, full of life, yet filled with turbulence".
This so aptly defines who Arnav is. I loved Khushi's little talk with her mom. The way you wrote about her different feelings for him that she failed to comprehend was wonderful! His pain that no one could see was disturbing her mind and heart so deeply! Aww!! And the end was fantastic! I'm extremely excited for their conversation and what Arnav's reaction would be. I loved this part! Great job!

Sorry again for such a late comment. Thank you for the mail. Stay blessed! 😊 😊
Edited by srishti_jain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...loved it...
wonder whats haunting Arnav...hope Khushi manages to reach out to him...
waiting for the next chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update
Wht happend with him ???
Continue soon
Thanks for link
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the picture of the house.
Just how one would have imagined the house to be.
I don't know why, but I have suddenly started taking interest in pictures posted here😉

Arnav thinks Khushi is just a frivolous girl who talks a lot.
Wish he makes the effort to know her. He will be surprised.

Loved the way Khushi analysed his name.
Is she painting his portrait?

What is the matter ith Arnav?
Why is he so sad?
Waiting for you to tell us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update..loved it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update.
What is bothering him to such extent that he is shunning all human contact...I know he has come to stay at the inn to avoid just that but is possible to avoid human contact completely.

Khushi now has taken this decision to befriend him , I hope he does not hurt her...he probably will..with his sharp words.

He is feeling this strange pull towards Khushi and he obviously don't want to feel anything for anyone and to fight his own feelings he can be harsh.

So Khushi has taken time to find the meaning of his name and she feels his pain and knowing Khushi she will now start trying to find the reason behind his pain.

The story is getting interesting, will wait for the next chapter eagerly.
Thanks for the Email.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wanna know more.about his past...khushi is on a mission now

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