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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Awesome update...left me craving for more.

ASR makes an entry and I like the way you are etching out his character slowly. 'A young man with the soul of an old person', I found this line so sad. He must've had gone through a lot in life for his soul to be sapped of all the cheer and joy of youth. Quiet and brooding, he wants to be left alone with whatever hearbreak, he is nursing. That part about mangoes was funny. So his initial impression of Khushi is that she is immature. Maybe a grown up with the soul of a child is exactly what he needs in his colorless life.

Love this song...it added such a poignant air to your update. The Sun setting in the sea and snatches of this song coming from afar...hearttuggingly beautiful setting...Khushi is already haunted by a pair of molten brown eyes, now she is going to be intrigued by this aura of mystery and sadness surrounding their guest and fall really hard for him.

Brilliantly written, loved reading it.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

R.

How much of a reserved person be, Khushi will find a way! =)

for now, his telling her off is bound to get a reaction out of her soon,it seems.

But the facade he is putting for that saddened soul is heart tugging and thats where healing will play its role. Garima recalling those words of his nani really makes me want to hug him. Although he'd tell me off too-that I know. :D

Mango scene is ofcourse,too cute.

That song, heart broken he is.. Got to know the reason.

Greedy for more!

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Mein bhi yahaan

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Khushi getting flustered by the arrogant and rude arnav right from the word GO. 😆

Arnav seems to be a really troubled soul wonder what is keeping him so aloof and cut off from everybody around him.

Don't worry arnav you have truly come to the right place and your tormented soul would get its well deserved solace and healing.😃

Ready to read how arnav and khushi will form the 1st bonds of friendship and the ups and downs they are soon to face...😊

Till the next update.

Liza

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Res😉

---unres---

Happy Mother's Day to you as well!!

Ever since Khushi has met Arnav she has been speechless and somewhat a wreck!

Arnav is being reserved and hope to find out what is troubling him soon..

Eagerly waiting for this journey and see it unfold..

Thanks for the email..

Please update soon...

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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

~Unres~
Nice Update...
Loved It...
Poor Khushi... She can;t even think straight in Arnav's presence... hehehe
Arnav is quite cut-off with everyone...
Eager to know the Reason behind It...

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Happy Mothers Day to you too Nidhi 🤗

Lovely chapter, explosive first time encounter... Looks like Arnav is nursing a broken heart :( Who is it that he is pining away for??? Khushi sure seems the scatterbrained girl she is known to be... Wonder how they will interact more...

Great update Nidhi, waiting for more :)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

That was beautiful and touching. Seems like Arnav is in pain and does not want to let anyone in. But knowing Khushi, she will def break through that. Loved how Garima, didn't get offended but welcomed him and made sure he knew that she was there for anything he needed.

I have been stalking all week waiting for an update...love both of your stories. So glad you decided to write this one :)

BTW Happy Mother's Day!!

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Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Beautiful update.
Garima s so understanding, liked how she tried to make arnav comfortable. Arnav s not that rude, he was trying his best to be patient with khushi during the check-in. Wat s this crazy 4 fruits? Or was he teasing khushi. So khushi s in mood to paint now. When wil she complete drawing arnav's eyes?
Thanks 4 pm