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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Arnav is becoming very close to Khushi...like he can"t breath without her...he just can't focus anymore without her...

Just so eager to know what going to happen...as the days are passing fast...and he may have to leave ...and now lavanya coming too...

What a fab update it was...awesome! It's amazing to picture them bonding together...

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Beautiful update...

Aranv khsuhi playing with kitten n flower petals

Continue soon

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Aaah you make me cry with your flashbacks. The ice cream scenario was so sweet and heartwarming. But you've also piqued my curiosity with what happened when he left Khushi. I don't like it. But I'm so dying to know! I love Dadi and Ranvijay conspiring to bring these two together. Looking forward to the next update!!!! I'm getting greedy. Thanks for the update

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

'who can stop the stupid silly heart from falling in love'.. Indeed! And falling in love it is.

Arnav's emotions have been explained so well. Khushi is adorable and so utterly positive.

I wish A would just let his emotions be the lodestar and follow through.

I couldnt help but wonder if A will leave for london after 3 weeks and whether K will accompany him? Hmmm..

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

I like how you are revealing the past...layer by layer...very thrilling..!

I like how Arnav feels so restless without Kushi...the furball scene was so cute...two adults cooing over kittens...almost brings the image of parents cooing over their babies...Gabbar and Basanti...now this is very unique name for kittens...!

Arnav's flashback to the ice cream wala scene was also by cute.. Your description was very vivid...I could see it...!

Dadi and Ranvijay are playing Cupid...! And Ran Vijay wants Dadi with him...cute with a capital C..!

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

awesome update! I seriously love the scenes between Dadi and Ranvijay. They are so adorable together lol. So Arnav is falling in love with his best friend. It doesn't look like he is going to be able to leave her this time. Can't wait to read the next part!

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

aww stupid silly love..
adorable update.
thank you!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

My stalking skill has faltered .. 😔

Will be back after reading.

Read it last night from phone. So I waited till I logged into the system.

You are the master of layering .. aren't you? Both your characters & the storyline are layered and it is an amazing experience to read through and see you peeling off the layers slowly.

If anyone goes back to read the first few chapters, the difference between Arnav - then & now - is striking yet consistent. I felt the change in him is coming faster than Khushi .. but then again Khushi really did not change, did she? She just .. chose to restrain herself and and as Arnav is "coming back", she too is slowly loosing her hold on the rein. I was reading a statistics yesterday where it claimed that men fall in lover faster than women. 😆 The first thing that came to my mind is this FF. 😆😳

Loved the kitten scene. And Ranvijay is so .. corny .. mm .. no .. cheesy? 😆 Showering flowers on them? Seriously?? 😆😆

Arnav is remembering now how he has stood by her all the while .. how he has made her smile .. and it is cutting through his guilt. So .. the guilt is deeper because he thinks it went wrong becuase of a decision he made? Makes sense now ..

But honestly .. though it was a brilliant chapter all through .. I went to sleep with the last line ..

"Afterall, who could stop the stupid silly heart from falling in love?"

Epic & Eternal. 😊

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago