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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww ……… 😔 iIm late i waited for d update since aftrnn and wanna to cmnt first bt i guess again my day ia bad .. 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was a beautiful chapter. I love how Arnav is so anxious to find her and absolutely uneasy without her.

Khushi's words about dreams are soulful. That entire conversation was deep yet beautiful.

Anjali's fianc still makes me a little uneasy. Can't wait for next chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am getting extremely curious and nervous at the same time wondering what had happened to khushi in the past?

Hope not something very bad.

As usual Fab update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update...I was waiting for it...😊 Somehow I feel that in past someone tried to molest Khushi ???? Waiting for the next update...Hopefully we will get some clues.
Edited by Keenara - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
Arnav is gradually directed towards realizing his feelings...
Well lavanya's entry might stir something in Khushi too...
I loved this Ranvijay's character...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly, the update was absolutely beautiful as always. Secondly, we don't need romance that gives goosebumps in every update coz we are getting those goosebumps from other emotions. You write an incredible story about Arnav and Khushi - their friendship, love, their past, present, dreams, nightmares and most importantly their hopes. That is what makes this ff very special for me. Of course when romance happens it is an added bonus since adds to Arnav and Khushi's already soulful love and connection.

Coming to the chapter

yes, Khushi's survival instinct makes her look at the positive side of life - cherishing and living her memories with Arnav and to derive happiness from them. Arnav needs to and will learn this Khushi I guess and that would do wonders to his tormented soul. However, I'm happy that he realised that Khushi is happy "when he was around her".

About Arnav leaving Khushi on that Fateful day:

no wonder the poor guy is eaten up by guilt. It is like your loved one meeting with an accident when you've left them for a few minutes. It is the survivor's guilt ... that's horrendous.

Relevance of the memory of the ice candy:

Whatever is Khushi's is Arnav's and Arnav knows it too without any doubt. Khushi on the other hand has no such clarity. It is upto Aranv to show, prove and ressure that she means as much to him as he means to her. Frankly, he has not yet begun to do that. He is around her and talking to her but not really doing much in terms of addressing her place in his life. In Khushi's mind, Arnav is leaving after the wedding and she is nothing more than a friend whom he left behind earlier and will do the same again.


The restless Arnav asking his mum about Khushi:

If Naina Raizada didn't understand before, now she should know why Arnav is changing and going back to being her loving son.


Sensual Awareness - when friendship crosses into the love territory:

Hmmm ... the sx talk and awareness albeit with cats :) Ahhh Rach!!!! I'm not a cat person ... am a dog lover. But anyways, am willing like the cats ... anything for Arnav and Khushi.

Tch tch Arnav ... how is Khushi supposed to come to London and why would she dream those dreams if you haven't done anything to show her the special place she has in your heart. Of course she knows that she is your best friend in Mussourie but outside Mussourie, she has no idea about your life, friends or anything else about you

Of course, Arnav is jealous when Khushi hugs Ranvijay. But how come Khushi is comfortabe hugging Ranvijay? Coming from a strata of society where hugging is not common especially with men that do not belong to your family, it does feel strange to me. And finally, Dadi is Arnav and Khushi's and no one else's. If she lives with anyone it has (pretty please) to be with them and their children, so that she can play with her great grand children :)

Another fab one Rach 😃


Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's a beautiful update.
Looks like arnav has started feeling for Khushi.
Loved their closeness.

I liked the way dadi and Ranvijay talks in riddles their are enjoying arnav and Khushi's relationship growing day by day.

Fantastic loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
i absolutely luved d update!!
soo..Arnav knws abt sholay haan, impressive!! :P
dadi n ranvijay r bonding really well!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update, there was so much to digest...the rapid changes in emotion between Arnav and khushi during their conversation. The way they easily got lost in each others presence, just lovely. Arnav's flashbacks are always so informative and beautiful. I'm oh so dreading "The Flashback" more than ever.
I also loved the analogy concerning the moon...it was flawless.

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was beautiful!! your story keeps haunting me😆😆 all time till you put on the next update!!!😛

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