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wow!!! the update was just too good!!! poot khushi always has to suffer because of her class.. arnav is angry? he was the one who left her 15 yrs ago and now, how will khushi trust him to not leave her n go again? he needs to gain the trust.. she has been all trusting and waiting fr his arrival.. whereas, he was pretending to not even remember her.. that would have definitely hurt khushi a lot.. anyways.. just loved the update!! thanks for the surprise 😃

It's hurting her so much to be realistic about the whole situation =/

update???
what the??!!

edited~

what an emotional update...
this chapter traveled around the strong emotion they feel 4 each other...but does not understand the emotion...
i feel so sad 4 khushi...at first i thought that she fears the society...now i understand that she fears being abandoned again...for some reason i'm not liking arnav much r8 now...he is kind of self-centered...he is not trying 2 see the situation frm khushi's point of view...he is drowned in his ocean of guilt...he is trying 2 make amends 2 make himself feel better...2 free himself frm guilt...he should do something 4 khushi 2 make her feel better...like she did many sweet things 4 him...like she saved his books nd waited all those year...instead at the end of the update he gets angry at her nd storms off...khushi felt very bad abt how she is treated in RM...y cant he make her feel better...😕

arnav nd khushi r falling in love with each other...when they realize this i wonder what's gonna happen!...raizada family doesn't see khushi more than a servant...they cannot even imagine her as a part of their family...i hope arhi wont go through a heartbreak...

ps---r gonna post the next update at an unexpected time too?😆
totally loved 2days's surprise...😊

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

😊

Res with a smile

I was kind of in a trance as I was reading the first half. I could visualize the hug .. their body movement .. the fluttering of their closed eyelids .. the silence of the forest. I could sense Khushi's inhibitions & Arnav's dazedness. High on cocaine. Beautifully written.

One hug could change a lot. They have grown up but also it was time to grow in their relationship. Aranv seems to have quickly realized and kind of acknowledged the change. But he is still not getting the gravity of it all which Khushi apparently had reasoned.

I never comment on what I think is to come in the story next. Neither do I predict because I feel that creative liberty comes before everything else. I hope my little feedback help you in some way or at least convey how much I am liking your story. Or do you really want to know where I see this story going? 😛

Thank you for the surprise.

And keep the surprises coming! 😆

PS: I don't know how to address you! Shall I call you .. lava?? 🤔

Congo on the new thread & also very happy on the surprise update. Pls continue to surprise us everyday 😉 ... just kidding I'm not gonna b that greedy for an everyday update although I simply love this FF.

Khushi is right in holding back & speaking up so honestly to Arnav coz its important for him to understand that society n his family just consider her a help & nothing more. He just cant play with her feelings & scoot into hiding after sometime leaving her to face the wrath. No amount of repenting later is gonna heal that innocent girl. He should realise that he has to be by her side & stand up for her against all odds if he wants to take this friendship further.

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Another one so soon ... amazing surprise :)

I live in a country where the net is greatly controlled, so the smiley's are not working all of a sudden. Hence the words ... A big big big hug from me Racheal, for the most wonderful surprise. You do know how to give the baap of all surprises, not only in your stories but the way you live your life it appears. Hmmm, interesting person :) Your partner is/will be one lucky person.

Yes, yes, yes, I'm moving on to the story now ...

It has taken a turn, a wonderful turn at that. It has moved on from the guilt- ridden, anguished friendship tale to a tale ridden with doubts about falling in love with the right/wrong person and all the problems associated with it {How appropriate that you got a new thread now :) }. However, it definitely does not mean, that the problems associated with the previous events are done with and solved. You are going to come back with them and that too with a bang soon enough.

Few things that happened to me while reading this chapter.

Serious dhak, dhak of my heart - when they became painfully aware of each other as man and woman and realized that they are not / cannot be mere childhood friends any more.

A heart burn when Khushi was dismissed as just a servant and Arnav watched helplessly while Khushi walked away.

Helplessness when Khushi is pushing Arnav away emotionally and physically too, coz of their difference in status.

Ver very very sad, when she acts to protect herself from the fear of Arnav abandoning her.

On the whole, this was a brilliant chapter.

i really love your style of writing... this is the first FF of yours i am reading!!!

Originally posted by: coolbakes

i really love your style of writing... this is the first FF of yours i am reading!!!

the feelings are expressed so very real and at times the hurt kindles tears in my eyes... and the longing to have had such a childhood increases with every update of yours!!!

i do hope you come across this comment among your million readers!!!

a sincere thank you from the bottom of my heart to my fav writer!!!

thank you!!

Originally posted by: molten_lava

Net is greatly controlled? wow! is it china?

And yeah, I love surprising people. That's due to my eccentric and highly unpredictable nature. It is good at times, but people have a hard time catching up with my changing wavelengths.

So the next chapter might surprise you even more.