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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
What a pleasant surprise!!!
I had read chapter 9 today morning itself...and now I get to read chapter 10 too 😃
Amazing part...once again...
Poor Khushi...her fears are absolutely justified...Arnav will again leave..and she'll be alone once more... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have been a silent reader of your story all these days, as I was busy with all my personal stuff. But today, after seeing your surprise update, I felt that I was being unfair to a such a wonderful writer. Thank you very much for giving us such a wonderful concept, and mainly for giving so many regular updates. Whenever I see that you have updated the story, my heart dances with joy. Because these days we rarely get to see Arshi/Sarun.

Coming to the story, I don't have words to describe how much I love this story. It's really amazing. I love "Kukku & Annyav" more, than I love Arshi. I can imagine a cute 5 year old Khushi with two coconut trees on her head. Oh, I just love to imagine Kukku.

Coming to today's update, I really thought Khushi would give in and find solace in their embrace. But she didn't. It shows she is more sensible, as to not ruin her future due to emotions. I loved the following lines,

"Fifteen years of desperation and longing had ultimately boiled down to this one moment and when it came alive, she wanted it to last for the next fifteen years.

But she was brought back to the reality by the deep distinct sound of his heart thumping on his chest, making her realise that this was all real."

I felt sad when both of them continued to ignore each other after the moment they shared. Guess everything happens for a reason, right?

It was really funny when Nani said to Mami,

"Arrey Manorma, I doubt the threads are strong enough to hold all that fat around you. Who knows, the gown might burst open when you shake your waist and walk like that. Sari is a safer option."

The light, joyful atmosphere that surrounded the house due to the wedding was well written. But I hated when Mami insulted Khushi saying that she was just a servant. Poor girl, what must have she felt at that moment.

So Arnav went to invite Khushi. I didn't think Khushi would speak out her heart at that moment. But she did. I'm so glad that she opened up without hesitating. But as usual, Arnav stormed away in anger. Wonder what will happen next.

Eagerly waiting for the next update😉 Wonder when would it be

Thanks for penning down such a wonderful story. You are really an awesome writer. Hope you will write more and more stories in the future.

Sorry for being a silent reader all this time. Will comment regularly from today onwards.

Btw, congratulations on reaching the second thread🥳

Update soon😉


Edited by V3Od - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
The cruel class distinction... But it's an unfortunate reality in India..
Dadi being of British sensibility is more liberal than Nani and mami...

But I am quite sure indian households still invite their age old retainers for family occasion...

Khushi is being realistic... Arnav has become emotional... He wants her as a friend... But Khushi realizes...it's not possible...

Bua ji is keeping a 25 year old girl with her... Why is she not trying to marry her off to somebody..
Edited by msin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
congrats on new thread a well as superb chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: msin

The cruel class distinction... But it's an unfortunate reality in India..

Dadi being of British sensibility is more liberal than Nani and mami...

But I am quite sure indian households still invite their age old retainers for family occasion...

Khushi is being realistic... Arnav has become emotional... He wants her as a friend... But Khushi realizes...it's not possible...

Bua ji is keeping a 25 year old girl with her... Why is she not trying to marry her off to somebody..


Last part- good question. I won't say anything. Let my future updates give you your answers. And keep the questions coming. There is a reason why most of the times, the updates are only from Arnav's POV.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
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Congrats on the New Thread...
It's a nice and very practical update... All these class differentiation are very harsh reality... And Khushi being a part of this society is very much aware of it... Her thoughts are rational whereas Arnav is becoming emotional...
Does Buaji or Dadiji knows about Khushi apart from Arnav about what had happened with her??
Edited by blue_jay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Congratulations on the new thread!

What a fabulous update! I loved the emotions swirling around them when they were hugging by the falls. You described Khushi's realization beautifully.

Arnav realizing what his family thinks of Khushi was also important. She may be his "best friend" but they only think of her as a servant. Only Dadi truly cares for her.

Can not wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Congratulations on the new thread! Read all the chapters in one GO :D

Sorry been off IF for a while after mirage so didnt find this! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Loved how he hugged her..
Im hating this nani n mami >_<

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