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Posted: 12 years ago
A trampled butterfly

Reading the title I some ought thought it will be something related to childhood. Because everybody when they were child had been butterfly beautiful, careless, flying flower to flower but as we grew we melt the butteriness and become only like a fly chasing money, power and aimless future.

In the authors quitting or moving to private blog scenario, I lost interest to start reading new ff. yes, I do read some ff and knew the author gave thier word that , they won't move to private blog and they won't abandon thier readers. In this case I saw in the title that you are giving updates regularly, I decided to read it. I have read your mirage, I liked how you gave importance to the side characters, all are important in the story. So a BIG welcome to IF, I am willing to read how this butterfly was trampled and how a warm hand is going to come and hold the trampled butterfly and carries to flower to flower to taste the honey and may be want to know how the butterfly is going to have baby butterflies.

I said I want to see baby butterflies because, till now you are showing that Kushi has faced some pysical trauma, it is not easy to move on from that point, we may try to approach the world, but being a victim of trauma, it will need a lot of support and courage to come out of it and face the world.

Just a doubt, why the thread is not in fan fiction forum, do you opted to continue in Avatars and signature forum?


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Posted: 12 years ago
"he was the King and she was his Queen, even after repeated denial from her side."

hmm... king n queen of old days...

now fightin with thr inner souls to b away frm each

other...

what a contradiction...first arnie want to be away

from khushi...

now khushi want to be away frm him 😛

was buaji talking abt khushi marg

nooo 😲

daadi u r savior for arshi...😊

taking khushi along with him..will reduce the

distance between them😳

arnie being kiddish...poking😲

what the 😲

daadi-ranvijay trying to unite arshi... 😲

the awarkdness btwna rhsi is getting erased slowly😊

the moments in dhaabha was so cute😳


Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ufff finnally now i completed reading in between my works ha ha ha:) :)

and it was awesome i loved the convo B/w tem and also the convo B/W dadi n Vij

Thank u sooo much for updating now will comment after reading it :D
Edited by shreesharamesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avcmyd

A trampled butterfly

Reading the title I some ought thought it will be something related to childhood. Because everybody when they were child had been butterfly beautiful, careless, flying flower to flower but as we grew we melt the butteriness and become only like a fly chasing money, power and aimless future.

In the authors quitting or moving to private blog scenario, I lost interest to start reading new ff. yes, I do read some ff and knew the author gave thier word that , they won't move to private blog and they won't abandon thier readers. In this case I saw in the title that you are giving updates regularly, I decided to read it. I have read your mirage, I liked how you gave importance to the side characters, all are important in the story. So a BIG welcome to IF, I am willing to read how this butterfly was trampled and how a warm hand is going to come and hold the trampled butterfly and carries to flower to flower to taste the honey and may be want to know how the butterfly is going to have baby butterflies.

I said I want to see baby butterflies because, till now you are showing that Kushi has faced some pysical trauma, it is not easy to move on from that point, we may try to approach the world, but being a victim of trauma, it will need a lot of support and courage to come out of it and face the world.

Just a doubt, why the thread is not in fan fiction forum, do you opted to continue in Avatars and signature forum?



First time reader, welcome to my FF. Hope you will like it though it may not exactly go according to how you predict. I like surprising people. That's my specialty.
Yes, I do know how frustrating it is when people move their works to a private blog and that has been a put off for me too. Hence I don't read many FFs however great the writers are. But you can be assured, I won't do any such thing. I write for my entertainment as well are readers like you. And nothing can stop me, not even plaigiarisers from sharing my story with people like you.

There may not exactly be baby butterflies in this story, but you will slowly realise how the butterfly has found alternate means of happiness in the world.

And the Avatar Signature forum thing was a result of a mistake by a Mod. Hopefully, my FF will be back in FF forum soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
again surprise ❤️
Actually I feel bad for Khushi. She waited so long and did everything as arnav is with her.
i dont know what made arnav to forget her and become such a jerk.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres'd on Page 21 😊
Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely!!😃
I was smiling wide reading the Dhaba scene!!😃
Loved it..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another big hug from me Rach!!!! You are truly an angel for keeping us happy with your wonderful surprises and your prompt updates :)

I was laughing and crying through this update but enjoyed the mini emotional roller coaster ride.

Khushi is considering marraige and in true Khushi style, this is to make her bua happy. After all she has given her a life after her parents passed on {My prediction ... I could be wrong ... after all you are the empress of surprises :)}.

I'm glad she has decided to give their friendship or more (have no doubt she is aware that their relationship is more than mere friends now) a chance. Has she decided in her mind to make this her farewell gift for her dear friend Annyav? I would, if I were in her place but of course its a bold move on her part but not surprising considering that Arnav is the most important person in her life, more than her life itself.

Their childhood memories are so simple yet so poignant. They speak of the two individuals that Arnav and Khushi have become. My eyes teared up when I read the part where Khushi goes to Shalini aunty's to eat for both of them. A lifetime would not be enough for Arnav to make up to Khushi, the kind of pain she has gone through, especially the pain that she experienced waiting for Arnav. Arnav is thinking amends but he really doesn't realize the extent to which he needs to make amends for Khushi.

Have a strong feeling that the relationship is gonna get hot hot hot over the next few updates. Look forward to that :)

I agree with the reader avcmyd.

Being New to IF, I had no clue as to what was happening with this pvt blog access etc etc. Well, private blogs are private. If you want readers, you need to go public. In fact one of the first things that attracted me to your ff is your golden rules where you talked about plagiarsers etc. Loved your sense of humour and now you have a loyal reader :)



Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi,
You know I read Mirage because my friend was a big fan of Mirage and she used to irritate me talking about it (she litteraly cried when it ended) so I read it to see what was so special about that fanfiction. And I admit it was a wonderful story. I loved each and every characters. I couldn't stop reading it. It was the first fanfiction I read, but also the first story I read in english.
Some weeks ago, my friend informed me that you were back with another story (You should have seen her face lol)
So as I had some time this week end I thought I'd read it : and I litteraly fell in love with it.
I would have never guessed Mirage and Trampled Butterfly was written by the same person. The plot is completely different yet so attaching.
I feel really sad for Khushi, and what sadden me the more is that she suffered alone, without anyone to support her. I don't think she said anything to her Bua, and Arnav who was her best friend took a flight.
Maybe if Arnav was with her, she would have told him everything.
Talking is very important after a trauma, but Khushi didn't have anyone to talk with.
I love this story more than Mirage, and I think I will become a loyal reader with this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww!
Finally they are being bestfriends!
It was a cute update <3
Waiting for more😊

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