New kriyam os...Updated Second part Pg 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So the os starts from the day before footloose , kria's mom dose know about her and rey relation and is okay with it . She does not know about her dance .Kriyam are hiding something from the whole group .


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You can lie from everyone you want , but your bestfriend can catch your lie
even if the whole world does not understand . This was kriyam's friendship . No secrets
and no lies , just a pure friendship . What happens when swayam finds out about the
biggest lie which kria told him . Will he stand their beside his bestfriend when she needs him
the most or will he walk away from her? Will he still protect her when everyone is just insulting her?
Will he still not let her cry or will he be the reason for her tears? Will he be her friend forever or will this
Pure friendship of kriyam have an abrupt end ? To know more about swayam's decision and kria's lie keep an eye on this os.
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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Part 1

The dazzlers and weaklings were busy with the rehersals , there was just a day left for the footloose eliminations , the two teams were showing their routines to each other . The weaklings chance came , they were dancing when suddenly kria stopped . Swayam went to her .

"Are you fine kria?"

Kria nods , he made her sit down and gave her water .

"Guys , i am tired , please aaj ke liye itna hi theek hain? "

"Kay sure!"

Kria went away , swayam was looking tensed , he felt as if his worst fear was coming true , he did not know whether to believe his heart or his mind , his heart shouted that he should go to kria and ask her again about her health and his mind was stubborn and wanted to believe kria's lie or that was what he thought .

"Guys mein ghar jaa raha hun . Kal milte hain! "

On the other hand...smriti opened the door when kria entered she fell down.

"Kria beta!"

"Maa , paani!"

Smriti made kria get up she was coughing and crying , smriti took her to the couch she saw kria's leg turning blue .

"Tune dance kia?"

Kria nods , smriti moved back , she called for an ambulance , she was taken away and admitted to the icu . Smriti was crying bitterly , she tried to call swayam but he did not pick it up , she called rey .

Rey was in the rehersal hall with everyone except kriyam , when his phone rang , he picked it up .

"Hello reyaansh , voh kria , tum sab sanjeevni hospital aajao abhi! "

"Kria ko kya hua?"

All looked up..

"She is admitted in the icu , please come as soon as possible aur swayam ko inform kar do please! "

"Hum abhi aaye!"

He cuts the call , he was numb.

"Kya hua rey?..what is wrong with kria?"

Sharon asked him...

"Kria icu mein admitted hain!"

"What!"

Everyone shouted , they ran to the car , in car Sharon called swayam's landline .

"Hello?"

"Swayam , Sharon here! Kria ko kuch hogaya hain she is admitted in the icu!"

"What kria icu! I knew it!"

He cuts the call , they reached the hospital , the girls were consoling Smriti , when swayam came , smriti ran to him .

"Tumhe pata than a kria dance kar rahi hain! How could you do this! How could you let her die!"

"Mujhe ussne jhut bola!"

Was all he could say , Smriti looked at him he was quiet and was in tears , the doctor came out .

"She is out of danger! Smriti for god sake this is the third time i am telling you jab tak kria ka operation nahi hota hain don't allow her to do anything jisse usske leg and usske brain par stress pade especially dance!"

"I did not know anything!"

"Iss baar she is alive next time agar voh galti se bhi bach gayi na she'll be paralyzed forever!"

Swayam went in , kria was sitting their looking down . All came to meet her .

"Swayam!"

Swayam did not reply.

"Tumne ek baar bhi apni tablets lit hi kria?"

Kria nods in a no. Swayam raised his hand to slap her but stopped .

"Kal chahe humari team disqualify kyun na hojaaye , tum dance nahi karne waali ho do you get that! Aaj se aur abhi se agar ek baar bhi dance kia tumne toh yeh haath sach mein thapad ke liye hi uthega kria!"

Kria looked down and was going to hug swayam when he moved back.

"I am sorry swayam!"

"Its fine kria!"

He replied coldy , smriti came in.

"Karo tum usse maaf , taaki voh wapas dance kare and khudko iss state mein dale!"

"Mom i promise i wont do this again!"

"Tumhaare promises meine dekh liye kria!"

Kria broke down into tears , swayam pulled her in a soft hug stroking her hair .

"Listen swayam , next time i don't want to see kria dancing do you get that!"

"Yes aunty i do!"

Smriti went , all were confused.

"Mein tumhe console kar raha hun that does not mean i have forgiven you for what you did kria! You have betrayed my trust on you , you lied to me! "

Swayam said this in his mind , but kria heard his unsaid words.

"Mujhse dosti mat todna swayam , i can't live without my bestfriend please swayam , just give me a chance!"

"Its fine kria chup ho jao , you need rest! And get one thing kria , kuch prove karne ke liye don't risk your life!"

He kissed her hair . Kria slept in his arms .

"Kria ko kya hua hain?"

Rey asked in a tensed tone.

"We were in 12th when kria was detected with brain tumor , first stage tha toh recovery ho sakti thi , kria ka operation toh ho gaya tha lekin usske ek hafte baad hi kria met with an accident jiss mein her head and leg got seriously injured tab kria ke leg mein ek nerve mein kuch hogaya jisske wajha se she could not walk for a month and usske recovery ke baad doc ne kaha tha ki ek saal baad hi kria ka leg operate kar payenge as do operations ke baad kria ki body bahot weak hogayi thi . Tab tak kria can not take stress and dance toh bilkul nahi , i allowed kria to dance as she lied to me about her recovery! So guys i am sorry lekin kria wont dance tomorrow!"

All were quiet..they knew how hurt swayam was..the looked at him he was just stroking his bestfriend's hair somehow everyone felt that kria was in this state because of the weakling and dazzling divide , if she would not have been forced to prove her self this would have never happened , they looked at swayam who just had an expression of hurt , he was broken , he was hurt and his trust was broken , all look at each other they knew what they have to do , they have to hate kria to bring swayam and kria's broken friendship back on the right track and for that they will even erase the divide forever.

Bas aaj ke liye itna hi , next update last update hoga uss mein kriyam scenes hi honge!! I promise!!...

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting !!

Love Kriyam's friendship

hope Swayam forgives Kriya soon

Waiting Update soon !!


Edited by cookie_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing intro...
waiting for next part...
thnx for pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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res plz Done
superb 😆
update soon 😆
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum intro..👍🏼
Kriyam r always my fav..❤️
do cont soon..

n do pm me plz..
loved d update...👏👏
n bdw thnks 4 d pm...😃



Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww!!!! itne time baad kriyam se related something nd wo bhi os!!!🥳 Thanksss dear for the intro.!! 😳
it seems quite interesting nd waiting for the os!! plzzz pm me when u uploaded the os of kriyaam.. actually i really loved their frndship so i m l'll extra wala excited😉😳
Nd yes!! Swayam definetly be with her in any trouble bcozzz true frnd hai na!!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome intro
Update next part ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice intro
contine soon n also pm me
😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intersting. I always adore kriyam's friendship.
Waiting to see what happens next do continue soon and pm me.

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