New kriyam os...Updated Second part Pg 10 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Hey ...
Very nice part ..
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Superb update dear!!!šŸ‘
The kriyam bond and their chemistry is such an awww moment for me!!😳
Nd their hug was like cho chweeettt
I just loved it!!!! 😳
Thanks for the pm😊
Nd plzzz update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awww it was such a cute update. I hope Swayam forgives Kriya and they return to be best friends. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
update soon..
waiting eagerly..
do pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
the chapter one was really nice
loved it
do update soon...
n pm me for sure...
eager to read this KRIYAM OS...
my favourite bff's...

P.S. THSNK YOU FOR THE PM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesome part


plz update next part soon

m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pehle update par toh comment kar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice update...waiting 4 2nd part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept... always loved kriyam friendship n miss them now... but ur os s helpful now.. loved d way swayam scolded her n took care of her wen she lied to him abt her health n abt her recovery.. loved d part were kria asking for chance by asking not to break d friendship.. now gang knows wat to do to make kria n swayam's broken friendship fix...waiting for 2nd part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2


The next day , all reached the venue , kria came there with rey in a wheel chair , all were feeling bad seeing their fighter in this state , but one question rang in their mind . "Why did rey pick her up and not swayam? " . They looked at rey , rey understood their confused look and kneeled down to kria.

"I'll be back!".

Kria nods. He came to the group.

"Guys actually ,swayam ko kria se nahi milna tha , issliye he told me to pick her up!"

"That is not good at all rey , agar humein unn dono ko wapas milana hain , we need to make sure that swayam stays with her!"

"Sharon saying right rey!"

Rey sighed and turned to look at kria , how will he tell them , how badly kria had cried when swayam refused to meet her , he looked at vicky and gave him a pleading look , he had to be with her till swayam does not turn up , not because it was swayam's order but cause she was his girlfriend dam it and he had to be with her through thick and thin . Vicky nods and distracted the others , rey went to kria .

"Swayam hates me na?"

"No baatcutter , he is just angry with you!"

"Itna gussa voh kabhi nahi hua hain rey ki voh mujhse milne bhi nahi aaya!"

She was in tears , rey was tensed about her health , he looked at the gate and saw swayam coming , he gave him a pleading look , swayam came there.

"Kria ! "

Kria turned hearing swayam's voice. A small smile came on her lips , he went to her and wiped her tears .

"I thought you hate me!"

She looked down while saying this , the louians sighed , kria hugged swayam , but he was going to hug her back but stopped , he looked away.

"I am sorry kria , but i don't think the things will ever be the same again , i cant afford to loose my bestfriend and shayad i trust you too much to believe all your lies. So now i need to maintain a distance from you , i am sorry kria , i never meant to hurt you but we can't be the same best friends again!"

Swayam closed his eyes as he handed kria the letter in which he had written this all , he kissed her forehead one last time and went to talk to the footloose authorities about their performance . Kria opened the letter , she read it as tears rolled down her soft cheeks , rey took the letter from her hand as she cried slowly in his arms , he read it aloud to the group who had expected this out come .

The weaklings somehow performed and both dazzlers and weaklings were selected , but no one was happy , they looked at kria who faked a smile to them , swayam turned away . Kria was hurt but she knew he was correct somehow .

The next day , all start their mission KRIYAM RE-UNION. Kria entered the college , she was walking again , she reached the gang , they did not look at her and when swayam came putting a 100kg stone on their hearts the started their plan .

"What the hell are you doing here?"

"Kya hua vishakha meine kya kia?"

"You toh doin nothing na kria!"

"Teli wajha se tal hum tisqualify hone wale te!" (Teri wajha se hum kal disqualify hone waale the)

"Abe agar tu khudko sambhal nahi sakti hain toh hum sabke hopes hi kyun badaye!"

"Guys i thought ki kuch nahi hoga!"

"You thought miss.kripa! Lekin hua na! Cause of your stupid stubbornness to dance our college would have been humiliated so badly! Your such a selfish girl!"

Everyone in the group insulted her , she looked at rey , who looked away pretending he was with them . Kria was in tears , she ran , but her legs were too weak to allow her run and she was going to fall but she landed in her best friend's arms . She hugged him with all her might and cried in his arms , he stroked her hair gently , and at that moment he realised what a fool he was being he was going away from her when she needed him the most , he was running away from his duties , he was running away from his best friend his first priority , the person who knew him more than he knew himself , why?. Just cause she lied to him , was their friendship so weak , no it is not as weak as all think . He will be with his best friend even if the whole world goes against her .

"Kria dear rona band karo please sweetheart!"

"Everyone hates me! Even you hate me na!"

"Who said that!"

Swayam pulled her back and cupped her face .

"I can never hate my best friend never! Aur yeh jo idiots hain na , they did this all drama to make me realise your value in my life kria! Your just like a sister to me . Kabhi kabhi badi behen banti hain toh kabhi kabhi choti behen ki tarha harkate karti hain ! I can't live without my bestfriend ! Aur ab i won't give you a single chance to lie to me !"

"You won't leave me alone na?"

"Promise i wont ! "

Kria smiled between her tears and hugged him , all smiled. Swayam pulled her back .

"Why the hell are you standing for so long huh? Chalo lets go to the canteen !"

Kria smiled and swayam took her , the gang came there . Kria was lost she knew that swayam was hurt inside and wanted to do something for him . She thought for some time , but no plan came in her mind , a pout came on her lips , swayam saw that .

"Oh hello madam ji i am not hurt! And you don't need to stress yourself for planning anything! Chup chap baitho aur yeh sandwitch khao!"

Kria looked at him , he blinked his eyes in assurance and kria smiled . Swayam had forgiven her , he somehow understood that kria had got very angry seeing her best friend being insulted by Sharon and rest he knew , so he did not feel hurt anymore .

An hour before kria's operation.

"I am scared swayam!"

"Kuch nahi hoga kria trust me!"

"Pakka?"

"Haan pakka!"

She looked at rey for assurance , but rey was too lost to say anything , he got a deathly glare from swayam so he nods. Kria smiled , she was taken inside .

Outside the O.T

"Meine kria ko toh bol dia tension na le lekin mein kya karun!"

"Swayam chill!"

"Kaise Sharon!"

"Breathe in breathe out. Kria ka operation bahot accha hoga i promise!"

Swayam sighed , he closed his eyes , every second seemed as an hour , everyone was confused whether to be tensed for kria or calm swayam down . They had never seen such a restless swayam , except smriti who had seen this swayam when kria's tumor operation was going on. The doctor came out.

"Doctor kria?"

"She is fine , operation was successful lekin do hafto tak complete bed rest and ek mahine baad se she can dance!"

"Can we meet her?"

"Yes!"

Swayam ran in , he saw kria sleeping and sighed , he held her hand , kria woke and saw him she smiled and hugged him . And the two best friends shed tears of happiness , swayam as kria was fit again and kria as now she was sure that her bestfriend was back.

Here ends my os . Hope you all liked it.

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