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vaishali

@vaishali667

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Oh dear awesome fabulous update precap is little scary plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz dear update soon hat off to u

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-CussTheWorldUp

@-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Oh my god! The precap!! Rey ko kya hua?!! Gosh di!! Please update soon.. Can't wait and do pm me na.. Pleaseee!! Loved this update!

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sonakshigupta

@sonakshigupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

A gr8vstart...plz update soon :)

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Palak

@Freakin_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hellooo..😊

Sorry for th e late update.. wzz bit buzy with d xamzz..🤢

So here's the next part..

Read and comments.. And there's an important note at the end..

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CHAPTER 3[A]

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After steping out from the shower Rey came downstairs while holding his head..

"Kaka' mera sir bahut pain kar raha hai.. aapne medicines dekhi hai kya."

"Rey baba.. aap thik too hai na.."

"Ha mei thik hu.. aap muje medicines de dejiye.."He spoke while sitting down on the stairs .. He was feeling as if he had no strength left inside him..

"Ji.. mei abi lata hu.." Rey didn't heard him and was again lost in all the latest happenings of his life... He was remembering the moments he spent with his friends and all his dances.. His head again started aching so badly.. Suddenly the phone started ringing which broke his trance and the memory lane.

"Aap phone utha lijiye aur muje bata do mei khud le lunga.."Rey said while standing and then coming towards kaka..

"Ha vo medicine uss droor mei hai.."Kaka said while pointing towards the almirah.. and then he picked the phone..

"Kaka.. Rey ghar par hai kya.."

"Nahi.. Rey baba too abi taak nahi aaye hai.."

"Aap ko pata hai kab tak aayenge.."

"Nahi muje.." Suddenly he heard something falling on the ground and looked towards the source of the noise' He saw Rey on the floor..

He at once dropped the receiver and ran towards him shouting..

"Rey baba.. kya hua.. "

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After some time

On hearing The Door Bell Kaka went towards the Door

"betiya.. aap yaha.."

"Kaka Rey kha hai.."

"Vo.. to ghar par nahi.."

"Kaka please mujsei jhooth mat boliye.. Mene phone par sab sun liya tha.. Kha hai Rey.."

"Beta vo aapne room mei aram kar rahe hai.. Unhe bahut tej bhukhar hai. Na doctor kei paas ja rahe hai aur na hi koi dawai le rahe hai.. ab tum hi samjao unhe.."

"Aap chinta mat kariye.. Mei dekhti hu.."Saying so she went upstairs towards Rey's room..

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On hearing the opening of the Door of the Room Rey who was resting on his bed with his eyes closed spoke "Kaka aap Doctor ko call mat kijiye mei thoda rest kar lunga too better feel karunga..Aap please baar baar muje pareshan mat kariye.. Aur kisi ka bhi phone aaye too khe dijiyega ki mei ghar par nahi hu.."

"Aap kab tak sabse issi tarah chupte rahenge Rey.."

On hearing the voice that belongs to the person he least want to see right know he at once sat straight on his bed. Due to this sudden action he again felt dizzy and his headache worsen..

"AAhhaa.."

"Rey aap thik too hai na.."Taani at once went near him and was about to keep her hand on his shoulder.. but Rey jerked away and spoke' "tum yaha kyu aayi ho Taani.."

"Rey.. mei ab aap sei milne bhi.."

"Come on taani.. tum jo chati thi vo hua na.. then why don't you just leave me alone.."Rey again shouted.. All his frustration which had been bottled up inside him from the morning was oozing out and he didn't want her to get hurt due to all this..

"Rey aap k khene ka matlab hai ki aap dance nahi chaodna chate he..Aap nei Dance na karne ka faisla sirf isiiye liya hai because mene aap sei kha the and na ki aap chate the.. .." Taani spoke with surprise but somewhere down she knew that she had actually forced him and really haven't given him any option..She didn't know why but she wanted to hear this from himself...

Rey who was surprised as well on hearing her tried to stand so that he could make her understand that how much SHE and DANCE meant for him.. To make her realize that she had asked him to choose among his heart and soul.. To make her understand that the choice was never his to began with..

But as soon as he stood up he again fall on his bed.. Taani's eyes widened on seeing him falling down on the bed and lying there motionlessly and his eyes fluttering.. slowly closing down.. Tears automatically started falling down from her eyes..

"Rey' Kaka upar aayiye.. Rey aap thik too hai na.. Kaka.. Reyy.." Taani was scared as hell.. She knew she can't live without him.. She knew she can't loose him..

"Please Taani.." He pleaded with whisper so that she would understand him and would leave from there.. "Leave.." Saying so he fall into deep slumber and into the world of unconsciousness''

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IMPORTANT NOTE!!

And guyzz.. An Important Announcement.. : I am really disappointed and upset guyzz.. I send PM's to nearly 60 ppl or more but I don't get that much response for my work.. So i have decided that If I wouldn't be getting enough responses I am gonna finish it in next part since I don't really feel like leaving it in between.. That means I have to cut short some of my Ideas.. So if you are willing to read and if you really like my work please do comments and like the update.. Sorry if this hurted any of you..

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IGNORE GRAMMATIAL ERRORS!!!

Edited by Freakin_girl - 12 years ago