The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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Siya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Already fall in love with this story...
Continue soon

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mehak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

I love how u narated d chapter.. i could visualise everything very well.
i love arnab's character

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Omg! I loved it!!

And what? She's 12 and he's 25??? He was married to her sis first then Khushi, a kid finding solace in a doll! My gawd I cannot cannot believe this! I'm waiting already!

And the character sketch! My gawd! Dude its Ts so update fast! Please! Its wonderful what with the backdrop and all!

Simply mind blowing!

Gimme more!

Cheers

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ashnitaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

Beautifuly written Jenny..i m bengali & love Sharat chandra chattopadhay's novels a lot..he was a beautiful story teller..this story has same old bengali charm that i found in his novel..each of the charectors r beautifuly describe & they r very real..waiting for the next part..please update soon

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arushi vaishnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

Beautifuly written

plss pm me when u update

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angelrosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

this ones an amazing story tooo !!!
i m already in love with this !!! <3

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Meeshaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Amazing start dont hv patience to
wait for 2nd chapter!!!!! thanx for ur wonderful
imaginations but one thng which is bothering me
( why are you calling Arnab) he is our arnav :(

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Beautiful jen.
Each and every word can be visualise the way you wrote.
Khushi, felt sad for her she lost everything, loved her rupa.
Arnav, the way built his character i am already in love with him.
Loved his granny she is so caring and nice to him.
Waiting eagerly for next part.

Edited by ashw99 - 12 years ago